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Patterns for College Writing

Quiz 1 (Pages 1-80)

  • Writing Process:

    • UNDERSTAND THE ASSIGNMENT

    • Invention

    • Arrangement

    • Drafting and Revising

    • Editing and Proofreading

    • Publishing/Turning it in

  • What part of the writing process must occur?

    • UNDERSTANDING THE ASSIGNMENT

    • Drafting and Revising

    • Editing and Proofreading

  • True or false? The writing process is a linear model, and all authors write in the order of the steps

  • True or false? Most good writing occurs when a writer gets stuck or confused, but continues to work until ideas begin to take shape

  • True or false? No two writers approach the writing process the same way

  • Critical Thinking: evaluating the ideas of others, to form judgements, and to develop original viewpoints.

  • True or false? Readers bring their own ideas to what they read when critical reading occurs

  • True or false? All interpretations of a reading are correct due to our differences

  • True or false? It is important for each reader to develop an interpretation that the work itself supports

  • What are active reading strategies?

    • Approaching an assigned reading with a clear understanding of your purpose and marking the text to help you understand what you are reading

  • Purpose: why are you reading this?

    • Will you be expected to discuss what you are reading?

    • Will you have to write about what you are reading?

    • Will you be tested on this material?

  • Preview: trying to get a sense of the writer’s main idea, key supporting points, and general emphasis

  • What clues should you look for when previewing?

    • Visual Signals

    • Verbal Signals

  • Visual Signals

    • Looking at the title

    • Looking for headings

    • Looking at each paragraph’s first sentence

    • Look for words in bold and italics

  • Verbal signals

    • Phrases like primary, that show emphasis

    • Repetition of words

    • Time sequencing words

    • Look for words the identify cause and effects

    • Words that introduce examples

  • True or false? Annotations suggest questions

  • After your questions have been answered, you will be able to answer with:

    • Greater accuracy

    • More confidence

    • More authority

  • True or false? When you annotate, you carry on a conversation with the text

  • What are visual texts?

    • Photographs

    • Diagram

    • Graph

    • Chart

  • True or false? Annotating a visual text can be helpful just like texts

  • What are visual elements?

    • Arrangement of shapes

    • Use of color

    • Contrast between large and small or light and dark

  • Questions to ask about visual texts:

    • Why was the visual created?

    • What kind of audience is it aimed at?

    • How would you characterize the visual?

  • Invention (prewriting): an important and most neglected part of the writing process; here you discover what interests you about your subject and consider what ideas to develop in your essay

  • If the assignment is written as a question, read it carefully several times and underline its key words

  • If the assignment is read aloud by your instructor, be sure to copy it accurately

  • Before writing, what should you consider?

    • What your limits are.

  • Limits in Writing:

    • Length

    • Purpose

    • Audience

    • Occasion: situation or situations that lead someone to write about a topic

    • Knowledge

  • True or false? Often, your audience is too vast to be categorized and is instead a universal audience.

  • True or false? Experts in one field need background information in other fields

  • True or false? General subjects do not need to be narrowed to specific topics

  • True or false? When you freewrite, you write for a fixed period, perhaps five or ten minutes, without stopping and without paying attention to spelling, grammar, or punctuation.

  • Focused free writing or looping: process of writing more and more specific freewriting exercises

  • Brainstorming: a way of discovering ideas about your topic

  • True or false? Journal entries are more narrow than free writing or brainstorming

  • Clustering: a way of visually arranging ideas so that they can tell at a glance where ideas belong and whether or not you need more information

  • Informal outlines do not include all the major divisions like a formal outline does

  • Thesis: main idea of your essay, its central point

  • True or false? A thesis statement can be a fact

  • Three Characteristics of an Effective Thesis Statement:

    • Clearly expresses your essay’s main idea

    • Communicates your essay’s purpose

    • Clearly worded

  • Implied thesis conveys an essay’s purpose, but does not do so explicitly

  • True or false? Most of the time, you should utilize an implied thesis

  • In arrangement, it is important to recognize the clues of what an assignment gives and structure it properly.

  • True or false? An essay must have an introduction, a body, and a conclusion

  • Introduction: introduces your subject, creates interest, and OFTEN STATES YOUR THESIS

    • Begin with background information - this works well if you KNOW THE AUDIENCE

    • Introduce an essay with your original definition of a relevant term or concept - USEFUL FOR RESEARCH PAPERS OR TESTS

    • Begin with a story

    • Begin with a question

    • Begin with a quotation

    • Begin with a contradiction

    • Begin with a fact or statistic

  • True or false? Each body paragraph should be unified

  • True or false? Sometimes the main idea of a paragraph is not stated but implied by the sentences in the paragraph

    • Professional writers often use this technique because a topic sentence may be awkward

  • True or false? Each sentence in a paragraph should develop the paragraph’s main idea, if not, the paragraph will lack unity

  • Each body paragraph should be coherent - sentences are smoothly and logically connected to one another

    • Repeat key words

    • Use transitions

    • Use pronouns

  • True or false? Support should be documented but not all

  • Each body paragraph should be well developed - contain support

    • Details

    • Expert opinions

    • Visuals

    • Facts

    • Stats

  • Support should be relevant, specific, adequate, representative, and documented

  • True or false? Each body paragraph should support the thesis statement

  • Conclusion: very important because it is what your readers remember last

  • True or false? Always end your essay in a way that reinforces your thesis and your purpose

  • True or false? A conclusion is usually longer than a paragraph

  • True or false? A conclusion can introduce points you have not discussed earlier

  • What are some ways to conclude your essay?

    • Reviewing your key points or restating your thesis

    • Ending with a recommendation of a course of action

    • Concluding with a prediction

    • End with a relevant quote

  • True or false? Formal outlines are detailed, multilevel constructions that indicate the exact order in which you will present your key points and supporting details

  • True or false? The complexity of your paper is what decides if you use a formal or informal outline

  • What is the purpose of your first draft?

    • Get your ideas down on paper so that you can react to them

  • True or false? While drafting, you should begin with a conclusion

  • Revision should occur simultaneously while writing

  • An outline can show you whether your essay follows a particular pattern of development

  • What can clarify the relationship between your thesis statement and your body paragraphs?

    • A formal or informal outline

  • How to critique your peers?

    • Positive

    • Tactful

    • Specific

    • Involved

    • Thorough

    • Look at the big picture

  • What suggests your essay’s purpose?

    • The occasion

  • Formal outlines are for arrangement, informal outlines are for brainstorming (invention)

  • Why is it not a good idea to write your introduction until you have already written your first draft?

    • A misrepresentation introduction that does not match the tone of the rest of the paper hurts your credibility

  • Formal outlines must use either subjects or topic sentences, not both

  • What is one way to narrow your general subject to a specific topic?

    • Question for Probing

      • Who did it?

      • Where did it happen?

      • What happened?

      • How is it made?

Quiz 2 (Narration, 97-108)

  • Narration: tells a story by presenting events in an orderly, logical sequence

  • Types of writing that follow narration:

    • Histories

    • Biographies

    • Autobiographies

    • Personal letters

    • Diaries

    • Journals

    • Bios on web pages/social networking websites

  • True or false? narration also underlies folk and fairy tales and radio and television news reports.

  • Anytime you tell what happened = narration

  • True or false? Narrative passages may also appear in essays that are not primarily narrative

  • What two essays does the textbook list as being alike to narrative?

    • Process Essay

    • Cause-and-effect Essay

  • True or false? A narrative essay is more likely to present a sequence of events for the purpose of supporting a thesis

  • Although it is usually best to have an explicit thesis statement in a narrative, what is a way you can have an implied thesis?

    • Through your selection and arrangement of events

  • What do narratives need to be convincing?

    • Rich, details to create a picture for the reader

  • What do details do for the audience of a narrative?

    • Adds interest and authenticity

  • What can you do to decrease the monotonous sequencing found in narratives?

    • Vary your sentence structure

  • What causes you to either follow or not follow a strict chronological order?

    • The purpose of your narrative

  • What are flashbacks?

    • Shifts into the past used in personal or fictional narratives to tell your story

  • Why is it important to use correct verb tenses and clear transitional words and phrases in narratives?

    • To help readers follow the order of events in your narrative

  • What is extremely important in writing that recounts events in a fixed order?

    • Verb tense

  • What verb tense must you use when discussing works of literature?

    • Present tense

  • What helps link events in time, enabling narratives to flow smoothly?

    • Transitions

  • What are transitions?

    • Connecting words or phrases

  • What are the transitions commonly used in narrative writing?

    • First

    • Second

    • Next

    • Then

    • Later

    • At the same time

    • Meanwhile

    • Immediately

    • Soon

    • Before

    • Earlier

    • After

    • Afterward

    • Now

    • Finally

  • Where will a narrative’s thesis appear?

    • Introduction

  • What do the body paragraphs function as in narrative writing?

    • Recount the events that make up your narrative, clearly and orderly

  • What does the conclusion do in a narrative?

    • Give the sense the narrative is complete, perhaps by restating your thesis or by summarizing key points/events

  • What ensures your statements in a narrative are easy to understand?

    • Exact details

    • Dates

    • Times

    • Geographic locations

  • What should a revision checklist be like for narrative essays?

    • Does your assignment call for narration?

    • Does your essay’s thesis communicate the significance of the events you discusseD?

    • Have you included enough specific details?

    • Have you varied your sentence structure?

    • Is the order of events clear to readers?

    • Have you varied sentence openings and combined short sentences to avoid monotony?

    • Do your transitions indicate the order of events and signal shifts in time?

  • What issues are particularly relevant to narrative essays?

    • Mechanics

    • Punctuation issues

    • Grammar

    • AVOIDING RUN-ONS

  • What are the two kinds of run-ons?

    • Fused sentences

    • Comma splices

  • A ___________ occurs when two sentences are incorrectly joined without punctuation?

    • Fused sentence

  • A ___________ occurs when two sentences are incorrectly joined with just a comma?

    • Comma splice

  • What are the 5 ways to correct a run-on?

    • Use a period to create two separate sentences

    • Join sentences with a comma and a coordinating conjunction

    • Join the sentences with a semicolon

    • Semicolon and a transitional word

    • Create a complex sentence - adding a subordinating conjunction or a relative pronoun

  • Narration checklist for editing?

    • Have you avoided run-ons?

    • Do your verb tenses clearly indicate time relationships between events?

    • Have you avoided unnecessary tense shifts?

    • If you use dialogue, have you punctuated correctly and capitalized where necessary/

Quiz 3 (Description, 151-161)

  • Description is used to tell readers about the physical characteristics of a person, place, or thing

  • What does description rely on?

    • Sight

    • Hearing

    • Taste

    • Touch

    • Smell

  • True or false? Description often goes beyond personal sense impressions

  • When you write description, you use language to create a vivid impression for your readers

  • What essays does the textbook list as description being used within?

    • Comparison-and-contrast

    • Argumentative

  • Through description, you communicate your view of the world to your readers

  • True or false? In almost every essay you write, knowing how to write effective description is important

  • Description can be objective or ____?

    • Subjective

  • In an _________ description, you focus on the object itself rather than on your personal reactions to it

    • Objective

  • In objective description, what is your purpose?

    • Present a precise, literal picture of your subject

  • True or false? In selecting some details and leaving out others, writers are making subjective decisions

  • True or false? Objective descriptions are sometimes accompanied by visuals

    • Visuals - diagrams, drawings, or photographs

  • True or false? A visual can introduce new material

  • What does subjective description do?

    • Conveys your personal response to your subject

  • True or false? In subjective description, your perspective is stated explicitly

  • Subjective description should convey not just a literal record of sights and sounds but also their significance.

  • True or false? Neither objective nor subjective description exists independently

  • The skillful writer adjusts the balance between objectivity and subjectivity to suit the topic, thesis, audience, and purpose.

  • Connotation: the feeling expressed by word

  • Denotation: direct and literal meaning of words

  • What are examples of figures of speech?

    • Simile

    • Metaphor

    • Personification

    • Allusion

  • A simile uses like or as to compare two dissimilar things

  • A metaphor compares two dissimilar things without using like or as

  • Personification speaks of concepts or objects as if they had life or human characteristics

  • Allusion is a reference to a person, place, event, or quotation that the writers assumes readers will recognize

  • Your purpose and audience determines whether you should use objective or subjective description

  • All good descriptive writing, whether objectives or subjective, relies on specific details

  • You should not tell readers, but show them

  • What factors influence the kinds of details you include?

    • Level

    • Background

    • Knowledge of your audience

  • Implied thesis describes a person, place, or thing

    • this conveys an essay’s main idea subtly

  • Explicitly stated thesis - supports a particular point

    • immediately what point the writer is making

  • Transitions:

    • Above

    • Adjacent to

    • At the bottom

    • At the top

    • Behind

    • Below

    • Beyond

    • In front of

    • In the middle

    • Next to

    • Over

    • Under

    • Through

    • Within

  • Dominant impression - the mood or quality emphasized in the piece of writing

  • What are the parts of a descriptive essay?

    • Introduction - presents the thesis or dominant impression

    • Body paragraph - includes details that support the thesis or covey the dominant impression

    • Conclusion - reinforces thesis or dominant impression (uses simile or metaphor)

  • True or false? The arrangement strategy you choose depends on the dominant impression you want to convey, your thesis, and your purpose and audience

  • What do you use in descriptive essays to describe places, people, and objects

    • Modifying words and Phrases

    • Misplaced modifier: appears to modify the wrong word because it is placed incorrectly in the sentence

    • Avoid dangling modifiers: it cannot logically modify any word that appears in the sentence

  • Checklist for Description:

    • Have you avoided misplaced modifiers?

    • Have you avoided dangling modifiers?

    • Have you used figures of speech effectively?

    • Have you avoided general words such as nice, great, and terrific?

Quiz 4 (Exemplification, 211-217)

  • Exemplification - uses one or more particular cases (examples) to illustrate/explain a general point or an abstract concept

  • The most effective exchanges occur when examples are used

    • Generalizations and vague statements are not as effective

  • Exemplification is used in every kind of writing situation:

    • Explaining and Clarifying

    • Add Interest

    • Persuade

  • What is the benefit of examples when clarifying?

    • Readers know what exactly you mean

  • What is the purpose of using examples to add interest?

    • To communicate your ideas

      • Use examples that are pertinent to your subject

  • What is the benefit of examples when persuading?

    • Back up your argument/prove your claim

  • What is an exemplification essay’s thesis statement?

    • Makes a point that the rest of the essay will support with examples

      • This statement identifies your topic

  • True or false? The examples you gather during the invention stage of the writing process can help you develop your thesis.

  • True or false? There is a rule for how many examples you should write into your essay?

  • The number of examples you use depends on your ______.

    • Thesis statement

  • What is a statistical study?

    • collection and interpretation of numerical data representing a great many examples

  • True or false? Selecting a sufficient range of examples is just as important as choosing an appropriate number

  • What is your objective when using examples?

    • Choose a cross section of examples

  • True or false? Do not use transitional words or phrases to introduce your examples

  • Transitions help you connect examples to thesis statements or examples to topic statements

  • Introduction

    • Thesis Statement

  • Body Paragraphs

    • Each has a separate example that develops the thesis

  • Conclusion

    • Reinforces main idea of essay, and maybe restates the thesis

  • What is the organizational problem with exemplification?

    • Can become too choppy or list-like

  • How to organize exemplification?

    • Chronologically

    • In order of increasing complexity (simple to most difficult)

    • In order of importance (less significant to more significant/persuasive)

  • What is an issue in editing exemplification?

    • Commas

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Patterns for College Writing

Quiz 1 (Pages 1-80)

  • Writing Process:

    • UNDERSTAND THE ASSIGNMENT

    • Invention

    • Arrangement

    • Drafting and Revising

    • Editing and Proofreading

    • Publishing/Turning it in

  • What part of the writing process must occur?

    • UNDERSTANDING THE ASSIGNMENT

    • Drafting and Revising

    • Editing and Proofreading

  • True or false? The writing process is a linear model, and all authors write in the order of the steps

  • True or false? Most good writing occurs when a writer gets stuck or confused, but continues to work until ideas begin to take shape

  • True or false? No two writers approach the writing process the same way

  • Critical Thinking: evaluating the ideas of others, to form judgements, and to develop original viewpoints.

  • True or false? Readers bring their own ideas to what they read when critical reading occurs

  • True or false? All interpretations of a reading are correct due to our differences

  • True or false? It is important for each reader to develop an interpretation that the work itself supports

  • What are active reading strategies?

    • Approaching an assigned reading with a clear understanding of your purpose and marking the text to help you understand what you are reading

  • Purpose: why are you reading this?

    • Will you be expected to discuss what you are reading?

    • Will you have to write about what you are reading?

    • Will you be tested on this material?

  • Preview: trying to get a sense of the writer’s main idea, key supporting points, and general emphasis

  • What clues should you look for when previewing?

    • Visual Signals

    • Verbal Signals

  • Visual Signals

    • Looking at the title

    • Looking for headings

    • Looking at each paragraph’s first sentence

    • Look for words in bold and italics

  • Verbal signals

    • Phrases like primary, that show emphasis

    • Repetition of words

    • Time sequencing words

    • Look for words the identify cause and effects

    • Words that introduce examples

  • True or false? Annotations suggest questions

  • After your questions have been answered, you will be able to answer with:

    • Greater accuracy

    • More confidence

    • More authority

  • True or false? When you annotate, you carry on a conversation with the text

  • What are visual texts?

    • Photographs

    • Diagram

    • Graph

    • Chart

  • True or false? Annotating a visual text can be helpful just like texts

  • What are visual elements?

    • Arrangement of shapes

    • Use of color

    • Contrast between large and small or light and dark

  • Questions to ask about visual texts:

    • Why was the visual created?

    • What kind of audience is it aimed at?

    • How would you characterize the visual?

  • Invention (prewriting): an important and most neglected part of the writing process; here you discover what interests you about your subject and consider what ideas to develop in your essay

  • If the assignment is written as a question, read it carefully several times and underline its key words

  • If the assignment is read aloud by your instructor, be sure to copy it accurately

  • Before writing, what should you consider?

    • What your limits are.

  • Limits in Writing:

    • Length

    • Purpose

    • Audience

    • Occasion: situation or situations that lead someone to write about a topic

    • Knowledge

  • True or false? Often, your audience is too vast to be categorized and is instead a universal audience.

  • True or false? Experts in one field need background information in other fields

  • True or false? General subjects do not need to be narrowed to specific topics

  • True or false? When you freewrite, you write for a fixed period, perhaps five or ten minutes, without stopping and without paying attention to spelling, grammar, or punctuation.

  • Focused free writing or looping: process of writing more and more specific freewriting exercises

  • Brainstorming: a way of discovering ideas about your topic

  • True or false? Journal entries are more narrow than free writing or brainstorming

  • Clustering: a way of visually arranging ideas so that they can tell at a glance where ideas belong and whether or not you need more information

  • Informal outlines do not include all the major divisions like a formal outline does

  • Thesis: main idea of your essay, its central point

  • True or false? A thesis statement can be a fact

  • Three Characteristics of an Effective Thesis Statement:

    • Clearly expresses your essay’s main idea

    • Communicates your essay’s purpose

    • Clearly worded

  • Implied thesis conveys an essay’s purpose, but does not do so explicitly

  • True or false? Most of the time, you should utilize an implied thesis

  • In arrangement, it is important to recognize the clues of what an assignment gives and structure it properly.

  • True or false? An essay must have an introduction, a body, and a conclusion

  • Introduction: introduces your subject, creates interest, and OFTEN STATES YOUR THESIS

    • Begin with background information - this works well if you KNOW THE AUDIENCE

    • Introduce an essay with your original definition of a relevant term or concept - USEFUL FOR RESEARCH PAPERS OR TESTS

    • Begin with a story

    • Begin with a question

    • Begin with a quotation

    • Begin with a contradiction

    • Begin with a fact or statistic

  • True or false? Each body paragraph should be unified

  • True or false? Sometimes the main idea of a paragraph is not stated but implied by the sentences in the paragraph

    • Professional writers often use this technique because a topic sentence may be awkward

  • True or false? Each sentence in a paragraph should develop the paragraph’s main idea, if not, the paragraph will lack unity

  • Each body paragraph should be coherent - sentences are smoothly and logically connected to one another

    • Repeat key words

    • Use transitions

    • Use pronouns

  • True or false? Support should be documented but not all

  • Each body paragraph should be well developed - contain support

    • Details

    • Expert opinions

    • Visuals

    • Facts

    • Stats

  • Support should be relevant, specific, adequate, representative, and documented

  • True or false? Each body paragraph should support the thesis statement

  • Conclusion: very important because it is what your readers remember last

  • True or false? Always end your essay in a way that reinforces your thesis and your purpose

  • True or false? A conclusion is usually longer than a paragraph

  • True or false? A conclusion can introduce points you have not discussed earlier

  • What are some ways to conclude your essay?

    • Reviewing your key points or restating your thesis

    • Ending with a recommendation of a course of action

    • Concluding with a prediction

    • End with a relevant quote

  • True or false? Formal outlines are detailed, multilevel constructions that indicate the exact order in which you will present your key points and supporting details

  • True or false? The complexity of your paper is what decides if you use a formal or informal outline

  • What is the purpose of your first draft?

    • Get your ideas down on paper so that you can react to them

  • True or false? While drafting, you should begin with a conclusion

  • Revision should occur simultaneously while writing

  • An outline can show you whether your essay follows a particular pattern of development

  • What can clarify the relationship between your thesis statement and your body paragraphs?

    • A formal or informal outline

  • How to critique your peers?

    • Positive

    • Tactful

    • Specific

    • Involved

    • Thorough

    • Look at the big picture

  • What suggests your essay’s purpose?

    • The occasion

  • Formal outlines are for arrangement, informal outlines are for brainstorming (invention)

  • Why is it not a good idea to write your introduction until you have already written your first draft?

    • A misrepresentation introduction that does not match the tone of the rest of the paper hurts your credibility

  • Formal outlines must use either subjects or topic sentences, not both

  • What is one way to narrow your general subject to a specific topic?

    • Question for Probing

      • Who did it?

      • Where did it happen?

      • What happened?

      • How is it made?

Quiz 2 (Narration, 97-108)

  • Narration: tells a story by presenting events in an orderly, logical sequence

  • Types of writing that follow narration:

    • Histories

    • Biographies

    • Autobiographies

    • Personal letters

    • Diaries

    • Journals

    • Bios on web pages/social networking websites

  • True or false? narration also underlies folk and fairy tales and radio and television news reports.

  • Anytime you tell what happened = narration

  • True or false? Narrative passages may also appear in essays that are not primarily narrative

  • What two essays does the textbook list as being alike to narrative?

    • Process Essay

    • Cause-and-effect Essay

  • True or false? A narrative essay is more likely to present a sequence of events for the purpose of supporting a thesis

  • Although it is usually best to have an explicit thesis statement in a narrative, what is a way you can have an implied thesis?

    • Through your selection and arrangement of events

  • What do narratives need to be convincing?

    • Rich, details to create a picture for the reader

  • What do details do for the audience of a narrative?

    • Adds interest and authenticity

  • What can you do to decrease the monotonous sequencing found in narratives?

    • Vary your sentence structure

  • What causes you to either follow or not follow a strict chronological order?

    • The purpose of your narrative

  • What are flashbacks?

    • Shifts into the past used in personal or fictional narratives to tell your story

  • Why is it important to use correct verb tenses and clear transitional words and phrases in narratives?

    • To help readers follow the order of events in your narrative

  • What is extremely important in writing that recounts events in a fixed order?

    • Verb tense

  • What verb tense must you use when discussing works of literature?

    • Present tense

  • What helps link events in time, enabling narratives to flow smoothly?

    • Transitions

  • What are transitions?

    • Connecting words or phrases

  • What are the transitions commonly used in narrative writing?

    • First

    • Second

    • Next

    • Then

    • Later

    • At the same time

    • Meanwhile

    • Immediately

    • Soon

    • Before

    • Earlier

    • After

    • Afterward

    • Now

    • Finally

  • Where will a narrative’s thesis appear?

    • Introduction

  • What do the body paragraphs function as in narrative writing?

    • Recount the events that make up your narrative, clearly and orderly

  • What does the conclusion do in a narrative?

    • Give the sense the narrative is complete, perhaps by restating your thesis or by summarizing key points/events

  • What ensures your statements in a narrative are easy to understand?

    • Exact details

    • Dates

    • Times

    • Geographic locations

  • What should a revision checklist be like for narrative essays?

    • Does your assignment call for narration?

    • Does your essay’s thesis communicate the significance of the events you discusseD?

    • Have you included enough specific details?

    • Have you varied your sentence structure?

    • Is the order of events clear to readers?

    • Have you varied sentence openings and combined short sentences to avoid monotony?

    • Do your transitions indicate the order of events and signal shifts in time?

  • What issues are particularly relevant to narrative essays?

    • Mechanics

    • Punctuation issues

    • Grammar

    • AVOIDING RUN-ONS

  • What are the two kinds of run-ons?

    • Fused sentences

    • Comma splices

  • A ___________ occurs when two sentences are incorrectly joined without punctuation?

    • Fused sentence

  • A ___________ occurs when two sentences are incorrectly joined with just a comma?

    • Comma splice

  • What are the 5 ways to correct a run-on?

    • Use a period to create two separate sentences

    • Join sentences with a comma and a coordinating conjunction

    • Join the sentences with a semicolon

    • Semicolon and a transitional word

    • Create a complex sentence - adding a subordinating conjunction or a relative pronoun

  • Narration checklist for editing?

    • Have you avoided run-ons?

    • Do your verb tenses clearly indicate time relationships between events?

    • Have you avoided unnecessary tense shifts?

    • If you use dialogue, have you punctuated correctly and capitalized where necessary/

Quiz 3 (Description, 151-161)

  • Description is used to tell readers about the physical characteristics of a person, place, or thing

  • What does description rely on?

    • Sight

    • Hearing

    • Taste

    • Touch

    • Smell

  • True or false? Description often goes beyond personal sense impressions

  • When you write description, you use language to create a vivid impression for your readers

  • What essays does the textbook list as description being used within?

    • Comparison-and-contrast

    • Argumentative

  • Through description, you communicate your view of the world to your readers

  • True or false? In almost every essay you write, knowing how to write effective description is important

  • Description can be objective or ____?

    • Subjective

  • In an _________ description, you focus on the object itself rather than on your personal reactions to it

    • Objective

  • In objective description, what is your purpose?

    • Present a precise, literal picture of your subject

  • True or false? In selecting some details and leaving out others, writers are making subjective decisions

  • True or false? Objective descriptions are sometimes accompanied by visuals

    • Visuals - diagrams, drawings, or photographs

  • True or false? A visual can introduce new material

  • What does subjective description do?

    • Conveys your personal response to your subject

  • True or false? In subjective description, your perspective is stated explicitly

  • Subjective description should convey not just a literal record of sights and sounds but also their significance.

  • True or false? Neither objective nor subjective description exists independently

  • The skillful writer adjusts the balance between objectivity and subjectivity to suit the topic, thesis, audience, and purpose.

  • Connotation: the feeling expressed by word

  • Denotation: direct and literal meaning of words

  • What are examples of figures of speech?

    • Simile

    • Metaphor

    • Personification

    • Allusion

  • A simile uses like or as to compare two dissimilar things

  • A metaphor compares two dissimilar things without using like or as

  • Personification speaks of concepts or objects as if they had life or human characteristics

  • Allusion is a reference to a person, place, event, or quotation that the writers assumes readers will recognize

  • Your purpose and audience determines whether you should use objective or subjective description

  • All good descriptive writing, whether objectives or subjective, relies on specific details

  • You should not tell readers, but show them

  • What factors influence the kinds of details you include?

    • Level

    • Background

    • Knowledge of your audience

  • Implied thesis describes a person, place, or thing

    • this conveys an essay’s main idea subtly

  • Explicitly stated thesis - supports a particular point

    • immediately what point the writer is making

  • Transitions:

    • Above

    • Adjacent to

    • At the bottom

    • At the top

    • Behind

    • Below

    • Beyond

    • In front of

    • In the middle

    • Next to

    • Over

    • Under

    • Through

    • Within

  • Dominant impression - the mood or quality emphasized in the piece of writing

  • What are the parts of a descriptive essay?

    • Introduction - presents the thesis or dominant impression

    • Body paragraph - includes details that support the thesis or covey the dominant impression

    • Conclusion - reinforces thesis or dominant impression (uses simile or metaphor)

  • True or false? The arrangement strategy you choose depends on the dominant impression you want to convey, your thesis, and your purpose and audience

  • What do you use in descriptive essays to describe places, people, and objects

    • Modifying words and Phrases

    • Misplaced modifier: appears to modify the wrong word because it is placed incorrectly in the sentence

    • Avoid dangling modifiers: it cannot logically modify any word that appears in the sentence

  • Checklist for Description:

    • Have you avoided misplaced modifiers?

    • Have you avoided dangling modifiers?

    • Have you used figures of speech effectively?

    • Have you avoided general words such as nice, great, and terrific?

Quiz 4 (Exemplification, 211-217)

  • Exemplification - uses one or more particular cases (examples) to illustrate/explain a general point or an abstract concept

  • The most effective exchanges occur when examples are used

    • Generalizations and vague statements are not as effective

  • Exemplification is used in every kind of writing situation:

    • Explaining and Clarifying

    • Add Interest

    • Persuade

  • What is the benefit of examples when clarifying?

    • Readers know what exactly you mean

  • What is the purpose of using examples to add interest?

    • To communicate your ideas

      • Use examples that are pertinent to your subject

  • What is the benefit of examples when persuading?

    • Back up your argument/prove your claim

  • What is an exemplification essay’s thesis statement?

    • Makes a point that the rest of the essay will support with examples

      • This statement identifies your topic

  • True or false? The examples you gather during the invention stage of the writing process can help you develop your thesis.

  • True or false? There is a rule for how many examples you should write into your essay?

  • The number of examples you use depends on your ______.

    • Thesis statement

  • What is a statistical study?

    • collection and interpretation of numerical data representing a great many examples

  • True or false? Selecting a sufficient range of examples is just as important as choosing an appropriate number

  • What is your objective when using examples?

    • Choose a cross section of examples

  • True or false? Do not use transitional words or phrases to introduce your examples

  • Transitions help you connect examples to thesis statements or examples to topic statements

  • Introduction

    • Thesis Statement

  • Body Paragraphs

    • Each has a separate example that develops the thesis

  • Conclusion

    • Reinforces main idea of essay, and maybe restates the thesis

  • What is the organizational problem with exemplification?

    • Can become too choppy or list-like

  • How to organize exemplification?

    • Chronologically

    • In order of increasing complexity (simple to most difficult)

    • In order of importance (less significant to more significant/persuasive)

  • What is an issue in editing exemplification?

    • Commas