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Extended Metaphor- Assisi

Extended Metaphor- Assisi

Tourists as chickens

“Clucking contently”

“Fluttered”

Extended Metaphor- Aunt Julia

Aunt Julia as the elements

“She was buckets”

“She was winds pouring wetly”

Extended Metaphor- Brooklyn Cop

The cop as a gorilla, the tissue being the thing holding peace together.

“He is a Gorilla”

“Gorilla with a nightstick”

“The thin tissue over violence”

“Should the tissue tear”

Extended Metaphor- Hotel Room 12th Floor

Midnight as being this evil darkness

“Midnight has come in”

“no stockades/ can keep the midnight out”

Sound Techniques- Assisi

“Said, Grazie, in a voice as sweet as a childs”

“Clucking contently”

Sound techniques- Aunt Julia

“Aunt Julia spoke Gaelic”

“Silence”

“Seagulls voice”

Sound Techniques- Brooklyn Cop

“‘Hiya, honey”

“Pheobe’s Whamburger”

Sound Techniques- Hotel Room 12th Floor

“Wildest of warwhoops”

“Police cars and Ambulances racing”

“The harsh screaming”

Contrast- Assisi

“Outside the three tiers of churches” “The ruined temple”

“Brother of the poor”

Contrast- Aunt Julia

“Absolute darkness” “Absolute black”

“She wore mens boots”

Contrast- Brooklyn Cop

“He hoped it he truly hoped it” “Gorilla with a nightstick”

“Thin tissue over violence”

Contrast- Hotel Room 12th Floor

“A radio and a television set” “Police cars and Ambulances racing”

“I watched from here” “Uncivilized darkness”

Relationships- Assisi

The Church & Beggar Priest & Tourists Tourists & Beggar

“Outside”

“Fluttered after him”

“Who had passed/ the ruined temple”

Relationships- Aunt Julia

MacCaig & Julia Aunt Julia & Nature

“I could not answer her”

“Welcoming”

“She was… She was… She was”

Relationships- Brooklyn Cop

Cop & Wife Cop & Victims

“See you babe”

“‘Hiya honey’”

“Who would be… his victims”

Relationships- Hotel Room 12th Floor

Midnight & Death

Symbolism- Assisi

Church of St. Francis for him, Ruined temple

“Three tiers of churches” “Brother of the poor”

“The ruined temple”

Symbolism- Aunt Julia

Earth (Aunt Julia)

“She was buckets”

“She was winds pouring wetly”

“With a seagull’s voice”

Symbolism- Brooklyn Cop

Gorilla, Tissue

“He is a Gorilla”

“Should the tissue tear”

Symbolism- Hotel Room 12th Floor

Midnight, Wild West

“Midnight has come in”

“No stockades/ can keep the midnight out”

“Shot at”

“Wildest of warwhoops”