Lecture Notes on Key Terms and Summaries
Definitions of Key Terms
- Kite (in context to "Battle of Athens"): Nickname for an airplane, suggesting lightness and agility.
- Hurricane (in context to "Battle of Athens"): British WWII battle plane, impactful in combat.
- Soggy (in context to "Battle of Athens"): Lacking perseverance, defeat, or weariness; a lack of firmness or resolve.
- Throttle (in aviation): Aggressively adjusting engine power to maneuver and control aircraft speed.
- Viperish: Like a poisonous snake, implying danger or aggression.
- Reptilian: Suggests coldness or lack of emotion, evoking snake-like characteristics.
- Vapid: Dull, or lacking in spirit or liveliness.
- God Journey: Personal spiritual exploration and relationship with God.
- Narrative: A self-written story, incorporating fiction/nonfiction, such as memoirs or autobiographies.
Summary of Key Events and Themes
Review Dahl's "Battle of Athens"
- Context: Set during WWII, focusing on pilot Dahl's experiences in the RAF.
- Events: Dahl's plane was ambushed and severely damaged by numerous German aircraft. He survived a dangerous landing, feeling shaken yet proud.
Review "Fish Cheeks"
- A girl named May is embarrassed by her Chinese cultural food traditions due to a crush on a white boy.
- She eventually embraces her cultural background and food's importance, a realization occurring during a Thanksgiving meal.
Review "My Mother's Garden"
- A girl is shamed by her family's poverty during class debates, despite her college-educated mother working to improve their situation.
- The garden symbolizes hope amidst struggles, while her hidden computer represents an escape. The once vibrant garden signifies loss.
- Mother: Determined and hopeful, dedicated to her daughters' future.
- Daughter: Experiences shame and seeks acceptance from wealthier peers, reflecting complex feelings about her family's socioeconomic status.
Writing Techniques and Concepts
Techniques to Speed Up a Moment
- Rapid Dialogue: Fast-paced conversations.
- Vivid Verbs: Strong action verbs conveying movement or emotion.
- Simultaneous Actions: Describing multiple concurrent actions to create urgency.
Definition of a Strong Verb
- A verb that conveys clear meaning without adverbs or excessive detail.
Rules for Comma Usage
- Inside quotation marks.
- After introductory words or phrases.
- Before conjunctions joining two independent clauses.
- To separate items in a series or list.
- Separating city and state.
Capitalization Rules
- First word in a sentence.
- Proper Nouns (specific people, places, organizations, events, titles).
Understanding Sentence Fragments
- An incomplete sentence lacking a subject or verb, failing to express a complete thought.
Characteristics of Vivid Verbs
- Strong, descriptive action words that evoke imagery and dynamic representation.
Distinguishing Showing vs. Telling
- Showing: Illustrates actions and emotions, creating vivid mental images and emotional impact.
- Telling: States facts directly, often lacking engagement.
Techniques for Slowing Down Moments
- Detailed Descriptions: Rich sensory details that make the reader linger, building tension and emotional stakes.
Definition of Figurative Language
- Use of words/phrases to convey non-literal meanings for dramatic effect (e.g., "Hungry as a horse").