1. My Mistakes

❌ Over weekend, we celebrated at the start, the school resume.

✅ We celebrated the start of the school year over the weekend.

(Rule: • over the weekend (nicht over weekend) • celebrate the start of something • school year = Schuljahr • Natürlichere Wortstellung: Zeitangaben oft am Ende. Example: We celebrated the start of the school year over the weekend. School starts again next week.)

❌ My last musical was frozen, but as far it was dance of Van Pearce.

✅ The last musical I saw was Frozen, and it featured choreography by Van Pearce.

(Rule: • Use "The last musical I saw was..." • Movie and musical titles are capitalized. • feature = zeigen, enthalten • choreography = Choreografie Example: The last musical I saw was Frozen. It featured amazing choreography.)

❌ I don't like to watch sports outside or inside.

✅ I don't like watching sports, either indoors or outdoors.

(Rule: • like + verb-ing is more natural for general preferences. • indoors / outdoors are more idiomatic than inside / outside. Example: I don't like watching football indoors. She prefers exercising outdoors.)

❌ Unless sit places are very expensive.

✅ Unless the seats are very expensive.

(Rule: • seat = Sitzplatz • Use the article "the" when referring to specific seats. • expensive = teuer Example: The seats were too expensive. We bought cheaper seats.)

❌ I like now very quiet.

✅ I like it to be very quiet now.

(Rule: • Use "I like it to be..." to describe a preferred situation. • Word order: subject + verb + object + adjective + time. Example: I like it to be quiet in the morning. She likes it to be clean and tidy.)