…A tuna, the dark prince, muscular, dangerous
Dark imagery; this hints of the more powerful, even predatory side of nature, and perhaps the darker end to the poem
Her father embarked at sunrise
Symbolism; Japan is known as the ‘land of the rising sun’ so this could be a reference to the country’s heritage. It’s also symbolic of hope
Strung out like bunting
Simile; This is a positive image with connotations of celebration. The simile is ironic given what the pilot is about to do. It could also symbolise joy and remind us of what the pilot is leaving behind
…With a flask of water, a samurai sword in the cockpit, a shaven head full of powerful incantations
Listing; this technique suggests this is a ritual and gives a sense of dignity and respect for the tradition
One way journey into history
Metaphor; this is indicative of the significance of the act and the honour it could bring him
Green-blue translucent sea
Natural imagery; highlights the beauty of the world and everything the pilot stands to lose. This helps us empathise with pilot’s decision to turn back
And remembered how he / and his brothers waiting on the shore / built cairns or pearl-grey pebbles
Imagery; This image of innocence and childhood provides a contrast to the pilot’s fate