class 2 descriptive essay

Definition: A descriptive essay draws a picture through words, allowing the reader to visualize the subject.
Importance of Topic Selection: Choose a topic that is tangible and observable, not abstract.
- Example of Poor Topics: Friendship – cannot be described with physical characteristics.
- Example of Good Topics: Physical objects such as a car, house, friend, or furniture.

Choosing Inappropriate Topics
- Focus on objects that can be seen and touched.
- Avoid abstracts that lack physical attributes.
Inadequate Description
- Mentioning items without detailed descriptions.
- Example Error: "In my room, there is a chair" - lacks detail.
- Improvement: Describe each item in detail before moving to the next.
Insufficient Detail
- Simply stating attributes (e.g., "a beautiful table") is inadequate.
- Provide comprehensive descriptions covering size, color, material, etc.
- Visualize all aspects of the objects to enhance clarity for the reader.
Improper Use of Verb Tenses
- Generally use present tense to describe current observations.
- Add past information after thorough descriptions if necessary.
Poor Language Style
- Avoid repetition and unnecessary sentences.
- Combine descriptive information into concise sentences for clarity.
- Example: “I have a red, round wooden table.”

Opening Paragraph: Should include a brief introduction to the topic.
Thesis Statement: Clear statement of what will be described; should focus on one topic.
- Example: "The picture of my mother has fascinated me..."

Each paragraph should focus on one aspect of the description.
Use coherent and logical order when describing characteristics.
- Emphatic Order: Start with the most important features to maintain reader interest.
Incorporate sensory details to create vivid imagery.

Element: Description of the Picture
- Features that resemble the writer.
- Aspect of clothing and jewelry.
- Potential error: Including narrative details should be avoided in descriptive essays.

Element: Contrast
- Starts describing diners positively, leading to the contrasting negative experience.
Descriptive Techniques
- Uses physical observations to convey feelings (e.g., quietness equating to loneliness).
- Summary: Each body paragraph reflects visual elements to illustrate feelings that cannot physically be described.

Reflection and Opinion: Should summarize main points without introducing new topics.
Structure: Briefly recapture main attributes highlighted in the body paragraphs and provide a personal closing thought or suggestion.

Always aim to evoke imagery through detailed descriptions.
Ensure all elements of writing are clear, concise and maintain coherence throughout the essay.