war can be exhausting and the freezing conditions and the boredom are the real enemy
“merciless iced east winds that knive us”
“sudden successive flights of bullets streak the silence”
“is it that we are dying”
“slowly our ghosts drag home”
“but nothing happens”
Consistent rhyme scheme allows every fifth line to stand out which emphasises the overall messgae
consistency of the rhyme scheme and the stanza siz reflects the monotony of war
underlying feeling of unease created by the pararhyme
cyclical structure - but nothing happens
refrains throughout
Fear
effects of conflict
reality of conflict
nature
loss and suffering
conflict in wartime
Poems for comparrison
the charge of the light bridage