Eat Me - Patience Agbabi FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Dramatic monologue
- Alliteration, assonance, repetition = excess
- Language choices = appearance of her body
- Rhyme/half-rhyme ABA = sense of being trapped
An Easy Passage - Julia Copus FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Free continuous, enjambement = speed of life from adolescence to adulthood
- Question comes half way through = balance the poem
- Beginning and end = physical beauty and transition of the girl
To My Nine-Year-Old Self - Helen Dunmore FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Uneven stanzas = ebb and flow of memory/emotion
- Stanza 3 = climax of relationship
- As the personas detach, the stanzas get shorter
- Enjambement = energy of the child, constant activity, passage of time
- Use of tenses: past and present, even within tenses
Material - Ros Barber FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Regular rhyme = constraint of formal era, desire to be like her mother
- Iambic tetrameter = fluid rhythm, coming to terms with grief?
- Each stanza is end stopped/complete, except stanza 5, where narrator is lost in memories
Effects - Alan Jenkins FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Dramatic monologue = personal, reflective
- Enjambement throughout = unstoppable flow of emotion, coming to terms with mother's death
- One long stanza = no time to comprehend
- Irregular rhyme, scattered couplets = moments he can make sense of
- Rhyming tercets = finality despite sense of incompleteness (chaos of illness is over, but not for the narrator)
A Minor Role - UA Fanthorpe FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Varying stanza length = illness is unpredictable
- Stanzas become shorter = breaking away from listing daily duties
- Euphemism and false cheerfulness = social pressure to conceal illness
- Imperatives = control needed to cope with suffering and sustain social pressure
- Present continuous verbs = relentless demands of illness
- Extended theatre metaphor
On Her Blindness - Adam Thorpe FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Gaps between stanzas = gaps in mother's life, disorientating the reader
- Enjambement = difficult to follow, continuity of pain
- Final line = unresolved? Out of context, like a statement - a conviction of hope?
Genetics - Sinéad Morrissey FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Villanelle structure - 5 tercets followed by a quatrain
- Half-rhyme = parent relationship connected through the narrator - the past but not through the present
- Iambic meter = a sense of drive, continuity, certainty of science and DNA
- Extra last line = creation of a new person; links to the first stanza - hope for a better relationship than the one with her parents?
Giuseppe - Roderick Ford FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Irregular stanzas = unpredictability of war
- Each stanza = a section of the story, forces reader to engage with each step
- No rhyme = cannot be swept up/lost in it
- Personal narrative = challenging reader's conscience
The Lammas Hireling - Ian Duhig FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Regular stanzas = contrast the experience the poem describes
- Iambic pentameter = the farmer's voice
- Monosyllabic words/colloquialisms = lack of understanding farmer has of the situation
- Antitheses = ambiguity of the story
The Gun - Vicki Feaver FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Each stanza's opening sentence builds violence
- Enjambement = pace, emphasises important ideas
- Single sentence stanzas = statements of fact
- Adverbial time markers = advancing narrative, escalating violence
- Quietly domestic imagery woven with violence
- Alliteration + (half-)rhyme = sense of pleasure
Chainsaw Versus the Pampas Grass - Simon Armitage FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Free verse
- Longer stanzas = hard work, shot stanzas = effortless triumph of the pampas grass
- Cyclical structure = nature + chainsaw's uselessness
- Shorter sentences, cliches + colloquialisms = narrator's complacency
- Lyrical + poetic language = pampas grass
History - John Burnside FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Fragmented structure = erratic, confused thoughts
- Disjointed - uncertain of what's to come
- Occasional moments of regular structure and iambic pentameter = attempt to make sense of what happened
- Kite motif = cyclical, continuity of life
- Full stop at the end = trying to come to a resolutio
Please Hold - Ciaran O'Driscoll FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Overlapping voices with the dramatic monologue of the narrator = narrator's lack of control
- Two long stanzas = monotony, never-ending
- Repetition = futility, endlessness
- Form: a diatribe
- No regular rhyme or rhythm = mimics natural speech, narrator's fears of turbulent/unpredictable future
The Furthest Distances I've Travelled - Leonita Flynn FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Enjambment = propels the poem, mimics freedom and spontaneity
- Dramatic monologue
- Consists of six sentences; most long, some v short = shorter sentences convey knowledge
- Rhyming couplets - some feel forced = challenge of keeping up with appearances
The Deliverer - Tishani Doshi FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Casual, blunt tone = normality of atrocities
- Stanzas split by time/place zones = multiple perspectives
- Final, single-line stanza = cyclical, return to oppression of women
- Title: Birth mother? Woman bringing the baby to America? Delivery of a parcel? Deliverer from evil? Women needing to be delivered from infanticide?
Out of the Bag - Seamus Heaney FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Enjambment and caesura
- Multiple view points: Child Heaney, 16-year-old Heaney, Adult Heaney, classical allusions
From the Journal of a Disappointed Man - Andrew Motion FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Regular four-line stanzas = the dull rhythm of the events
- Simplistic language for the workmen vs the speaker's more eloquent thoughts
- Dramatic monologue - plays with structure
- No rhyme = like a real journal
Look We Have Coming to Dover - Daljit Nagra FORM AND STRUCTURE
- Hybrid of standard and non-standard English = plays with language and identity
- First line of each stanza is shorter, summarises the rest of the stanza
- Nouns becoming verbs
- Colloquial language = subversion, playful tone