Inventing the University

Introduction to David Bartholomae's Concepts

  • Education as Means of Discourse Access

    • Education serves as a tool for individuals in society to access discourse.

    • It is influenced by social conflict and political means of maintaining or changing discourse.

Invention of University Discourse

  • Students' Role in Creating University Discourse

    • Students must 'invent' the university or specific domains like History, Economics, etc.

    • They learn to adopt academic language and engage with various discourses throughout liberal arts education.

  • Requirement to Adapt and Shift Voices

    • Students often switch between writing as different academic figures (e.g., literary critic vs. psychologist).

    • They face challenges in appropriating specialized discourses.

Challenges Faced by Students

  • The Performance of Academic Discourse

    • Students often write as if they are comfortable and authoritative, imitating academic language despite lacking true familiarity.

    • Example of a freshman's essay illustrating basic writing attempts without deep knowledge of academic conventions.

Analysis of a Freshman's Essay

  • Student's Attempt at Academic Writing

    • Struggles with formal language and conventions while trying to convey creative thoughts based on an experience involving making a clay model.

    • Attempts to articulate ideas on creativity and processes but falls into conventional and simplistic expressions.

  • Authority and Voice in Essays

    • Students often unintentionally flip their roles, shifting from student to teacher in their conclusions.

    • Basic writers frequently lack authority and end up offering life lessons instead of academic arguments.

Commonplaces in Academic Writing

  • Definition and Importance of Commonplaces

    • Commonplaces are culturally authorized ideas that help organize and interpret experiences.

    • They shape the writer's approach to generating acceptable conclusions in essays.

    • Example of a mechanic's essay showing lack of academic language vs. simplistic life lessons.

Transition Between Voices

  • Role of Commonplaces in Successful Writing

    • Writers showing awareness of commonplaces are more successful in establishing their authority.

    • Students should be encouraged to use academic language rather than revert to personal or colloquial expressions.

Audience Awareness and Power Dynamics

  • Complex Problem of Audience Awareness

    • Students must tailor their writing to fit the needs of knowledgeable readers, typically their professors.

    • Communication in academic writing requires an understanding of power and privilege between students and faculty.

Strategies for Effective Communication

  • Exercises Aimed at Audience Construction

    • Typical classroom prompts often encourage writing for an audience unfamiliar with the subject, neglecting the student-teacher dynamic.

    • Students need to engage directly with their professor's body of knowledge to construct valid arguments.

The Problem of Appropriating Academic Discourse

  • Importance of Internalizing Discourses

    • Writers must self-reflect and navigate various discourses to claim authority.

    • Failure to do so results in mimicking language rather than understanding and applying it.

Identifying Strengths and Weaknesses

  • Evaluation of Student Essays

    • Essays often reveal varying levels of familiarity with academic conventions, with implications for student placement and further instruction.

  • Syntax and Expression

    • Strong syntax may obscure weaknesses in conceptual understanding or true engagement with discourse (e.g., a less complex but grammatically correct essay).

Conclusion and Recommendations

  • Recommendations for Teachers and Curriculum

    • Teach specific conventions and conduct analyses of student writing to identify gaps in understanding.

    • Encourage students to fully inhabit academic discourses, moving towards a more genuine engagement in compositions instead of merely replicating formats.