Semester Review for Final Exam

Sentence Fragments (p. 33)

  • A sentence fragment does not express a complete thought.

  • To correct sentence fragments, add what is missing so that the words make sense by themselves & express a complete thought.

  • Some sentence fragments have a subject & a verb but do not express a complete thought.

  • Correct these fragments by attaching the fragment to a sentence that comes before or after it.

Run-on Sentences (p. 36)

  • If you run together 2 or more complete sentences as if they were a single sentence, you create a run-on sentence.

  • Run-on sentences can be confusing because a reader cannot tell where one idea ends and another one starts.

  • You can correct a run-on sentence in several ways:

    • Rewrite a run-on sentence as 2 separate sentences.

    • Use a comma and a coordinating conjunction to join the 2 sentences.

      • Coordinating conjunctions are the joining words and, or, nor, but, for, so, and yet = FANBOYS.

    • Join the 2 sentences with a semicolon (;;). Use this method ONLY if the sentences are closely related.

      • Notice that the second part of the sentence does NOT begin with a capital letter.

Adding Details (p. 39)

  • Some sentences are ineffective because they repeat vague ideas or lack useful or interesting details.

  • Replace repeated ideas with new information.

  • Add specific details to expand short sentences and express an idea more clearly and completely.

    • The details can tell who, what, where, when, why, and how.

  • Avoid sentences that simply express opinions. They leave the reader asking why?

  • Add facts, statistics, examples, and other reasons to support your opinion.

  • Use sensory details to describe how something looks, sounds, smells, tastes, or feels.

  • Add details to various parts of your sentences.

Parallel Structure (p. 41)

  • In parallel structure, or parallelism, two or more words, phrases, or clauses are written in the same grammatical form.

  • When you combine sentences, check for parallel structure. Be sure to express similar ideas in the same way.

  • Writers use parallel structure to create balance and rhythm in their sentences.

Avoiding Wordiness (p. 44)

  • Avoid saying the same thing more than once.

  • Generally, avoid the unnecessary repetition of words.

  • Replace a long clause with a phrase, or a phrase with a single word or a few words.

  • Cut out all empty words/phrases that add little meaning.

  • Change verbs from the passive to the active voice.

Choosing the Right Word (p. 47)

  • Use precise language to explain your ideas clearly & to develop a lively style.

  • Replace vague, general words with precise, vivid ones.

  • Avoid cliches!!!!!!!!!

Cliches (p. 49)

  • Overused expressions.

Formal vs. Informal Language (p. 50)

  • Formal language is used when your reader is in a position of power/authority & you want to discuss a subject in a serious way.

  • Formal language used in academia

  • Informal language is used when your reader is a friend or family member or if you want to use casual conversation

Persuasive Speech (p. 52)

  • You develop an argument in which you state your opinion/claim & support it with logical reasons & relevant evidence

  • Precise opinion/claim

  • Supporting evidence/reasons

  • Formal style

  • Conclusion which supports the argument/claim.

Kinds of Sentences (p. 61)

  • Declarative – makes statement/ends with a period

  • Imperative – request or command/usually ends with period

  • Interrogative – asks a question/ends with a question mark

  • Exclamatory – expresses n feelings/ends with exclamation point

Varying Sentence Length (p. 63)

  • Too many short sentences are choppy

  • Too many long sentences are confusing & boring

Using a graph (p. 65)

  • Title of graph at the top

  • The labels on the side and bottom are used to represent data/information

Varying Sentence Beginnings (p. 66)

  • Use a variety of sentence beginnings

  • You can start with a subject.

  • You can start with a subordinate/dependent clause (use a subordinate conjunction to introduce it)

  • You can use transition words/phrases before the subject

Parts of a Research Paper (GC)

  • Sources

  • Index cards

  • Outline

  • Rough draft

  • Citing sources in text & works cited page

  • Plagiarism

  • Quotation vs. paraphrasing