2.3, uncivil. my hand - Class, masters and servants, The imperative at the end, informing Maria he will tell on them, yet again highlights Malvolio’s proud nature. This threat is yet again quite bizarre, as normally ladies-in-waiting were noble, and here he is brazenly attacking her. Perhaps this ill treatment of his superiors is a kind of overcompensation for his lack of class.
Mistress Mary, if you prized prized my lady’s favour at anything more than contempt, you would not give means for this uncivil rule. She shall know of it, by this hand. (2.3.108-110)
2.5, strange - Class, masters and servants, self-deception, His willingness to shed this façade after realising he can get what he wants shows his self-deception. Sibilance emphasises Malvolio’s delusion, the hissing sounds almost like sounds of disapproval against him wearing these, but he has tricked himself so much he ignores them subconsciously.
I will be strange, stout, in yellow stockings, and cross-gartered
3.4, adheres - Madness, self-deception, love and desire, Malvolio’s delusion peaks here, as he tricks himself into thinking that Olivia sending Sir Toby is a hint to the letter. This self-deception shows, quite exceptionally, how love, even self-love, can drive people to madness as they take the slightest actions as signs of reciprocation.
The diacope of scruple → he has to constantly repeat it to himself, as if he has to work hard to convince himself
Why, everything adheres together, that that no dram of a scruple, a scruple of a scruple, no obstacle or unsafe circumstance – what can be said? (3.4.72-76)
3.4, hang, element - Class, masters and servants, self-deception, self-love, Malvolio’s bitter response to the mocking concerns of the ‘lower class’ after Olivia thinks he has gone mad. He talks down to them like they are fools, when he is the one who looks a fool dressed in his yellow stockings Olivia.
Go hang yourselves all. You are idle, shallow things. I am not of your element.
4.2, errest. Egyptians – Madness, In the revellers attempt to trick Malvolio, Feste dresses up as ‘Sir Topas’. He attempts to gaslight Malvolio. Even through the gaslighting, Malvolio digs his feet into the sand, refusing to believe he is mad, further showing how his stubbornness.
Biblical allusion - book of Exodus, egyptian plagues. Emphasises how hard Feste tries to trick Malvolio, even referencing sacred texts
(Feste as Sir Topas): Madman, thou errest. I say there is no darkness but ignorance, in which thou art more puzzled than the Egyptians in their fog.(4.2.39-42)
2.5, m! - Yet again, Malvolio’s thirst for a higher position in society posits him for ridicule. He serves as a character to show the desperation that unrequited love can fuel, but also how love can cause you to change who you are just to appease someone else.
“M”—Malvolio. “M”—why, that begins my name.
2.3, recover, foul - Love and desire, Sir Andrew claims that if he fails to court Olivia, that he will be in financial trouble. Here, Shakespeare shows how love can push people to do so many irresponsible things, including engaging in a foolish duel and jeopardising one’s livelihood. Sir Toby’s refrain shows his incessant badgering and only caring about money, blatantly ignoring Sir Andrew’s troubles.
Sir Toby: Thou hadsnt need send for more money.
Sir Andrew: If I cannot recover your niece, I am a foul way out.
Sir Toby: Send for money, knight. If thou hast her not i' the end, call me “Cut.” (2.3.167)
2.5, wench, device - The repetition of the word “this” dehumanises and objectifies Maria down to an object and the sexist and disrespectful connotations around the word wench (a prostitute) further emphasises that even by being noble herself, woman are still treated as less than, giving reason for Viola deciding to be portrayed as a eunuch.
“I could marry this wench for this device”
3.4, between, prospect - The repeated use of the word “can” depicts Malvolio’s desperation for love to the audience but the repeated use of personal pronouns alludes to the fact that Malvolio’s love is selfish love one where he is the one that benefits. Malvolio’s selfish love is further enforced to the audience through the use of the word prospect, the word prospect has denotations of possibilities and opportunities showing the audience this “love” Malvolio has for Olivia is only an opportunity for him to gain higher social status.
“Nothing that can be, can come between me and the full prospect of my hopes.”