Essay Writing Guidance Notes

Thesis Statement

• Answers the question.
• Takes a position with evidence.
• Always includes "because".
• Uses strong, clear language with relative qualifiers: often, some, many, most, frequently.
• Avoids personal pronouns like "I" or "you"; uses universal language.
• Avoids mechanical phrases (e.g., "In this essay, I will…" or "in conclusion…").

Introduction Structure

• Starts with a hook (not too specific or broad).
• Relates to the reader.
• Provides context (introduces examples).
• Concludes with a thesis for the essay's roadmap.

Body Paragraphs

• Begins with an argument statement.
• Employs Bottom to Top method:
  • Connects personal examples to the topic.
• Avoids introducing new examples; focuses on existing knowledge.

Example Structure (PEEL Method)

• Point: State your argument (topic sentence).
• Evidence: Provide details or examples.
• Explanation: Summarize the connection to the thesis.
• Link: Wrap up the argument without concluding phrases.

Key Themes

• Importance of overcoming obstacles:
  • Reinforces cultural identity (e.g., "Borders" story).
  • Improves emotional regulation (e.g., "Inside Out").
  • Builds mental fortitude for independence.

Conclusion Structure

• Restate the thesis with detail.
• Connect the topic's relevance to the reader/world.