Structure
Dramatic Monologue: Irregular line length. It may mirror the instability brought by a gun.
There is no rhyme scheme, but occasional half-rhymes perhaps reflect the discomfort of the presence of a gun. Free verse, freedom.
Two short stanzas. āBringing a gun into a house changes itā. Sets up the central incongruity of the poem, revealing the existence of a weapon of death and juxtaposing it with the nurturing setting of a house. Armitage makes the reader ponder on the effect of a gun.
Themes and Summary:
Violence
Power and Sexuality
Permanence
Role reversal
Violence quotations
āThe Gunā: Phallic. Destructive potential. Fragmented sentence sets the jarring and violent tone.
āitās just practiceā: Nonchalant tone, callous and casual attitude is unsettling
ālike something deadā: foreshadowing, imagery of caskets
ājuttingā: harsh, angular verb
ālike when sex was freshā: simile. Eyes are a symbol of sexual desire and passion,
Futility quotations
Role-reversal
Pardox
ācasting a grey shadowā
āA gun brings the house aliveā: Disrupted anaphora.
āStirring, slicingā¦ā: sibilance, sinister tone.
Pace increases, more excitement.
āthe King of Deathā¦stalkingā¦his black mouth sprouting golden crocuses.ā ā Here, the gun is personified and is described as the āKing of Deathā which has connotations associated with hell. The animalistic verb āstalkingā introduces the reader to the idea about how guns are able to pursue life, similar to how a predator in the wild would pursue its prey. The disturbing image of a āblack mouth sprouting golden crocusesā compels the reader to comprehend the effects that a gun has. Crocuses are beautiful and vibrant flowers that appear beautiful but this is only to deceive the one admiring them. Crocuses are actually poisonous flowers and are completely toxic. This could introduces the much explored theme of appearance and reality. In this case, this āpolishedā gun may appear enticing as it may make one feel safer and secure ā however, in reality, guns are toxic as any consequences that they produce are absolutely negative