Issue 1 - TOEFL Writing for an Academic Discussion: Advertising

internet and online content is freely accessible

internet and online content are freely accessible

I don't either consider target advertising as a privacy invasion or ethical approach

I consider targeted advertising to be neither a clear privacy invasion nor a purely ethical approach

There are some who contend with Jessica

There are some who agree with Jessica

They assert that users will find their way to look for the products they need whenever they want, instead of seeing the advertising all the time whenever accessing any websites.

They argue that users are capable of seeking out products independently, rather than being exposed to advertisements every time they visit a website

In spite of that, I have to agree with Mike's opinion, that we can always decline digital advertising

Nevertheless, I agree with Mike's point that we can always opt out of digital advertising

Such small popup is significantly essential to publishers' advertising revenue

Such a small popup is crucial to publishers' advertising revenue

it actually provides two options for users, whether to agree or decline

it actually provides users with two options: to accept or to decline

free websites can only be sustained if and only if digital advertising exists

free websites can only be sustained through digital advertising

It is not uncommon for us to encounter digital advertising

Digital advertising has become a ubiquitous feature of internet use

… does not suffice your concern

does not address your concern/ does not alleviate your concerns

there are many alternatives privacy-focused browsers

there are many alternative privacy-focused browsers

Internet cookie is what allows browsers or advertising publishers to track internet users and send targeted online advertisement to them based on their internet histories

Internet cookies enable browsers and advertisers to track users' online behavior and serve them targeted advertisements based on their browsing history

systems that could reconcile both user privacy and advertising performance

platforms designed to balance user privacy with advertising functionality