English IV Daily Sentence Corrections Weeks 2 & 3

ms simms our english teacher announced that in the optimist oratorical contest the decision of the judges are final

Ms. Simms, our English teacher, announced that in the Optimist Oratorical Contest the decision of the judges is final.

her and me took a boat to madeline island which lays off of the northern Coast of Wisconsin in lake superior near bayfield

She and I took a boat to Madeline Island, which lies off of the northern coast of Wisconsin in Lake Superior near Bayfield.

when mom and dad were in japan for the winter Olympics in 1998 they stopped at several souvenir stores but didnt buy any

When Mom and Dad were in Japan for the Winter Olympics in 1998, they stopped at several souvenir stores but didn’t buy any souvenirs.

starting a gasoline fueled lawn mower takes three simple steps opening the choke the starter cord is pulled and close the choke once the engine is running

Starting a gasoline-fueled lawn mower takes three simple steps: opening the choke, pulling the starter cord, and closing the choke once the engine is running.

cher starred in the movie moonstruck and she received an oscar for her performance in the movie

Cher starred in the movie Moonstruck and received an Oscar for her performance.

at the cancer research conference in atlanta Georgia researchers stated that the first breakthrough has been made decades ago in unraveling dna the molecule of heredity

At the Cancer Research Conference in Atlanta, Georgia, researchers stated that the first breakthrough had been made decades ago in unraveling DNA, the molecule of heredity.

completion of the national cathedral in Washington dc has proceeded slow because building methods used during the middle ages are employed for authenticity

Completion of the National Cathedral in Washington, D.C., has proceeded slowly because building methods used during the Middle Ages have been employed for authenticity.

stopping at the Cliffside inn in san Francisco the barking of sea lions on the rocks below could be heard by the tourists

Stopping at the Cliffside Inn in San Francisco, the tourists could hear the barking of the sea lions on the rocks below.

before he listed the three references on his application to the university of michigan jim obtained permission from those individuals to do so

Before he listed the three references on his application to the University of Michigan, Jim obtained permission from those individuals to do so.

the williams snow thrower which mom bought at the crawford nature center is small enough in size to fit in our subcompact car

The Williams snow thrower, which Mom bought at the Crawford Nature Center, is small enough to fit in our subcompact car.

my cousin without consulting we 3 bought tickets to last nights game and later asked us to go with my cousin

My cousin, without consulting us three, bought tickets to last night’s game and later asked us to go with him/her.

there are numerous methods that can be used to solve the puzzle but mark dont know none of them

Numerous methods can be used to solve the puzzle, but Mark doesn’t know any of them.

navajo weavers create beautiful rugs mr marks exclaimed and many are hanged in museums

“Navajo weavers create beautiful rugs,” Mr. Marks exclaimed, “and many such rugs are hung in museums!”

when dad bought this here car dad dont know now expensive it is too operate and maintain the car

When Dad bought this car, he didn’t know how expensive it would be to operate and maintain.