Sample 3 Advantage

Children's education is expensive. In many countries, governments pay education fees for children. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Children's tuition fees can be quite high in some countries and therefore are paid by their governments. I am of the opinion that the disadvantages of such financial aid are eclipsed by the beneficial effects that it can produce.

Children’s tuition fees can be quite high in some countries and therefore are paid by their governments. I am of the opinion that the disadvantages of such financial aid are eclipsed by the beneficial effects that it can produce.

Lập luận 1 – Bất lợi: Có thể dẫn đến sự tuyên truyền một chiều

Khi nhà nước tài trợ giáo dục → có nguy cơ lợi dụng để nhồi sọ học sinh.

The idea of public bodies financing children’s education can be detrimental in terms of the indoctrination of children. The reason for this is that the government can propagandize young students and teach them a biased or false version of history.

Ví dụ cực đoan: Ở Bắc Triều Tiên, chính phủ dùng giáo dục để truyền bá chủ nghĩa dân tộc cực đoan và tạo hình ảnh nhà nước "luôn đúng".

An extreme example of this is North Korea where the authorities use education as a means of instilling blind nationalism into their citizens and creating a perception that the government is always right and has the ultimate power.

Tuy nhiên, điều này chỉ xảy ra ở một số quốc gia hiếm hoi và ít tác động mạnh như trường hợp Bắc Triều Tiên.

This phenomenon, however, only emerges in a few particular nations, and its impacts seem to be less significant compared to North Korea.

The idea of public bodies financing children’s education can be detrimental in terms of the indoctrination of children. The reason for this is that the government can propagandize young students and teach them a biased or false version of history. An extreme example of this is North Korea where the authorities use education as a means of instilling blind nationalism into their citizens and creating a perception that the government is always right and has the ultimate power.

This phenomenon, however, only emerges in a few particular nations, and its impacts seem to be less significant compared to North Korea.

Lập luận 2 – Lợi ích: Giảm gánh nặng tài chính & nâng cao cơ hội việc làm

• Giảm gánh nặng chi phí: Nhiều gia đình không đủ khả năng chi trả học phí → hỗ trợ từ chính phủ là cần thiết.

In my opinion, the benefits of this aid are of greater importance partly because it helps ease the financial burden and partly because it improves the future employability of several people. With regard to the former, this financial support will greatly benefit children whose parents fail to meet the cost.

Tổ chức từ thiện chỉ giúp được giới hạn, không thể thay thế chính phủ.

Some charities and organizations may as well provide help to a certain extent, but their contributions would be limited.

In my opinion, the benefits of this aid are of greater importance partly because it helps ease the financial burden and partly because it improves the future employability of several people. With regard to the former, this financial support will greatly benefit children whose parents fail to meet the cost. Some charities and organizations may as well provide help to a certain extent, but their contributions would be limited.

On a societal level, eliminating school fees allows every child to gain access to basic education which may equip them with fundamental knowledge and skills to enter the labor market after graduating.    

Về mặt xã hội: Miễn học phí giúp mọi trẻ em có cơ hội tiếp cận giáo dục cơ bản, từ đó học được kỹ năng & kiến thức cần thiết để tham gia thị trường lao động sau tốt nghiệp.

On a societal level, eliminating school fees allows every child to gain access to basic education which may equip them with fundamental knowledge and skills to enter the labor market after graduating.    

Mặc dù có rủi ro về tuyên truyền, miễn học phí giúp giảm áp lực cho phụ huynh và nâng cao cơ hội nghề nghiệp cho trẻ.

→ Lợi ích lớn hơn nhiều so với bất lợi.

In conclusion, although a few governments may use free education as a tool of false propaganda, waiving tuition fees for children would alleviate the burden on their parents and enhance their career prospects. Therefore, I hold the belief that the advantages of this development clearly overshadow the drawbacks involved.

In conclusion, although a few governments may use free education as a tool of false propaganda, waiving tuition fees for children would alleviate the burden on their parents and enhance their career prospects. Therefore, I hold the belief that the advantages of this development clearly overshadow the drawbacks involved.