Notes on How to Write a Value Proposition

What is a Value Proposition?

  • A value proposition is a simple statement that summarizes why a customer would choose your product or service.

  • It communicates the clearest benefit that customers receive by giving you their business.

  • Every value proposition should speak to a customer’s challenge and make the case for your company as the problem-solver.

  • A great value proposition may highlight what makes you different from competitors, but it should always focus on how customers define your value.

  • Conversations around brand strategy and taglines should stem from a value proposition, but they aren’t one and the same.

  • A value proposition acts as a bridge between customers’ needs and your offerings; it’s a mantra that unites the two halves of the business.

  • Analogy: learning to write a value proposition is like laying a foundation for a house — you may not see it, but everything you do later rests on it.

Why bother learning how to write a value proposition?

  • It clarifies the way forward for your entire company when you’re intentional about aligning product/service value with customer needs.

  • It grounds strategic decisions and messaging in customer value rather than internal features alone.

  • It helps prevent scope creep or watered-down outcomes when too many voices try to shape it early on.

  • Practical guidance in this material emphasizes starting with a small team (no more than three people) to hone a few compelling options before broader adoption.

Three ways to write a value proposition

  • You can start with one method or try all three in a workshop to refine ideas with greater precision.

  • 1) Map out a value proposition canvas (Peter Thomson)

  • 2) Ask Harvard Business School’s essential questions

  • 3) Use Steve Blank’s formula to distill insights

1) Value Proposition Canvas (Peter Thomson)

  • Thomson’s canvas explores seven areas to connect business strategy and brand strategy from the customer’s perspective, aiming for minimum viable clarity and a one-sentence value proposition.

  • Viewpoints to cover: benefits of the product, how features improve the customer’s life, and the customer’s experience.

  • Focus areas when drafting:

    • Emotional drivers (wants) vs rational motivators (needs)

    • Fears (undesired outcomes)

  • When crafting, consider how a product affects a buyer’s perceived likelihood of failure, anxiety, or reputation at work.

  • A roadmap for articulating value uses Bain & Company’s 30 Elements of Value (and their B2B counterparts) as guidance on value dimensions.

  • Practical guidance: write with the customer’s perspective in mind; ask how features translate into pleasure or pain reduction and how the experience makes the customer feel.

2) Harvard Business School’s essential questions

  • Harvard argues the value proposition is the outward-facing element that connects the demand side (customers) with the supply side (operations).

  • Three prompts to brainstorm as a group:

    • Which customers are you going to serve?

    • Which needs are you going to meet?

    • What relative price will provide acceptable value for customers and acceptable profitability for the company?

  • Depending on your product, it may make sense to start with the first question, the second, or both.

  • The three questions form a triangle that guides toward a succinct value proposition; you move through them to identify your core offering.

  • Consider which leg of the triangle is the strongest value driver (e.g., cost savings vs. better product/experience vs. expanding the market to meet an unrealized need).

  • Example used: Apple’s iPad as a case where a new demand was created rather than just delivering a cheaper alternative.

3) Steve Blank formula for distilling insights

  • Steve Blank popularized a simple template to convert brainstormed insights into a concise value proposition.

  • Core idea: emphasize benefits, not just features; keep it simple and gut-driven.

  • Intuitive template (the Blank formula):

    • I help X do Y by Z

  • Example (from the text):

    • I help marketing teams to resonate with their target audiences by communicating with clarity and compassion.

  • Another example for a local coffee shop: We help our local customers to feel good and do good by fueling them up with artisanal coffee in a community-focused space.

  • Process advice:

    • Have team members draft individually, then compare results to surface priorities.

    • Draft in the language customers actually use to reduce the gap between what you say and what they hear.

  • Important reminder: the value proposition should reflect the customer voice, e.g., phrases like emails slipping through the cracks, to ensure resonance.

Language and voice: writing in the customer’s words

  • When you draft a value proposition, use the language your customers would use.

  • A proposition that mirrors customer vocabulary closes gaps between perception and reality.

  • The architecture of a value proposition often follows a pattern like: We help (X) do (Y) by doing (Z).

Six modern value proposition examples (demonstrating how strong propositions influence strategy)

  • Note: These examples illustrate how a strong value proposition can anchor a company’s strategy and market positioning. They are not exact internal taglines, but they reflect how value is perceived externally.

1) Slack

  • Core idea: Slack saves time by tearing down communication and systems silos.

  • Experience: An enjoyable alternative to the traditional email inbox and scattered tools.

  • Market impact: Fastest-growing SaaS startup ever; used by 77% of Fortune 500 companies.

  • Organizational note: Slack built a strong value proposition that allowed for a pared-down sales approach.

2) Bloom & Wild

  • Value: Online flower delivery that reduces friction and simplifies gifting.

  • Capabilities: Deliver in under a minute via mobile/desktop; flowers packaged in flat boxes for mailbox delivery; longer-lasting blooms.

  • Price/experience: Competitive pricing with strong customer experience; strong word-of-mouth marketing.

3) Airbnb

  • Dual-value proposition: Travelers gain a truly local experience; hosts gain extra income.

  • Positioning: Guests feel at home with local knowledge; homes offer character and neighborhood authenticity.

  • Brand evolution: From cheaper lodging to experience-driven with a premium option (Airbnb Plus).

  • Tagline alignment: Belong Anywhere.

4) Fjällräven

  • Core offering: High-quality, sustainably made outdoor gear balancing form and function.

  • Distinguishing factors: Own materials (G-1000) and Greenland Wax; durable products designed for lifetime use.

  • Audience: Conscious consumers who value sustainability and outdoor durability; allows premium pricing.

  • Brand promise: Craft products for a lifetime of memories.

5) Juniper Print Shop

  • Value proposition: Affordable design through accessible art.

  • Model: Content from Juniper Print Shop provides templates for affordable art; digital downloads and physical prints; cost-effective and easy-to-install.

  • Framing strategy: Recommendations like using affordable frames (e.g., IKEA) to keep costs down.

6) Found My Animal

  • Mission-driven value: Donates a portion of profits to animal rescue groups.

  • Product focus: Leashes and dog accessories built for rescue dog needs (durable); philanthropy integrated into marketing.

  • Social impact: The Rescue Orange Project; partnerships with nonprofits (64+ groups mentioned).

  • Customer appeal: Buyers feel they’re supporting animal welfare with quality products.

The best value propositions evolve with your customers

  • After establishing a value proposition, revisit it as customers and markets change.

  • Build feedback loops to stay informed about evolving needs and buying behaviors.

  • The goal is to keep the value proposition aligned with real customer value over time, not a static statement.

Practical implications and takeaways

  • Start small when building a value proposition; avoid trying to please everyone.

  • Use customer language and real-world problems to anchor your value proposition.

  • Employ multiple methods to cross-validate your thinking (canvas, Harvard prompts, Steve Blank template).

  • Align your value proposition with customer needs, price tolerance, and profitability considerations.

  • Leverage the three-question framework to keep the proposition concise, relevant, and future-ready.

Quick reference checklist

  • Does the proposition address a clear customer challenge?

  • Does it articulate the primary benefit in measurable or perceivable terms?

  • Is it focused on customer-defined value rather than internal features alone?

  • Have you tested the language with actual customers to ensure resonance?

  • Are you clear about the audience segments and the problem you’re solving for them?

  • Is there a plan to revisit and revise the proposition as customer needs evolve?

Real-world relevance and connections

  • The value proposition links operational strategy with outward-facing demand signals, aligning product, marketing, and customer experience.

  • It supports decision-making about pricing, product development, and messaging.

  • The approach aligns with foundational principles of value creation: reduce customer pain, increase customer pleasure, and deliver a credible, differentiated promise.

Mathematical notes and references

  • There are seven areas to explore in the Value Proposition Canvas (Peter Thomson): 77 areas.

  • Bain & Company’s 30 Elements of Value are used as a roadmap to articulate customer value (contextualized for both B2C and B2B).

  • Harvard’s three questions form a triangular framework for crafting the value proposition, with emphasis on customer segments, needs, and price/value tradeoffs.

  • A commonly cited statistic: Slack is used by 77%77\% of Fortune 500 companies.

  • The Steve Blank template for value propositions is: I help X do Y by Z.\text{I help } X \text{ do } Y \text{ by } Z.

Connections to broader principles

  • Value propositions are foundational to brand strategy, product-market fit, and go-to-market planning.

  • They reflect a demand-side lens, complementing internal operations and supply-side concerns.

  • Ethical and practical implications include ensuring claims are truthful, avoiding overpromising, and keeping promises aligned with actual customer experience.

Endnote on evolution

  • As markets evolve, the best value propositions remain adaptable, evidence-based, and consistently revisited through customer feedback and market signals.


What is a Value Proposition?

  • Defines why customers choose your offering.

  • Communicates the clearest benefit you provide.

  • Addresses a customer's challenge, positioning your company as the solution.

  • Highlights what makes you different, focusing on customer-defined value, not just competitors.

  • Unites customer needs and business offerings; it's a foundational "mantra."

Why Learn to Write a Value Proposition?

  • Clarifies company direction by aligning product/service with customer needs.

  • Grounds strategic decisions and messaging in customer value.

  • Prevents scope creep and diluted outcomes; start with a small team (1-3 people) to refine options.

Three Ways to Write a Value Proposition

  • Start with one method, or use all three for precise refinement.

    1. Map a Value Proposition Canvas (Peter Thomson).

    2. Ask Harvard Business School’s essential questions.

    3. Use Steve Blank’s formula to distill insights.

1) Value Proposition Canvas (Peter Thomson)
  • Explores seven areas to connect business and brand strategy from the customer's view.

  • Aims for one-sentence clarity.

  • Covers: product benefits, how features improve life, and customer experience.

  • Focuses on: emotional drivers (wants), rational motivators (needs), and fears (undesired outcomes).

  • Considers how a product impacts a buyer's perceived likelihood of failure, anxiety, or reputation.

  • Utilizes Bain & Company’s 30 Elements of Value as guidance.

  • Action: Write from the customer's perspective; link features to pleasure/pain reduction and customer feelings.

2) Harvard Business School’s Essential Questions
  • Connects demand (customers) with supply (operations).

  • Brainstorm three prompts as a group:

    • Which customers will you serve?

    • Which needs will you meet?

    • What relative price offers acceptable value for customers and profit for the company?

  • Forms a triangle guiding toward a succinct value proposition.

  • Identifies the strongest value driver (e.g., cost savings, better experience, new market creation).

  • Example: Apple's iPad created new demand, not just a cheaper alternative.

3) Steve Blank Formula for Distilling Insights
  • Emphasizes benefits, not just features; keep it simple and intuitive.

  • Template: extIhelpXextdoYextbyZ.ext{I help } X ext{ do } Y ext{ by } Z.

  • Example: I help marketing teams to resonate with their target audiences by communicating with clarity and compassion.

  • Action: Draft individually, compare, and use customer's actual language to ensure resonance (e.g., "emails slipping through the cracks").

Language and Voice: Writing in the Customer’s Words

  • Use the language your customers use.

  • Closes gaps between perception and reality.

  • Follows a pattern like: We help (X) do (Y) by doing (Z).

Six Modern Value Proposition Examples (Influencing Strategy)

These examples show how strong value propositions anchor company strategy externally.

  1. Slack: Saves time by tearing down communication silos; offers an enjoyable alternative to email. Used by 77%77\% of Fortune 500 companies.

  2. Bloom & Wild: Reduces friction in online flower delivery; offers flat-box mailbox delivery and longer-lasting blooms.

  3. Airbnb: Provides local experiences for travelers; offers extra income for hosts. Evolved from cheap lodging to experience-driven.

  4. Fjällräven: Offers high-quality, sustainable outdoor gear for lifetime use, balancing form/function through own materials (G-1000).

  5. Juniper Print Shop: Delivers affordable design through accessible art (digital downloads/physical prints) via templates.

  6. Found My Animal: Donates profits to animal rescue; sells durable leashes designed for rescue dogs; integrates philanthropy.

Best Value Propositions Evolve

  • Revisit your proposition as customers and markets change.

  • Build feedback loops to stay informed.

  • Goal: Maintain alignment with real customer value over time.

Practical Implications & Takeaways

  • Start small when building; avoid trying to please everyone.

  • Anchor your proposition in customer language and real-world problems.

  • Cross-validate using multiple methods (canvas, Harvard, Blank template).

  • Align with customer needs, price tolerance, and profitability.

  • Use the three-question framework for conciseness and future-readiness.

Quick Reference Checklist

  • Does it address a clear customer challenge?

  • Does it articulate the primary benefit clearly?

  • Does it focus on customer-defined value?

  • Have you tested the language with actual customers?

  • Are you clear about the audience and problem?

  • Is there a plan to revisit and revise it?

Real-World Relevance

  • Links operational strategy with demand signals.

  • Supports decisions on pricing, product development, and messaging.

  • Aligns with value creation principles: reduce pain, increase pleasure, deliver a credible promise.

Mathematical Notes and References

  • Seven areas to explore in the Value Proposition Canvas (Peter Thomson): 77 areas.

  • Bain & Company’s 30 Elements of Value guide value dimensions.

  • Harvard’s three questions form a triangular framework.

  • Slack is used by 77%77\% of Fortune 500 companies.

  • Steve Blank template: extIhelpXextdoYextbyZ.ext{I help } X ext{ do } Y ext{ by } Z.

Connections to Broader Principles

  • Foundational to brand strategy, product-market fit, and go-to-market planning.

  • Reflects a demand-side lens, complementing operational concerns.

  • Ensures truthful claims and alignment with customer experience.

Endnote on Evolution

  • Value propositions must remain adaptable, evidence-based, and consistently revisited through customer feedback.