WK 12

Common issues with Comparative Essay Analysis:

• Referencing:

  • unclear, quotes aren’t fully engaged, formatting errors

• Vague thesis statement/no thesis statement/lack of argument

• Lack of casual explanations

  • “low lighting demonstrates Stoddard’s murderous intentions.” - but like how? be more specific, research and quote another persons explanation. Or describe the scene further

• Structure:

  • repetition, lack of developing argument, ideas considered in isolation.l