What person is it written in?
First
What does it describe?
A harrowing experience in the trenches focusing on the speakers traumatic encounter with a fellow soldier who is severely injured
What is a sentry?
A solider who guards a place by standing at its entrance
Role of observation
Where was it written?
Craig Lockhart
What is the tone? And what is the effect?
Informal and colloquial
Effect: shows it is a everyday occurrence, we feel confided in
Examples of colloquialism
āBocheā
āSending a scout to beg a stretcher somewhereā
āWhizz bangsā
āCrumpsā
Religious imagery examples
āGave us hellā
āSnuffing the candlesā
Menacing nature of Germans
āAnd he knew, and gave us hell, for shell on frantic shellā
āBut one found our door at lastā
Relentlessness of war
for shell on frantic shellā
āKept slush waist high, that rising hour by hourā
āBut one found our door at lastā
āBut I forgot him thereā
Danger of war
āRain, guttering down in waterfalls of slime, Kept slush waist high that rising hour by hourā
āSnuffing the candlesā
Inescapable nature of war
āChocked up the steps too thick with clay to climbā
Duty
āBut I forgot him thereā
In posting next for duty
Conditions of war
āAnd the smell of men whoād lived there years and left their curse in the den, if not their corpsesā¦ā
Physical suffering
āO sir, my eyes - Iām blind - Iām blind, Iām blind!ā
Ro3, frantic tone
Fragmented speech
Exclamation
He is distraught!
āHe sobbedā
Zoom out
āThose other wretches, how they bled and spewedā
Shows the collective suffering of everyone
This pathos evoked previously form the sentry is expanded
Dehumanisation of soldiers
āThere we herded from the blastā - zoomorphism
āThen came the sentryās body; then his rifle, handles of old boche bombsā
āWe dredged it up, for dead, until he whinedā
ā sending a scout to beg a stretcher somewhereā
āThose other wretchesā
āHerdedā
Dehumanisation, zoomorphism
Controlled
Comradeship - they have assembled to protect each other
due to them being controlled and dehumanised, something good came from bad thing!
Comradeship
āThere we herded from the blastā
āCoaxing, I held a flame against his lids and said if he could see the least blurred light he was not blind; in time heād get alrightā
Hope
āSnuffing the candlesā - lack of hope
āBut ours had long died outā
āHeld a flame against his lidsā
psychological suffering
āI try not to remember these thingsā
āWatches my dreams stillā
āTo that sentryās moans and jumps, and the wild chattering of his broken teethā
āRenewed most horriblyā
āBut ours had long died outā
loss of morale
Loss of hope
Foreshadows death
Dichotomy = mental turmoil
Eye Imagery
āEyeballs, huge bulged like squidāsā
āBuffeting eyes and breathā
āO sir, my eyes - Iām blind - Iām blind, Iām blind!ā