creative writing

Night has…. the horizon…. The … with a …

Night has conquered the horizon slashing the skies with a blend of charcoal 

Darkness .. like… until it … across the city… the light

Darkness crept in like a thief stealing the light until it hung as heavy as a blanket across the city suffocating the light

only the… streetlight… . It was …

only the weak thin glow of the streetlights fought black the gloom. It was futile

The night would …

The night would always be the winner

The moon … through the … above in a …

The moon soaked through the clouds above in a luminous smear

… of stars … and …, unaware of ….

smattering of stars wink and dance, unaware of what is to come

Moonlight … through casting .. as the …

Moonlight streams through casting a ballet as the leaves dance

The light … through the … splintering into a … of colour and heat

The light fractured through the stained glass splintering into a kaleidoscopic daggers of colour and heat

A … of the … cascaded all around the …

A sweet scent of the moist morning dew cascaded all around the sublime forest 

The smell of … flowers … the air

The small of fresh flowers permeates the air

The …of rotting wood and… was enough to … into … : … and …

The putrid stench of rotting wood and carcasses was enough to cause my stomach to coil into a serpent: vicious and forceful

An impenetrable blanket of odours cascaded across the sky obscuring the moon and stars leaving me stranded in a sisyphean darkness

An impenetrable blanket of odours cascaded across the sky obscuring the moon and stars leaving me stranded in a sisyphean darkness

An… of … cascaded across the sky … the moon and stars leaving me stranded in a …

An impenetrable blanket of odours cascaded across the sky obscuring the moon and stars leaving me stranded in a sisyphean darkness

The roofs were.. with a … as though the structure itself had been… in… and …

The roofs were encrusted with a grotesque palimpsest of rancid flesh as though the structure itself had been consecrated in decay and forgotten rites

3 words to describe heat

Sweltering. Searing. Unbearable

The Night air was …

The Night air was bitingly cold

… which … even the most … clothing

chill wind which penetrated even the most durable clothing

Smoke … and fog …

Smoke slithers and fog thickens

Fog … to the earth like a …, … sound and … form.

Fog clung to the earth like a shroud, muffling sound and distorting form

The trees …their …

The trees thrust their skeletal arms

The trees Like … … me or… and … for …

The trees like soldiers encircle me or surrendering and imploring for sustenance

The sun, a …

The sun, a wicked tyrant 

There was an … silence … in the air

There was an eerie silence hanging in the air

The kind of … that …, The.. from which …. Not a … was to be heard.

The kind of quiet that makes man uneasy, The kind from which no good can come. 

Not a sound was to be heard.

The silence was …, but … - an … of …and …

The silence was not empty, but cacophonous - an orchestra of spectral echoes and unseen dread

The clock ticked … and….

The clock ticked slowly and menacingly  

The … hour approached

The witching hour approached

… surged like …,  like … caught in a …

Grief surged like a tide dragging me under like a vessel caught in a merciless tempest

Her words were …, each syllable a …

Her words were laced with venomous poise, each syllable a meticulously sharpened blade

Grief … within him … into a … of sorrow

Grief ossified within him calcifying into a permanent architecture of sorrow

Beneath his … seethed a … of …

Beneath his veneer of composure seethed a hurricane of unspoken desperation

Her thoughts … in the expanse of …, decaying in …

Her thoughts festered in the expanse of his mind, decaying in stagnant introspection

… washed through her and… her … immediately

exhilaration wasehd througher and thawed her chilled flesh immediately

….fear intensely …

insurmountable fear intensely crushes down on me

.. surfed through my …

panic surged through my veins

… of dread … through me

talons of dread rake through me

my heart was …

my heart was a rapid staccato

my heart … in my …

my heart catapults in my chest

my heart was a …, … into my ribcage

my heart was a pendelum, slamming into my ribcage

a … of... And.. That … eachother

A maze of twisting and angular branches that swarmed eachother

.O flickered.. Across the.. Their … into …

Shadows flickered across the abandoneddecayingwalls their shape morphing into menacing forms

Mountains + fog

Mountains grapple to be seen intermingled with dense fog rarely showing their peaks

Snow

Icy pellets batter me, an unwavering opponent

Wind

Wind whistles whisper in worrying tales

Gravestones

Stand like teeth threatening to

Death

The realisation of my death floods me definitely foreboding

Storm clouds

Roll over the mountains carrying the latest infantry of ice

Hard snow

Pearl while bullets ricochet with numbing sharpness

Heat

Pulses, angryclings to everybody, thing life

Engine

Slow continuous drone of the dirty

Billboards

Blinding neon lights pierce through my eyes

Cars

Growled furiously

Sunset x2

Transfixed by facade of hope taunting me. The sun retreats in a facade have of manipulative colour which conceal it's intentions

Techniques in question 3

Sentence lengths ellipses openings rhetorical questions shifts in focus time (flashbacks) tenses perspectives tone dialogue cyclical in media’s resjuxtapostion narrative climax

Effect sentence length and elipses

Increase or decrease pace

Rhetorical questions

Questions and engages reader

Shifts focus

Overwhelm or distract or emphasises its significance

Flashback

Feel more connected and understand more (in their thoughts or memory )

Shift in Tone

Dramatic and in congradt = reflect on why it changed

Dialogue

Insight and focus on other characters

Cyclical

Monotony or emphasises significance

Media’s res

Engage

Important in question four

Effect on reader 3 WWHW different parts of the statement or ways to agree