Writing an Analytical Paragraph

Writing an Analytical Paragraph

Essay Plan

• Essay Topic: Sunset Boulevard depicts that many people within the world of Hollywood struggle to face reality.

Key Ideas

• Wilder's portrayal of delusions arises from individuals' inability to confront their dissatisfaction with life.

• Obsession with fame leads to a disconnect from reality.

• Not all characters abandon reality.

Introduction

• Author: Billy Wilder

• Title: Sunset Boulevard

• Type: Film

• Connects to the theme of Hollywood's fantasy world and characters' struggles with reality.

• First Two Lines: "Sunset Boulevard" examines Hollywood's illusions and the characters' inability to cope.

Introduction: Signposting Key Ideas

• Dissatisfaction results in delusions (1)

• Focus on fame disconnects from the real world (2)

• Some characters maintain a sense of self despite Hollywood's pressures (3)

• Note: Absence of character names in discussions.

Introduction – Final Sentence (Contention)

• Wilder critiques Hollywood culture and its damaging effects on identity and spirit.

• Contention sentence: Answers the essay question.

Body Paragraphs

• Focus: Ideas, evidence, and linking.

• Common Problem: Paragraphs often contain only evidence.

Topic Sentences & Analysis

• Topic Sentence: Delusions from dissatisfaction with life.

• Exemplified by Norma Desmond's fixation on her glamorous past.

• Quotes such as "I am big. It's the picture that got small" illustrate her delusion.

• Max's character illustrates the pervasive nature of delusion.

• Max devotes his life to Norma at the cost of his own dreams, reflecting mutual delusions.

Conclusions

1. Summarize three main points about the struggle with reality in Hollywood.

2. Emphasize the overarching message about coping through delusions.

3. Highlight the tension between illusion and confronting reality.

Final Thoughts

• Sunset Boulevard illustrates delusion as a coping mechanism for life's discontent.

• Wilder’s characters showcase the consequences of avoiding reality.

• Advocates for confronting life's truths for self-awareness and personal growth.