writing

in the last decade X —>

over the past decade

take advantage of or take advantages of.

take advantage of.

donate to charities or donate to charity.

donate to charity

live in a war X —>

.live in a war zone

the society or society

society

have sympathy for or have the sympathy for

have sympathy for

develop a passion or develop the passion

develop a passion

presenting skills or presentation skills

presentation skills

every person’s life or every person’s lives

every person’s life

feedback

uncountable noun

comprise of or be comprised of

be comprised of

improvement —>

countable

misunderstanding —>

countable

go according to plan or go according to the plan

go according to plan

do harm or do harms

do harm

Another factor is being far away from parents can make them feel homesick right or wrong

wrong (Another factor is that being far away from parents can make them feel homesick)

Give somebody a view of the outside world —> more natural

give sb a broader view of the world

high salary or high salaries

high salaries

bring sb outside their comfort zone X —> ?

push sb beyond/out of their comfort zone

imbalance —>

countable