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Workshop Philosophy and Policies
Overall goal: learn criteria that make a topic good, not simply to get topics “approved.”
Instructor will not pre-approve topics privately; critiques happen publicly so all can learn.
Each class begins with “How can I help you?”—students may raise topic-related questions then.
Pedagogical stance:
Students learn more from hearing many topics critiqued than from focus on their single idea.
Discussion must benefit whole class; private check-ins deferred to workshop time.
Meaning of life (instructor’s maxim): “Leave things better than you found them.” Every speech should do the same—audience must be better at the end.
Topic Selection Guidelines
Three diagnostic questions for any proposed topic:
Does the audience have an interest/need that will be served? (Benefit)
Does the speaker know more than the audience? (Knowledge gap)
Is the scope appropriate for the allotted time? (Narrowness)
Additional filters
Relevance to a university‐aged audience (e.g., Medicare is irrelevant; procrastination is relevant).
Novelty: must contain “news”—info the audience does not already know within minutes.
Practical payoff: audience should be able to apply, use, or at least clearly value the information.
Informative vs. Persuasive cues
Words like importance, benefits, advantages, why you should usually signal a persuasive purpose.
“How to” or process explanations tend toward informative.
Broad vs. narrow examples
Too broad: “Streaming changed viewing habits,” “Why traveling matters.”
Acceptable narrow versions: “How to find free/cheap travel options,” “Diagnosing alcohol poisoning,” “Setting a target heart rate.”
Expertise sources
Personal experience (e.g., owning an emotional-support animal).
Research and training (e.g., panic-attack identification).
Speaker Expertise & Audience Analysis
Expertise is earned via:
Identity/role (communication professor, student athlete, anxiety sufferer).
Formal training (psychology, medical certification).
Focused research (library databases, credible studies).
Student audience profile:
Age ≈20, likely strapped for time/money, tech-savvy, limited parenting/retirement concerns.
Likely to struggle with procrastination and speech anxiety.
Ethical responsibility: tailor content to help this concrete audience, not to flaunt obscure knowledge.
General & Specific Purposes of Public Speaking
Five general purposes (memorize):
Inform
Persuade
Entertain
Actuate
Celebrate
Specific Purpose Statement (SPS)
Grammatical form: infinitive phrase beginning with to.
Example: “To inform the audience how to stretch a hamstring.”
Must include: speech purpose + exact topic + audience reference.
Distinct from a mere title or question (e.g., “How to bake a cake” ≠ SPS).
Thesis Statement
One-sentence synopsis of entire body; “speech in miniature.”
Relationship rules
Thesis comprehends body: every main point appears in thesis.
Body exhausts thesis: nothing in thesis left undeveloped later.
Ex.: “There are two procedures for performing the Heimlich maneuver: one for yourself and one for another person.”
Outlining Fundamentals
Two functions of any outline
Sequence (Diachronic) – the temporal order (1 → 2 → 3).
Structure (Synchronic) – the logical hierarchy (main vs. sub-points).
Visualizing structure
Pyramid or tree better than a linear list; write main idea, subdivide, then develop each branch.
Only two structural relationships
Subordination: lower-level point supports higher-level point (line linking levels).
Coordination: points on same level jointly support a higher point (siblings).
Logical Outlining Principles (apply to every division)
Mutual Exclusivity
Parts share no material or conceptual overlap.
E.g., “Reptiles of North America” vs. “Reptiles of South America” are exclusive; adding “Reptiles of Western Hemisphere” violates exclusivity.
Parallelism
Parts share something beyond their link to the superordinate idea; often same grammatical or categorical type.
Two ways to achieve:
Symmetry (members match—three chronological steps).
Complementarity (members fit—self vs. other victim; adult vs. child).
Balance
Parts are of roughly equal importance; avoid a trivial item beside major ones (preheating oven ≠ gathering ingredients, mixing, baking).
Introductions
Audiences expect an intro; purpose: gather attention and focus on topic.
Key traits
Independent from body content.
Brief (≈ s for short speeches).
Give clear reason to listen (hook, relevance, curiosity). Avoid dropping the thesis inside.
Sample devices: vivid anecdote, relatable scenario, startling fact, direct link to student life.
Conclusions
Also expected; purpose: release audience and provide closure.
Guidelines
Must be independent from body—no new main points, but also no thesis repetition.
Should not open a bigger issue (“And reptiles are only one of seven biological families …” = bad).
Offer wrap-up, call to action, future implication, or tie-back to intro.
Transitions
Primary job: communicate outline structure so listeners can follow.
Three kinds
Subordinate Transition – signals start of a new division; moves “down & in.”
Often a preview: “First, we’ll look at North American reptiles …”
Parallel Transition – continues within same division; moves straight “down.”
“Now, another lizard common here is …”
**Superordinate Transition (Internal Summary