Grammar and Composition Guide: Participles and Participial Phrases
Introduction to Efficiency and Multitasking
The concept of doing two things at once is frequently encountered and appreciated in daily life.
Common examples of unexpected multitasking include: - Spotting a bank across the street from a soccer game and realizing a deposit can be made at the same time. - Using a commercial break during a television show to go to the bathroom and grabbing popcorn on the way back to the couch.
In writing and speaking, "multitasking" occurs when we use specific grammatical structures to integrate more meaning and detail into a single sentence.
Overview of Participles
Verbatim Definition: A participle is a verb in the present or past tense that is used to modify a noun.
While participles can also be used to modify verbs, this lesson focuses exclusively on their function in modifying nouns.
Examples of Participles in Action: - "The barking dog annoyed me.": The word "barking" is a present participle modifying the noun "dog." - "I parked in the parking lot.": The word "parking" is a participle modifying the noun "lot." - "Laughing, the gymnast plopped down.": The word "laughing" is a participle modifying the noun "gymnast."
Practice: Identifying Participles
In the following examples, the participle is identified along with the noun it modifies: - "The caged dog…": The past participle "caged" modifies the noun "dog." - "…covered lot…": The past participle "covered" modifies the noun "lot." - "Exhausted, the gymnast…": The past participle "exhausted" modifies the noun "gymnast."
Introduction to Participial Phrases
Verbatim Definition: A participial phrase is a phrase that begins with a past or present participle that modifies a noun.
These phrases cannot stand on their own as complete sentences.
Examples of Participial Phrases: - "Barking throughout the night, the dog annoyed me.": The phrase "Barking throughout the night" starts with the participle "barking" and modifies the noun "dog." - "I found the student driver parking the car.": The phrase "parking the car" starts with the participle "parking" and modifies the noun "driver." - "Giving her body a rest, the gymnast plopped down.": The phrase "Giving her body a rest" starts with the participle "giving" and adds detailed information about the noun "gymnast."
Practice: Identifying Participial Phrases and Modified Nouns
Example 1: "Baked to perfection…" - Modified Noun: The beans.
Example 2: "…parked by the side of the road…" - Modified Noun: The car.
Example 3: "Exhausted from his errands, he…" - Modified Pronoun: He. - Note: This example demonstrates that a participial phrase can modify a pronoun (e.g., "he") just as it modifies a noun, and it is still classified as a participial phrase.
Application in Literary Nonfiction: The Coquina Clam Research
Participial phrases can be embedded into research writing to provide more detail and make the narrative more engaging and interesting.
Subject Example: The Coquina Clam.
Sentence 1: "Burrowing through the sand, the coquina clam ingests bacteria and algae." - Function: Adds detail describing what the clam is doing at the same time it is ingesting food. - Participial Phrase: "Burrowing through the sand." - Modified Noun: "coquina clam."
Sentence 2: "They serve as indicator species warning us of impending danger." - Participial Phrase: "warning us of impending danger." - Modified Noun: "species."
Sentence 3: "Invigorated by the waves, the coquinas began digging." - Participial Phrase: "Invigorated by the waves." - Modified Noun: "coquinas." - Function: Provides extra information about the state of the clams as they dig.
Sentence 4: "I returned to the beach protected by the coquinas." - Participial Phrase: "protected by the coquinas." - Modified Pronoun: "I." - Function: Gives more information about the speaker (the researcher).
Purpose and Benefits of Using Participial Phrases
Vividness: They make writing more vivid and descriptive.
Clarity: They allow the reader to see organisms or subjects in nature more clearly.
Engagement: They add "life" to writing, making it more interesting and full of meaning for the audience.
Integration: They allow for the seamless integration of detailed research into complex sentence structures.