Key quotations

…A tuna, the dark prince, muscular, dangerous

Dark imagery; this hints of the more powerful, even predatory side of nature, and perhaps the darker end to the poem

Her father embarked at sunrise

Symbolism; Japan is known as the ‘land of the rising sun’ so this could be a reference to the country’s heritage. It’s also symbolic of hope

Strung out like bunting

Simile; This is a positive image with connotations of celebration. The simile is ironic given what the pilot is about to do. It could also symbolise joy and remind us of what the pilot is leaving behind

…With a flask of water, a samurai sword in the cockpit, a shaven head full of powerful incantations

Listing; this technique suggests this is a ritual and gives a sense of dignity and respect for the tradition

One way journey into history

Metaphor; this is indicative of the significance of the act and the honour it could bring him

Green-blue translucent sea

Natural imagery; highlights the beauty of the world and everything the pilot stands to lose. This helps us empathise with pilot’s decision to turn back

And remembered how he / and his brothers waiting on the shore / built cairns or pearl-grey pebbles

Imagery; This image of innocence and childhood provides a contrast to the pilot’s fate