Poppies

“the world overflowing/like a treasure chest”

Smilie indicates that the mother recognises her sons excitement and is understanding about the opportunities that await him

“the gelled blackthorns of your hair”

religious imagery of crown of thorns worn by jesus. Image of loss and sacrifice

“all my words flattened, rolled, turned into felt / slowly melting”

enjambment shows that the mother cannot control her emotions. Also suggests that her grief and fear has left her speechless. Links to context of author and her felt making friend

“released a songbird from its cage”

Metaphor for letting go of her son’s innocence. Could also reflect her coming to terms with her son’s desire for freedom and independence

“i listened, hoping to hear your playground voice catching on the wind”

Caesura could imply her voice is faltering as she is on the verge of tears. “playground voice” symbolises how she clings onto the fading memories of her sons youth.