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IF this is the last time I see her,/how joyous/the falling alphabet of rain.
First line: uncertain tone (the joy and comfort is bittersweet), grandmother may die soon
Second line: identifes emotion
Third line: metaphor for conversation, literal meaning - deluge
Also some enjambment throughout
There is food in our guts/laughter spouts from our mouths/bones turn to stock,
guts, mouths: Juxtaposition of growth + life
cooking, home and health, traditional culture
A good family moment - contrasts with the bittersweetness of the occasion
Lightning over treetops,/sculpting clouds in flashflare purple-yellow.
First line: ephemeral
Second line:
Memory trembles,/rain-written.
pensive tone
Some people are addicted to stuff they sniff, pop or inject-/but not me./I'm addicted to the smell of the patent leather out of the box,/The crisscrossed, immaculate laces.
addiction, consumerism
So I break my bread, so I shave my head, so I'm ready to go
Religious actions with consumerism
And she's working for something like two dollars a day,/And she's something like 64 with poor pay
Echo to earlier line, emphaising, realising how capitalism and consumerism exploits workers in poorer countries.
I say “yeah, yeah” and I grit my teeth./I lace up my ones then I hit the streets.
He knows deep down, that his dad is right.
The fact he already has ones shows that the marketing is already making an impression on him.
I imagined hibiscus flowers and wandering rhapsodists,/kampungs full of the wise and noble poor.
I imagined, what he belives his homeland is like
I saw Prada and mirror-balls,/I saw mosques and malls built from the same bricks,/and just as full of faithful.
Consumerism and religion both just as full of indoctrinated and devoted followes
Exile’s folly!/Second generationer’s hope and despair!
Disappointment. A key thing that many experience
And everywhere modernity churned.
An unstoppable machine, way past the point of no return
Under a dripping awning in Kuala Lumpur,/I see life swell immensely,/with laughter and chewing mouths.
If you look cllosely, people and culture are still alive.
I got choices to make.
Uncertain ending, what happens?
But when her eyes turn to me,/they are keen and bright,/urging me to bear children/and not forget her.
urgent tone, wants remembrance, etc.