Aunt Julia

“very loud and very fast.”

• the repetition of the word ‘very’ emphasises her big character.

• begins with the affectionate memories from his childhood with his Aunt.

“I could not answer her | I could not understand her.”

• establishes that main theme of communication barriers and frustration

• repetition of ‘I could not’ enforces that language barrier

“She wore men’s boots”

• creates an initial image of a woman who is capable of work and lacks femininity.

“stained with peat,”

• she blends in with nature, establishes the idea that she is one with nature.

“right hand drew yarn marvellously out of the air.”

• the task is entrancing to watch for MacCaig.

• the use of vowels accentuate the length of the yarn.

“absolute darkness…crickets being friendly.”

• a secure and safe setting is created.

• there is no light, no street lights like there would be back home in the city.

“water flouncing onto them.”

• the word ‘flouncing’ mirrors the way she moved; quite vigorous and constant.