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Paragraph one point
Character of the wife
Paragraph one quotations
“Again I’m stuck”
“It’s like I’ve been turned to marble or ice, to something cold, hard and unyielding.”
“Again I’m stuck” techniques + quote
“Again” word choice
“Stuck” word choice
“It’s like I’ve been turned to marble, or ice, to something cold, hard and unyielding.” Techniques + quotes
“It’s Iike I’ve been turned to marble” simile
“ice, to something cold, hard and unyielding” list
Paragraph two point
Character of the husband
Paragraph two quotes
“Dark, demanding eyes”
“My husband’s fine pale fingers are pushed deep into his hair”
“Dark, demanding eyes” techniques + quotes
“Dark” metaphor
“Demanding” word choice
Also alliteration
“My husband’s fine pale fingers are pushed deep into his hair”