The Consequences of Conflict (Poppies)
What Were They Like
Silence: “There is an echo yet of their speech which was like a song”, “It is silent now”, “laughter is bitter to the burned mouth”
Pain: “their children were killed”, “All the bones were charred”, “there was time only to scream”
Nature (Flight/ Change): “delight in blossom…there were no more buds”, “peaceful clouds were reflected in the paddies”, “flight of moths in moonlight”
Poppies
Silence: “”I listened, hoping to hear your playground voice catching on the wind”, “released a song bird from its cage”
Pain: “sellotape bandaged around my hand”, “I wanted to graze my nose”, “blackthorns of your hair”
Nature (Flight/ Change): “released a song bird from its cage”, “a single dove flew from the pear tree”, “the dove pulled freely against the sky”
Differences
Poppies present the consequences of Conflict as personal, using pronouns such as “you”, “I” and “we”
What were they like presents consequences of Conflict as general, using pronouns such as “they”, and “there”