PLAN

Passage

A dedication OR journey to Africa

Autobiographical

Personal and reflective

List of adjectives

Image of suffering

Specific face never forget

Intrigues the reader to read on

Hyperbole & listing

To emphasize isolation of the town

Ghoulish

adj choice shows how the media feed of the death and suffering of others

Hunt, tramped

Lang choice shows predatory nature of job

No longer impressed us, the same old stuff

They have grown apathetic, dismissive tone and dehumanizing

Comfort

Provides a contrast

Language choice

Highlights the life and energy being dragged out

Simple sentence

Clinical tone

Anaphora & triplets

Death is so common it can be moved on from quickly

Appeals to senses and gives an intense image of the suffering

Repetition

Gives credibility and ethos

He feels ashamed by his reactions, but he is honest that it is a relatable feeling

Repetition

Preoccupation with that smile

Simple sentence

Epiphany on importance of smile

The journqlist observed

Reflective, dehumanizing and objectifying Somalis

(ironic, because the journalist is desensitized and passive)

Hyperbole

Shows how much he is affected by the face

Encouraging audience to reflect, through himself projecting to reader

Resolved

Shows determination to become active

Oxymoron

Considers the man a friend as he was taught a lesson by him

Dependent clause

Death is prevalent

Parallel sentence structure

The victims of suffering are subconsciously dehumanized

One sentence paragraph

Highlights the importance of the one face

Disjointed sentence (hyphens)

Indicates an altered mindset