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CONTEXT:
An extract from the series of letters written by Isabelle Lucy Bird to her sister Henrietta, capturing her travels in the Rocky Mountains. The letters were subsequently published as a book, A Lady’s Life in the Rocky Mountains, in 1879. Bird was a prolific and intrepid 19th century traveller who became well-known through her published journals, magazines and trael books.
MODE,AUDIENCE,PURPOSE
MODE: Personal Letter
AUDIENCE: First: Her sister, Secondary: Educated Victorian Readers
PURPOSE: Describe life and people in the Rocky Mountains and inform her sister of the unfamiliar environment. Express opinions and judgements on the place and people
“As night came on the cold intensified, and the stove in the parlor attracted every one.“
Grammar & Discourse
Compound sentence with subordinate temporal clause (“As night came on”), establishing setting and time.
Compound sentence joined by and, mirroring the causal link: cold → people gather.
Verb “intensified” implies gradual but uncomfortable change, foregrounding hardship.
Collective noun “every one” suggests communal dependency on heat → reinforces frontier conditions.
Lexis
“cold”, “stove”, “parlor” → domestic but fragile comfort.
“cold intensified” → dynamic verb “intensified” suggests the cold is actively growing stronger (almost agentive).
“attracted” personifies the stove, giving it human-like agency.
Literary
Personification of the stove makes the scene vivid and social.
“A San Francisco lady, much ‘got up’ in paint, emerald green velvet, Brussels lace, and diamonds, rattled continuously…”
Lexis
Listing (“paint, emerald green velvet, Brussels lace, and diamonds”) emphasises excess and artificiality ✔
“paint” is derogatory for makeup, implying deception and vulgarity.
Adjective phrase “much ‘got up’” suggests constructed identity, not natural beauty.
“rattled” → implies:
noisy
irritating
uncontrolled speech
Morphology
Noun phrase heavily post-modified, mirroring the excess of the woman herself.
“continuously” (adverb) intensifies the verb → she cannot stop talking.
Literary
Metonymy: clothes and jewels represent moral character (vulgarity).
Irony: she is meant to entertain but becomes ridiculous.
“…in a racy Western twang, without the slightest scruple as to what she said.”
Lexis
“racy” + “twang” suggests vulgar entertainment.
“without the slightest scruple” implies moral deficiency
“racy” implies:
improper
morally loose
Discourse
Evaluative narration — Bird positions herself as socially superior.
Grammar
Non-finite clause “giving descriptions” shows continuous, unfiltered speech.
Literary
Irony: “slightest scruple” minimizes morality to emphasize its absence.
“In a few years Tahoe will be inundated in summer with similar vulgarity…”
Lexis
“inundated” metaphor = flood of vulgar people → moral contamination. Also implies:
loss of purity
overwhelming corruption
Predictive future tense shows judgment and anxiety about social decline.
“inundated” → metaphor of flooding, implying:
loss of purity
overwhelming corruption
“vulgarity” abstract noun = moral judgement.
“will” → certainty and prophetic tone.
Literary
Metaphor: vulgarity = water flooding a pure place
Pathetic fallacy (moralized landscape).
“I sustained the reputation which our country-women bear in America by looking a ‘perfect guy’…”
Lexis
“sustained” implies effort and self-control.
“perfect guy” is ironic:
she means dull and proper
mocks social expectations.
Discourse
Contrasts herself with the vulgar woman.
Literary
Self-deprecation: she criticizes herself to critique social norms.
Irony
Self-mocking phrase “perfect guy” contrasts with San Francisco woman’s display ✔
Bird aligns herself with modesty through ironic self-description.
“…the landlady, a ladylike Englishwoman, asked me to join herself and her family…”
Lexis
“ladylike” = refinement, moral respectability
National identity (“Englishwoman”) creates solidarity
“asked me to join” → hospitality and warmth.
Discourse
Binary opposition:
vulgar San Francisco lady
refined English landlady
“…we had much talk about the neighborhood and its wild beasts, especially bears.”
Lexis
“seem never” hedges certainty → observational tone.
“unless when wounded… aggravated… thinks you are going to molest her young”
→ rationalizes animal behaviour.
Grammar
Series of conditional clauses creates logical explanation.
Discourse
Positions Bird as:
scientific
calm
rational observer of nature.
Topic shift from society → nature.
Prepares for later bear encounter.
“The forest is full of them…”
Syntax
Declarative, factual tone — presents nature as omnipresent and powerful
“I dreamt of bears so vividly that I woke with a furry death hug at my throat…”
Lexis & Metaphor
“furry death hug” = playful yet violent metaphor → merges humour with danger.
Intensifier “so vividly” emphasises emotional impact.
“furry death hug” → oxymoron:
hug = affection
death = danger
Grammar
“so…that” construction → cause and effect.
Literary
Metaphor: dream = physical attack
Dark humour: fear + comedy.
“…the air so keen and intoxicating… giving the animal his head, I galloped”
Lexis
“keen” = sharp, pure
“intoxicating” → metaphor: air = alcohol
“galloped” → freedom, energy
“tireless” → hyperbole
Grammar
Non-finite participle clause → fluid movement.
Verb “galloped” = freedom and speed
Literary device
Metaphor: air = stimulant
Hyperbole: endless energy.
Nature
Sensory lexis expresses exhilaration
“Truly, that air is the elixir of life.”
Metaphor
“elixir of life” suggests vitality and renewal
Biblical/alchemical register → elevated tone.
“…I saw a cinnamon-colored bear with two cubs…”
Lexis
Precise colour adjective = vivid visual imagery.
“cinnamon-colored” → sensory imagery (colour).
Discourse
Bear encounter introduces:
danger
awe
realism.
“I tried to keep the horse quiet that the mother might acquit me of any designs…”
Lexis
“acquit” and “designs” → legal register
Anthropomorphizes bear as moral judge.
Literary
Personification of bear
Comic politeness applied to wildlife.
“…that the mother might acquit me of any designs upon her lolloping children…”
Lexis
Legal register (“acquit”, “designs”) → ironic politeness.
“lolloping” = affectionate yet comic.
“Then I met a team…” / “Then the driver…” / “Then a man…”
Discourse
Anaphora of “Then” structures narrative as a journey.
Creates rhythm and accumulation of encounters.
“…who ‘touched his hat’ and brought me a draught of ice-cold water…”
Lexis
Polite gesture = social respect.
Sensory noun phrase “ice-cold water” → refreshment imagery.
“I mention these little incidents to indicate the habit of respectful courtesy to women…”
Metadiscourse
Explicit commentary on purpose.
Evaluative ideology: gender respect as moral marker
“Womanly dignity and manly respect for women are the salt of society…”
Literary
“salt of society” = Metaphor, moral preservative.
salt = essential
→ moral behaviour sustains civilisation
Balanced gender binaries = Victorian ideology.
Parallelism
“womanly dignity / manly respect” → balanced structure.
“…skulked through a collection of Chinamen’s shanties…”
Lexis
“skulked” = secrecy, unease.
Reveals colonial racial hierarchy.
“…a prodigious roan horse, standing seventeen hands high…”
Lexis
“prodigious” intensifies scale.
Technical horse measurement → realism.
“There’s nothing Western folk admire so much as pluck in a woman.”
Discourse
Reported speech adds authenticity.
Reinforces Bird’s identity as:
courageous
respectable
admired.
Lexis
Noun “pluck” = courage → redefines femininity → bravery
Challenges Victorian gender norms.
“I felt like a fly on him.”
Literary
Simile - Comic image → diminishes self physically but not mentally.
Emphasizes:
size difference
vulnerability
humour.
“…the first GREEN grass I have seen in America…”
Capitalisation
“GREEN” → visual emphasis
Emotional significance.
Emphasis and emotional intensity.
Discourse
Shows deprivation → appreciation.
“I came upon the Donner Lake…to be completely smitten by its beauty.”
Verb
“smitten” = romantic verb and romantic lexical field → emotional response to nature
Personifies landscape as beloved.
Literary
Romantic imagery: love applied to nature.
“Its loneliness pleased me well.”
Lexis
Abstract noun “loneliness” becomes positive.
Reinforces individualism.
“I did not see man, beast, or bird…”
Tricolon
Emphasises isolation and purity of landscape.
Listing/Triplet
Emphasizes total isolation.
Discourse
Solitude = pleasure, not fear.
OVERALL LINGUISTIC EFFECTS
Discourse:
Letter form = private voice + reflective authority
Shifts between:
Social critique
Adventure narrative
Moral commentary
Lexis:
Social lexis → judgement (“vulgarity”, “ladylike”)
Nature lexis → admiration (“keen”, “intoxicating”, “elixir”)
Animal lexis → danger (“bear”, “cubs”)
Grammar:
Frequent complex sentences = educated authority.
Participial clauses = movement and immediacy.
Phonology:
Alliteration: “keen and intoxicating”, “furry death hug” → memorable imagery.
Plosives in “pluck”, “perfect guy” add punch to tone.
Representation of Nature
Powerful, exhilarating, dangerous
Source of renewal (“elixir of life”)
Opposed to artificial society
OVERALL IDEAS
Nature:
Metaphors:
elixir of life
flooding vulgarity
Verbs: galloped, smitten, hurried → energy
Adjectives: keen, intoxicating, glorious
Nature =
- powerful
- restorative
- morally pure
Society:
Artificial woman =
paint
diamonds
rattled
Bird =
restrained
ironic
observant
Society is judged by:
- dignity
- courtesy
- restraint