Thesis Statement- Strong or Weak

Identify whether the thesis statement is strong or weak.

"Social media affects teenagers."

Weak-Too vague

"Shakespeare was a great playwright."

Weak-Not debatable

"The portrayal of Cinderella in Chinese Cinderella by Adeline Yen Mah reflects the struggles of cultural expectations and familial oppression."

Strong-2 body paragraphs

"Renewable energy is good for the environment."

Weak-Too broad and subjective.

"The use of first-person narration in To Kill a Mockingbird enhances the reader’s connection to Scout’s perspective on racial injustice and moral growth."

Strong-first-person narration’s connection to reader’s perspective to injustice and moral growth

"Renewable energy sources, such as solar and wind power, are essential for combating climate change and reducing reliance on fossil fuels."

Strong-Provides specific examples and a clear argument for environmental benefits.

"Chinese Cinderella is about a girl who faces difficulties."

Weak-Too vague and lacks specific details about the girl's experiences and challenges.

"Shakespeare’s use of dramatic irony in Romeo and Juliet highlights the tragic fate of the lovers and critiques impulsive decision-making."

Strong-2 points/reasons

"The narration in To Kill a Mockingbird is interesting."

Weak-Too subjective

"Social media negatively impacts teenagers’ mental health by increasing anxiety, reducing self-esteem, and promoting unrealistic beauty standards."

Strong-3 reasons