How to Read Like a Writer — Page-by-Page Notes (Pages 1–17)
Page 1
- Source: "How to Read Like a Writer" by Mike Bunn, a chapter in Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing, Volume 2. Open textbook series for the writing classroom.
- Availability and licensing: download from Writing Spaces, Parlor Press, and WAC Clearinghouse; Creative Commons license (CC BY-NC-SA 3.0 US) with terms of use noted at the bottom of the first page of the chapter.
- Publication data (cataloging info) included for context: Writing spaces: readings on writing. Volume 1, edited by Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky. ISBNs provided for paperback and ebook editions. (Useful for understanding the scholarly framing around RLW.)
- Purpose of the essay: introduce Reading Like a Writer (RLW) as a practical method for students to learn about writing by examining how writers make choices in their texts.
Page 2
- Personal anecdote sets the stage: In 1997, Mike Bunn, a recent college graduate, is in London for six months, working at the Palace Theatre owned by Andrew Lloyd Webber.
- The theatre context: a four-story (i.e., 4-story) red brick building in London’s West End, hosting a 3-hour performance of Les Miserables, eight times a week.
- Safety protocol and role: due to fire-safety laws, a certain number of staff must be inside during performances; Bunn’s role as a Red Coat is backstage-like security, though he lacks formal training or knowledge of fire extinguishers, leading to a humorous image of potentially fleeing down back stairs in a bright red tuxedo.
- Reading in the theatre: the four Red Coats sit on each floor, reading with flashlights to pass the time; reading in the dim light is difficult, requiring intense focus on each word and often rereading sentences or paragraphs.
- Key realization: Reading that environment made him notice that his own reading method (one word at a time) mirrors the way the author wrote the text; reading is a word-by-word, sentence-by-sentence process.
- Broader claim: Writing is a series of deliberate choices; the author’s craft shapes how readers respond; Bunn realizes he had not previously connected reading and writing as reciprocal activities.
- Personal growth context: even as an English major, he did not consciously think about how reading informs writing; RLW reframes reading as a tool to understand and improve one’s own writing.
- Core thesis introduced: RLW is about identifying the writer’s choices to learn how to apply similar techniques in your own writing, by analyzing not just content but how the text was put together.
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- Definition and aim of RLW: When you Read Like a Writer (RLW), you identify the writer’s choices to understand how those choices might arise in your own writing.
- The learning objective: read to learn about writing, not just to understand content; analyze how the piece was constructed and how those choices influence your own reading and responses.
- Process focus: as you read, you consider how the author’s choices and techniques affect potential readers (including you).
- Critical exercise: locate the most important writerly choices, from broad structural decisions to small, single-word choices that occur infrequently; imagine alternative choices and predict their effects on readers.
- Goal emphasis: RLW is about understanding how writing works and how you might emulate or adapt those strategies in your own writing.
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- Example prompt: you read an essay that begins with a quote from Barack Obama about the war in Iraq; as a writer, you evaluate the technique of starting with a quote.
- Variations to consider: what if the quote were from someone else, a longer quote, or about a different topic? Would these changes affect effectiveness?
- Practical exercise: create a list of pros and cons of starting with a quote, and consider how different readers (e.g., Democrats vs. conservatives) might respond to such a choice.
- Application for writers: the goal is to weigh the writerly technique and decide whether to adopt similar choices in your own writing.
- Practitioner insight: Wendy Bishop’s reflection on RLW—shifting from reacting to texts to interrogating how the writer elicited those reactions and conveyed intentions about genre and irony (pp. 119–120 in her work).
- takeaway: Understanding writerly choices helps students become more effective writers by learning how texts are constructed to achieve effects.
Page 5
- RLW vs “normal” reading: Most reading is informational (recipes, sports pages, history books, syllabi). RLW asks for something different: reading to understand how writing is built.
- Allen Tate’s two reading metaphors (1940): reading like a historian (trace origins, development) vs. reading like an architect (focus on construction, not just history). This duality captures RLW’s aim to study structure and craft rather than only content.
- Tate’s corollaries: as architects, readers must understand construction to build their own works; as historians, readers may focus on origins and context.
- David Jauss’s parallel metaphor: reading like a carpenter looking at a house to see how it was made; RLW aligns with this view by emphasizing examination of details to learn how it was built and how to replicate similar methods in one’s own writing.
- Terminology shift: RLW could be framed as Reading Like an Architect or Reading Like a Carpenter; the emphasis remains on construction and replication of craft in new writings.
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- Rationale for RLW’s value: RLW is typically new for many college students and may not be explicitly taught by instructors who focus on writing rather than reading.
- Practical benefits: RLW helps learners see writing as a sequence of decisions, enabling anticipation of choices they may face and techniques they might adopt in their own work.
- Moran’s perspective: Charles Moran argues that reading like writers allows us to understand and participate in the writing because we recognize the moves writers make and their consequences; readers who have written know the terrain and can anticipate moves.
- Self-identity as authors: Students bring prior writing experience, giving them an advantage in spotting writerly choices; this self-awareness aids in transferring RLW insights to their own writing.
- Closing encouragement: RLW turns reading into an opportunity to think and learn about writing rather than solely consuming text.
Page 7
- Before-reading questions from student insights (context matters):
- Alison: reading in college requires breadth and depth, with informed analysis and understanding of context.
- Jamie: importance of historical context.
- Richard Straub: reading within a specific context, audience, and purpose.
- Contextual factors to consider before reading:
- What is the author’s purpose?
- Who is the intended audience?
- Practical note: identifying purpose and audience may require reading first, but attempting to answer upfront helps evaluate writerly choices.
- Example application: understanding the opening quote about the Iraq war could be more or less effective depending on the author’s purpose and target audience.
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- Genre matters: Genre signals different conventions, which affect which techniques work best. Different genres require different expectations (e.g., poetry vs. legal briefs).
- Mike’s example: when reading philosophy, look for signaling words (however, therefore, furthermore, despite) to trace argument direction; in fiction or creative nonfiction, pay attention to dialogue, narration, and how authorial voice is used.
- Published vs. student-produced writing: RLW can analyze either published pieces or student-written work to understand writerly choices.
- Implication: the same RLW approach can be applied to both professional and classroom writing to learn techniques and adapt them to one’s own writing goals.
Page 9
- RLW’s applicability to writing tasks: RLW helps readers anticipate and imagine how techniques could be used to influence readers in their own writing.
- Nancy Walker’s stance: reading published work with RLW allows it to be seen as a living utterance with immediacy and texture; the text could have been better or worse had different choices been made.
- Value of imagining alternatives: thinking about how a text might change if different writerly moves were used helps you anticipate and plan for your own writing.
- Practical guidance: RLW is useful whether the text is a published piece or a student-generated one, and it connects to the kinds of assignments you will be asked to produce.
Page 10
- Practical questions for reading as a writer: Clare (a former student) emphasizes asking many questions while reading and imagining alternative directions an author could take.
- Core questions to guide RLW:
- How effective is the language? Is tone appropriate for audience and subject matter?
- What kinds of evidence does the author use (statistics, quotes, anecdotes, citations)? Are they effective?
- How does the evidence support claims, and would other types of evidence be more effective?
- Does the wording or the genre affect the reader’s interpretation? How do genre expectations influence what counts as evidence or argument?
- Note: the degree of scrutiny depends on genre; opinion columns often demand strong supporting evidence, while a short story may rely more on narrative technique than empirical claims.
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- Additional reading questions: transitions between ideas, clarity, and potential confusions in the writing.
- Emphasis on evaluating appropriateness and effectiveness of techniques, not simply liking or disliking them.
- Consider how other readers might respond to the techniques identified.
- Connection to writing practice: anticipate how readers will respond to your own techniques; RLW helps you test your craft from the reader’s perspective.
- Practice guidance: ask what the author is doing at each step, and whether the same choices could work in your own writing.
Page 12
- Practical note on annotating: the most common student recommendation is to mark up the text, write margins notes, and summarize ideas during and after reading.
- A concrete exercise: highlight the passage, identify the technique, evaluate its effectiveness, and consider advantages/disadvantages of applying the same technique to your writing.
- Outcome: building a personal catalog of techniques to draw from when you start writing your own pieces.
Page 13
- RLW in action: return to the opening paragraph and practice reading like a writer.
- Exercise setup: attempt to answer the pre-reading questions (author’s purpose, audience, genre, publication status, and potential applicability to your own writing) and then reread to refine your responses.
- Candid note: the author acknowledges “cheating” by already having read much of the essay, but uses this as a practice exercise for readers to repeat on their own.
- Four guiding questions to reassess after reading: purpose, audience, genre, and publication status, plus the potential for RLW to inform your own writing.
- Framing idea: RLW helps readers recognize writerly techniques that can influence readers and that might be useful in future writing projects.
Page 14
- Deeper reflection on opening details: why the author chose specifics (e.g., a famous London theater, a theater owned by a renowned composer) and what effect those details have on credibility, audience connection, and engagement.
- Why these details matter: details can anchor readers, establish credibility, and invite readers to participate in the author’s narrative.
- Questioning approach: consider how the piece would differ if details were trimmed or altered; what effect would that have on readers and on the author’s voice?
- Broader questions: how the opening frames the relationship between the writer and audience, and how it foreshadows the connection between personal experience and reading like a writer.
Page 15
- Analytical method for sentence-level choices: explore how word choice shapes tone and impact.
- Example: the phrase "antiquated fire-safety laws" versus alternatives like "old fire-safety laws" or "outdated laws"; examine how word choice signals attitude and affects reader perception.
- Language formality and audience considerations: formal language can create credibility or distance; more conversational language can enhance accessibility and engagement.
- Thought experiment: compare revised sentence variants to consider what is gained or lost by substituting words such as "staff members" vs. "employees" or "show" vs. "performance".
- Core question: which version is more appealing to readers? The analysis demonstrates how tiny word choices influence tone and reader reception.
Page 16
- Metacognitive takeaway: as you practice RLW, you’ll increasingly notice techniques automatically and selectively focus on new ones.
- Lola’s reflection on RLW: reading like a writer compels you to question why decisions were made, evaluate what worked or didn’t, and consider how to incorporate best attributes into your own writing.
- Reframed aim: RLW is about questioning, evaluating, and importing successful writerly strategies into your own writing rather than merely enjoying or criticizing texts.
- Readiness prompt: Are you ready to start reading in this way? The section ends with discussion prompts to deepen engagement and practice RLW in a classroom setting.
- Discussion prompts:
- How is RLW similar to or different from your usual reading in other classes?
- What writer’s choices might you identify in your own writing?
- Is there a technique you’d like to try in your own writing? When would you apply it?
- What strategies can you use to learn about a text’s context before you begin reading?
Page 17
- Works Cited: The page lists foundational sources that informed RLW and the broader discussion of reading like a writer, including Bishop, Jauss, Moran, Straub, Tate, and Walker.
- Purpose of the citations: situates RLW within a broader scholarly conversation about reading, writing, and pedagogy, reinforcing the theoretical underpinnings of the RLW approach.
- Concluding takeaway: RLW provides a practical, transferable framework for students to analyze texts, understand writerly decisions, and apply those insights to their own writing journeys.
Summary of Key Concepts Across Pages
- RLW is a deliberate practice: read with the goal of uncovering writerly choices (structure, word choice, tone, evidence, transitions) to learn how to write more effectively.
- Reading like a writer is a reciprocal activity: it helps you understand how writing works and, in turn, how to craft your own writing to produce desired reader responses.
- Context, genre, and audience matter: your evaluation of a writer’s choices should consider purpose, audience, and genre conventions.
- Practice and annotation are essential: mark up texts, pose targeted questions, and maintain a personal catalog of techniques to draw from in your writing.
- The opening paragraph as a case study: analyzing how authors craft openings (detail choice, tone, credibility) demonstrates RLW’s practical method.
- Metaphors for reading like a writer: architecture and carpentry metaphors help conceptualize how readers should inspect construction and replication in writing.
- Ethical and practical implications: RLW foregrounds reflection on reader response and the responsibility of writers to consider audience, genre expectations, and clarity.
- Form and content balance: decisions about formality, diction, and evidence influence readability, credibility, and persuasive power.
- Reflection and transfer: RLW aims to move students from reactive reading to proactive writing, enabling them to transfer observed techniques into their own work.
Notable Quotes and References (for study)
- Allen Tate on two ways of reading: historical vs. architectural perspectives on architecture (metaphor of two reading modes) 506.
- David Jauss on reading like a carpenter: examine details to see how it was made (reading like a builder) 64.
- Wendy Bishop on changing reading practice: from reacting to uncovering how writers achieve effects (pp. 119–120).
- Nancy Walker on literature as a living utterance and the potential for better or worse with different writerly choices (36).
- Moran on the advantage of reading like a writer: understanding the territory through prior writing experience (pp. 61).