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College Application Essay Packet

THE COLLEGE APPLICATION ESSAY

  • The college application essay serves as a personal narrative, allowing the author to reflect on significant experiences.

  • Key guidelines for writing:

    • Be creative, original, and reflective.

    • Use your brainstorming packet as a foundation.

PHASES OF DEVELOPMENT

  • PLANNING—Concept to Content

    • Utilize the Rhetorical Square variables:

      • Persona: Decide on the voice and perspective (first, second, third person).

        • First Person: Intimate and honest.

        • Second Person: Unique engagement with the reader.

        • Third Person: Objective and analytical.

      • Content: Choose content that complements your persona and illustrates your purpose.

      • Purpose: Define what you want to convey about yourself that goes beyond your resume.

      • Audience: Recognize the relevance to college admissions officers.

  • NARRATING—Contours of Content

    • Avoid traditional essay structures; use narrative techniques:

      • Start with an engaging hook that frames deeper reflection.

      • Show rather than tell; use descriptive techniques.

    • Structure to reflect intelligence through:

      • Error-free prose and effective voice.

      • Cohesive organization—including a narrative hook and episodic development.

  • REFLECTING—Content as Concept

    • Transition from narration to deeper reflection, linking your story to personal qualities.

    • Answer why your narrative matters to the admissions officer; highlight personal growth and attractive qualities.

ADDITIONAL RESOURCES

  • Sample Essays: Reflecting a balance of narration and reflection.

  • Drafting Process: Techniques to balance authenticity with creativity.

  • Rhetorical Square Worksheet: Exercise to refine ideas.

  • Narrative Devices Worksheet: To plan narrative elements.

Rhetorical Square for Planning

  • PERSONA: Determine your voice and persona that fits the narrative.

  • CONTENT: Identify significant memories or experiences that highlight personal growth.

  • AUDIENCE: Tailor your writing to resonate with college admissions officers; provide insights not present in your transcript.

  • PURPOSE: Clarify the theme and highlight virtues that set you apart.

Techniques for Engaging Narration

  • Begin with a strong hook or engaging moment.

  • Use narrative devices to enhance the appeal of the essay:

    • Imagery: Create vivid descriptions to immerse the reader.

    • Metaphors/Similes: Enhance understanding through comparisons.

    • Dialogue: Add life and conflict to your narrative.

    • Setting: Establish context to reflect character experiences.

CONTENT AS CONCEPT

  • Each essay should convey an overarching purpose:

    • Intellectual: Address your academic engagement and curiosity.

    • Emotional: Reflect on personal growth and emotional capacity.

    • Psychological: Explore self-understanding and introspection.

    • Interpersonal: Discuss social relationships and leadership qualities.

SAMPLE ESSAYS ANALYSIS

  • Analyze how each sample effectively shifts between narrative and reflective content.

  • Note the use of narrative details combined with abstract reflections, creating a deeper connection to the reader.

DRAFTING PROCESS

  • Review earlier drafts for authenticity and creativity.

  • Ensure transitions between narrative and reflective aspects, making it personal yet engaging to the reader.