“there once was a country …”
links to themes: HUMAN POWER AND CORRUPTION
Poem utilises temporal deixis (use of language to refer to the time an event took place)
Use of this technique from the onset of the poem introduces an infantile quality to the narration, also utilising a fantastical tone to do this
Links to a wider romanticisation of the idealism of children, innocence still intact
Ellipses utilises to enhance the youthful nature of the narrator
Ellipses aids with supporting the spontaneous, thought-like flow of the locution in the poem
“it may be at war, it may be sick with tyrants”
links to themes: HUMAN POWER AND CORRUPTION
The prolocutor sees flaws in their home town as hypothetical
This could link to a sense of patriotism but also a blatant lack of knowledge, reminiscent of a child shielded by their guardians from harmful media
“I have no passport”
links to themes: HUMAN POWER AND CORRUPTION
The poet introduces the sorrow they feel towards man-made borders, their ostracising nature revealing the inherent cruel and nihilistic nature of human society to impressionable children
they accuse me […] they accuse me”
links to themes: HUMAN POWER AND CORRUPTION
Use of emphatic repetition demonstrates the constant persecution the narrator endures in their new home
Repetition and use of the plural yet separated subject pronoun "they" creates and accusatory and aggressive tone, both towards the prolocutor and from the prolocutor, the latter being a defence
This links to the wider themes of segregation and marginalisation
structure
the emigreé
the = english
emigreé = french
dual culture
emigreé being in feminine form relates the poem to experiences of the poet
free verse
emphasises the disjointed, stream of thought - infantile
utilises temporal deixis
introduces an infantile tone to the prolocutor
last stanza = narrator perspective on new city
Rumens utilises enjambment to separate the last stanza from the oppressive nature of the previous rigid structures
symbolises the freedom that can be found within oppression
contains caesura and free verse to enhance the chaos prevalent within the narrator’s psyche
epistrophe
motif of sunlight