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Maps _ What is being shown?
The maps show changes that have occured/ been made.
before and after
prior to and following
it was refurbished
the refurbishment of
tourist facilities
facilities for tourists
Giving too much information
the introductory sentence should not be confused with the overview.
The two maps illustrate the development that has taken place on the island in terms of facilities for tourists that has turned a desolate place into one with several amenities for visitors.
Points to notice
has not introduced the information ( “the” —→ if it has already mentioned)
The introductory sentence contains only the answers to the questions What, who, where, when —→ a comment that might be useful later in their answer (that the island was deserted and now has amenities for visitors),
3. “illustrate” can be used
“development” can be used
The two maps illustrate the development that has taken place on the island in terms of facilities for tourists that has turned a desolate place into one with several amenities for visitors.
The maps show an island prior to and following its development as a tourist destination .