Chapter 9 Delivery — Study Notes
Stand and Deliver: Introduction to Delivery
- Delivery is the act of presenting your speech and greatly affects how the audience receives your message.
- Example: Martin Luther King Jr.’s I Have a Dream demonstrates how crisp diction, controlled pace, and deliberate tone emphasize key phrases and arguments.
- A different delivery (disheveled, monotone, overlong pauses) can ruin a well-written speech, underscoring that delivery matters as much as content.
- The chapter frames delivery as a set of choices and practices you develop, building on everyday communication skills rather than creating them from scratch.
Speaking or Talking?
- Everyday talking vs. public speaking: public speaking requires training and practice; without it, anxiety can impede performance.
- Key obstacles to good delivery:
- Lack of formal training in public speaking.
- Anxiety about public speaking.
- Jerry Seinfeld joke used to illustrate how common public-speaking fear is:
- Public speaking is the #1 fear; death is #2 (humor underscores anxiety).
- People are comfortable talking daily, often underestimating how much public-speaking is a learned skill.
- Everyday communication already involves performance: greeting, giving directions, persuading, etc. Effective public speaking extends and refines this performance, not creates it from scratch.
- Cross-cultural communication example: greeting a French shopkeeper involves pronunciation, intonation, and nonverbal cues, showing that performance matters in delivering words.
Creating Focus and Energy from Your Anxiety
- The core challenge for most speakers is anxiety; strategies to convert that energy into focus and audience energy:
- 1) Remember—we are all in the same boat. Anxiety is universal; no one dies from it. Build a supportive, charitable audience culture.
- 2) Manage your expectations. Accept nervousness as normal; ask how to respond productively, not how to eliminate it.
- 3) Recognize that nerves can enhance performance. Channel nervous energy into excitement and enthusiasm; avoid dwelling on nervousness.
- 4) You don’t look as nervous as you feel. Visualize your nervousness as subjective; audiences pay attention to your message more than your nerves.
- 5–8: (items not shown in the provided transcript excerpt; note that several points in the sequence appear to be omitted in the scan)
- 9) Visualize success and believe in it. Mentally rehearsing a successful delivery helps manage fear.
- 10) Remember the audience is on your side; imagine you’re speaking to supportive listeners to reduce anxiety.
- 11) Act “as if.” You don’t have to feel calm to perform; act with confidence and your feelings often follow.
- Practical tips:
- Practice, breathe, and prepare; preparation itself reduces anxiety and increases confidence.
- Your topic should take precedence over nerves; your message matters more than your fear.
- Visualization and rehearsal reduce anxiety and improve delivery when combined with real practice.
Types of Preparation and Delivery
- Four main delivery modes:
- Speech from memory: memorize a written text and recite it from memory. Historically common, now rare due to accessibility of books/computers/teleprompters. Pros: spontaneity when done well; Cons: risk of forgetting material, sounding rehearsed.
- Manuscript speech: write and read aloud from a prepared script; politicians often use teleprompters to read at eye level for a natural appearance. Cons: reading without audience connection; potential robotic delivery.
- Extemporaneous speaking: rely on limited notes or an outline; most common formal speaking style; allows flexibility and audience adaptation; exact wording may be written for memorable metaphors/antitheses.
- Impromptu speaking: speak with little to no preparation; relies on on-the-spot structure and a stock of arguments/anecdotes; develops with experience.
- Exercise: Are you a better reader or speaker? Try delivering a 3-minute chunk from:
- Manuscript, then from notecards, then from memory.
- Track differences in delivery and review via video to understand how each method changes performance.
- Key terms:
- extemporaneous speech: a speech delivered from written notes or an outline.
- impromptu speaking: a speech delivered on the spot with little or no preparation.
Staying on Time
- Time management is essential for ethical, respectful public speaking; audiences have little patience for overlong speeches.
- Practical tips:
- If you have a set time limit, design and practice to stay within about 1 minute of the allotted time.
- Use time signals (fingers/cards) to monitor remaining time.
- Dangers by preparation method:
- Manuscript or memorized speeches tend to be time-consistent but can still vary in real delivery.
- Impromptu speeches require watching time closely because you create content on the fly.
- Extemporaneous speeches are most prone to overrun or run short if not well practiced.
Types of Speaking Aids
- Speaking aids help you stay on track without replacing your memory of content:
- Printed outline on 8.5" x 11" paper: easy to read; downside: you’re tied to the podium.
- Notes on 4" x 6" or 5" x 8" cards: can move around, use gestures, hold while walking; ensure font is legible.
- Outline content on cards: start from your outline; use a single word or phrase to cue points.
- Some content may be written verbatim in speaking notes for quotes, precise numbers, long-source names, or carefully crafted antitheses.
- You can customize notes with delivery reminders (e.g., color-coded dots for breath or eye contact). Common color schemes: main points blue, subpoints green, citations orange.
- PowerPoint slides: common aid; can function as extemporaneous notes; print slides and add delivery notes to slides.
- Writing and formatting tips:
- If using a manuscript without a teleprompter, ensure font size is large enough to read at a glance; double-spacing is common for readability.
- When printing outlines, uppercase lettering is common in scripts, though some find all caps harder to read.
- Example usage: use slides as a memory aid; when you know your material well, slides may be the only reminder you need.
Using Your Voice Effectively
- The voice is the most adaptable performance instrument; control over voice includes: volume, speed, articulation, and inflection.
- Volume:
- Must be audible for the room but not overpowering; adjust by room size:
- 5 ext{ to } 10 people: a natural conversational voice suffices; a “big voice” is unnecessary and distracting.
- 10 ext{ to } 50 people: speak up, project more volume, possibly slow pace a bit.
- > 50 people: use a microphone or a lapel mic if available; otherwise, avoid shouting; use diaphragmatic breath and proper resonance.
- Diaphragm-based breathing is essential for increasing air pressure and volume without throat tension.
- Avoid clavicular breathing (shallow chest breathing) and focus on breathing from the diaphragm for sustained volume.
- Resonance testing: place a hand on top of head and increase volume; you should feel vowel resonance in the head area as you go louder; adjust until resonance is felt.
- Speed (Rate):
- Typical conversational rate: 110 ext{ to } 150 words per minute; aim for slightly below conversational rate to optimize comprehension.
- Neuroscience insight (Peelle & McMillan, Brain and Language, 2004): processing of rapid speech shows the brain can compensate by engaging non-language areas; extremely fast speech can be understood with extra cognitive effort;
- Slightly higher-than-normal rate can convey competence but may also signal anxiety or manipulation depending on context.
- Pace guidance: speak just a bit slower than your normal rate to allow clear articulation; adjust for microphone/amplification in large rooms; slower pace helps back-row listeners.
- Pausing is essential for emphasis and clarity.
- Articulation:
- Clear pronunciation of sounds to ensure intelligibility; avoid slurring or over-enunciating ordinary words.
- Overenunciation (hypercorrectness) can be irritating; example: pronouncing every consonant in casual clusters can sound artificial.
- Aim for crisp articulation just above your normal level so distant listeners can hear clearly.
- Inflection:
- Inflection adds musicality and meaning; helps avoid monotone delivery; shape sentences by varying tempo, volume, and emphasis.
- Example of Lincoln's Gettysburg Address advice: place emphasis on nouns instead of prepositions to convey central meaning.
- Focus vs. contrast in emphasis:
- Focus: highlight the key word that determines what the sentence is about.
- Contrast: emphasize a word to signal what the sentence is not about.
- Practice with key sentences to discover which stresses best convey intended meaning; mark delivery cues on notes if helpful.
- Quick check: Try a segment of your speech with different rates and inflections; note how vocal qualities affect listener perception.
- Try-It prompt: Record yourself delivering a segment with an effective rate, then compare with monotone or over-articulated versions to observe listener impact.
Using Your Body Effectively
- Three aspects of physical delivery: standing, walking, gesturing.
- Standing:
- Stand straight and tall to project confidence and improve voice projection; avoid slouching.
- Hold notes at chest height if using a podium so you can see them without looking down; adjust pose if podium height is unsuitable.
- Keep chin up and shoulders relaxed to facilitate breathing and eye contact.
- Distribute weight evenly on both feet to avoid nervous fidgeting or foot-tapping.
- Walking:
- Movement can sustain attention and reduce tension, but avoid excessive pacing.
- When moving, come out from behind the podium to engage more directly with the audience.
- Find a balance between staying still and moving too much; maintain natural movement that matches transitions.
- Avoid tripping: walk with one foot in front of the other; plan paths to minimize missteps.
- Face the audience during movement; turn away briefly only when interacting with visual aids or transitions.
- Use movement to cue transitions: pauses and a few steps can signal a new point.
- Move front-to-back-to-front to visually mirror the speech structure (introduction, body, conclusion).
- Gestures:
- Gestures are highly individual; be natural and avoid forcing movement if you’re not a naturally expressive speaker.
- If you normally gesture, don’t suppress it; if you don’t gesture, don’t overdo it to fake expressiveness.
- Hands should stay in front of you or at your sides; avoid hiding hands in pockets or behind your back.
- Avoid distracting or overly deliberate gestures (e.g., holding up fingers for “two options” too clearly).
- If you’re using cards, keep hands around chest height to avoid neck strain when looking at notes.
- Dress and pockets can affect gestures; keep pockets clear to avoid distracting motions.
- Eye contact and presentation credibility (combined with body language):
- Eye contact signals engagement and credibility; begin with a pause and direct eye contact with the audience.
- Sweep the room to acknowledge different audience sections; connect with individuals who seem engaged.
- Don’t stare at one person; distribute gaze to create inclusion across the audience.
Communicating Credibility
- Eye contact is essential to convey engagement and credibility; fear or nervousness should not prevent you from making eye contact.
- Beginning with eye contact and a brief pause helps establish connection before you start speaking.
- Appearance contributes to credibility:
- Dress appropriately for the occasion so that attire supports your message rather than distracts from it.
- Clothes should be neat, clean, and unobtrusive; avoid apparel that draws attention away from the message (e.g., overly sexy outfits).
- Comfort matters: choose functional clothes; avoid hat during speaking; avoid noisy jewelry or accessories that may distract through sound or movement.
- The goal is to be taken seriously for your words, not for your clothing.
How to Practice Delivering Your Speech
- Rehearsal is essential for confidence, focus, and delivery refinement.
- Four practice runs is a recommended minimum; more practice improves fluency and reduces reliance on notes.
- Practice with a live audience when possible to incorporate feedback and simulate real conditions; if not, rehearse with a small, supportive audience (friends, classmates, family).
- Practice strategies:
- Practice the entire speech at least four times; early practices may rely on notes, later ones focus on voice, eye contact, and audience interaction.
- Practice with audience feedback and time checks to improve pacing and transitions.
- Practice making mistakes and recover smoothly: pause, breathe, and resume rather than apologizing or drawing attention to the error.
- If you slip, take a deep breath, pause briefly, and continue; avoid commentary on the mistake.
- Don’t rely on a mirror; practice with a real audience to focus on content and audience engagement rather than appearance.
- Breathing and pacing:
- Develop breathing routines to maintain energy and control; deliberate breathing helps you avoid running out of breath mid-sentence.
- Use diaphragmatic breathing to regulate pace and sustain vocalization.
Answering Questions from the Audience
- Public Q&A can extend a speech into a dialogue; be prepared to manage questions effectively.
- Anticipate questions by reviewing difficult topics, potential numerical details, and decisions you made during preparation.
- Interpreting questions (the question-behind-the-question): slow down, clarify the question, and identify the underlying concern to address it effectively.
- Techniques for answering:
- Treat the question as public: address the whole room; maintain an inclusive stance.
- Acknowledge the question with courtesy and appreciation; validate the question and the questioner.
- You don’t need to have all answers; if you don’t know, admit it openly and offer to find out or discuss later.
- Answer questions, not speeches: stay focused on the topic and avoid giving a lengthy tangent.
- If a question doesn’t advance the topic, you can redirect and connect it to your main points or suggest discussing it after the session.
- Handling a persistent or off-topic question: acknowledge, then steer back to the central message while offering to address the concern afterward.
- Benefits of dialogue with the audience: fosters engagement, demonstrates respect for audience perspectives, and enriches the presentation.
- Vocal fry and credibility: awareness of speech patterns (like vocal fry) is important, especially for younger speakers; excessive vocal fry can undermine credibility in some contexts; seek feedback and adjust patterns accordingly.
Group Presentations
- Group presentations involve coordinating two to six speakers and leveraging collective strengths to exceed the sum of individual performances.
- Keys to success: cooperation and coordination.
- Cooperation: collaborative preparation; strategy, planning, and alignment on content.
- Coordination: managing multiple speakers and transitions; ensuring smooth hand-offs and unified delivery.
- Planning steps:
- Agree on topic and purpose; consider audience relevance, constraints (time, technology).
- Division of labor: allocate tasks such as research, themes/arguments, organization, slides/technology among group members; ensure equal speaking times.
- Regular coordination meetings to share results and adjust goals/methods.
- Speaking times: allocate roughly equal time to speakers; minimize transitions to reduce disruption; avoid frequent shifts that feel choppy.
- Transition strategies:
- Relay presentation: sequential hand-offs where each speaker completes a piece and passes to the next; best when transitions are explicit and practiced.
- Master of ceremonies (MC): a designated person manages introductions and transitions; often easier for flow since MC orchestrates the handoffs.
- Transitions require:
- A strong preview of what’s coming next.
- Written transition notes; avoid ad-libbed transitions; practice is essential.
- Advantages and disadvantages:
- Relay: simple and quick; requires strong transition skills from each speaker.
- MC: takes more time but allows speakers to focus on content; reduces the burden on individual transitions.
- Delivering the group presentation:
- Maintain continuity across speakers; ensure consistent structure and style for audience coherence.
- Use uniform slides/handouts and copy the same organizational approach across sections.
- Rehearsing the group presentation:
- At least three full run-throughs to test timing, transitions, and coordination.
- Practice with technology and ensure everyone can operate it; designate backups for equipment.
- Common issues to diagnose in rehearsals:
- Overlong or overlapped speech portions; misaligned transitions; content overlap; inconsistent connections between parts.
- Summary of group work: success hinges on cooperation and coordination; structure and transitions should feel seamless to the audience.
Summary and Key Takeaways
- Delivery is a learned set of skills that can be practiced and refined to improve audience reception and credibility.
- Effective delivery blends voice control (volume, rate, articulation, inflection) and physical delivery (standing, walking, gesturing) with credible eye contact and appearance.
- Practice is essential: rehearse multiple times, simulate audience conditions, and prepare for Q&A.
- Group presentations require clear planning, coordinated execution, and practiced transitions to achieve a unified performance.
- Ethical considerations include staying within time limits and respecting the audience’s time.
Questions for Review
- What is the difference between speaking and talking?
- What are some techniques for turning anxiety into focus and energy?
- What makes a speaking voice effective? How is an effective voice produced?
- How can you use delivery to communicate credibility?
- Why should you practice? What makes practice effective?
- What factors should you consider in composing your part of a group presentation?
Questions for Discussion
- Find two TED Talks and compare their delivery; which is more effective for the topic and audience? Why?
- How do content, occasion, and audience expectations influence delivery choices? Provide examples.
- Why do you get nervous speaking? What is your best technique for managing it?
- For a chosen speech, generate five potential audience questions; could the speaker have anticipated most of them? Why or why not?
- What makes group presentations challenging? What makes them rewarding? Propose concrete strategies for your next group presentation.
Key Concepts
- appropriate clothes
- focus
- master of ceremonies
- articulation
- group presentation
- relay presentation
- contrast
- impromptu speaking
- speech from memory
- extemporaneous speech
- inflection
- eye contact
- manuscript speech
- (MindTap)