Grammar Mistakes

I felt the edge to push things to the following day

I felt the urge to push things to the following day (Word Choice)

I tried my best to do majority of the things I had to

I tried my best to do the majority of the things I had to (Missing Article)

it seemed her mum appreciated it

it seemed like her mum appreciated it (Missing Conjunction)

I had to go with Drake even though I felt we put him in a difficult position

I had to go with Drake although I felt it put him in a difficult position (Repetitive Conjunction)

I ended up giving him 300 cedis for appreciation

I ended up giving him 300 cedis as a token of appreciation (Idiomatic Expression)

it feels like a weight has been lifted off my shoulder

it feels like a weight has been lifted off my shoulders (Idiom Correction)

giving me the freewill to give to who deserves it

giving me the free will to give to those who deserves it (Spelling)

I felt some type of way but tried not to think about it too much

I felt a bit upset but tried not to think about it too much (Informal Phrasing)

And tried to put on a good show like I always do.

I also tried to put on a good show like I always do. (Sentence Fragment)

Seated in the car. The dusty road, the AC not working.

I sat in the car on a dusty road where the AC was not working. (Sentence Fragments)

I kept saying,”this job e know easy oo, this job till we got to the place.

I kept saying, 'this job is not easy,' until we got to the place. (Informal Phrasing/Run-on)

I feel everywhere is dirty and I try to shake off that feeling for a while.

I feel like everywhere is dirty, so I tried to shake off 그 feeling. (Conjunction/Tense Consistency)

Later I brought up the black and white idea .

Later, I brought up the black and white idea. (Punctuation)

My dad called me to come and asked for a loan. Of 2000 cedis.

My dad called me to ask for a loan of 2000 cedis. (Sentence Fragment/Structure)

I'm also supporting the family in a little way I can.

I am also supporting the family in any small way I can. (Idiomatic Expression)

And having a meeting, I try to speak as professional as I can.

During the meeting, I tried to speak as professionally as I could. (Adverb Usage/Sentence Structure)

HK made it clear that he cannot get as a car,

HK made it clear that he could not get us a car (Typo/Tense)

but the option I was given wasn't sounding too right for me.

but the option I was offered didn't sound right to me. (Word Choice/Tense)

He passed some statement that didn't sit well with me,

He made a statement that did not sit well with me. (Idiomatic Expression)

I don’t know but I’m gradually beginning to loose hope in Christianity.

I don’t know, but I’m gradually beginning to lose hope in Christianity. (Spelling/Punctuation)

Somewhere in my heart I still believe that there’s God

Somewhere in my heart, I still believe that there is a God (Punctuation/Missing Article)

wash all our sins.

wash away all our sins. (Idiomatic Expression)

we’re born with sin to the stand that

we’re born with sin to the extent that (Word Choice/Idiom)

if a child is born today and isn’t born again and dies immediately goes straight to hell.

if a child who is born today and isn’t born again dies immediately, they go straight to hell. (Sentence Structure/Punctuation)

That’s the part where you loose me.

That’s the part where you lose me. (Spelling)

I feel I’m trying to let go off a lot of this year

I feel I’m trying to let go of a lot this year (Preposition/Spelling)

And I trying to take out the junk out my routine also

I am also trying to take the junk out of my routine (Sentence Fragment/Preposition)

so I’m just focused on the most important things and be consistent all through the year.

so I’m just focused on the most important things and being consistent throughout the year. (Parallel Structure/Tense Consistency)

With my routine finally minimized and no more strict

With my routine finally minimised and no longer strict (Comparative Structure)

I found myself going through the day with ease and not feeling of guilt

I found myself going through the day with ease and without any feeling of guilt (Preposition Choice)

One thing I was also proud of is the energy I put in when I was working out

One thing I was also proud of was the energy I put in while working out (Tense Consistency)

I’ve somewhat finished the verse two of “give man head” song

I’ve somewhat finished verse two of the “Give Man Head” song (Word Order)

I wasn’t really feeling the verse so I’ll sleep on it

I wasn’t really feeling the verse, so I’ll sleep on it (Comma Before Conjunction)

And how can I forget

And how could I forget (Tense Choice)

All the ideas that sounded dope in my voice memos didn’t sound as dope

All the ideas that sounded dope in my voice memos didn’t sound as good (register choice)