Grammer overview

Quiz Re-take Policy

  • The quiz was initially restricted to one attempt.
  • The system has now been adjusted to allow multiple attempts for students to achieve a perfect score.
  • The intention behind this change is to provide students with an easy opportunity to succeed.

Introduction to the Narrative Unit

Overview

  • Introduction to narrative writing components.
  • Review of common grammatical errors: sentence fragments, comma splices, and run-on sentences.

Week Two Additions

  • New resources added to the course platform:
    • Slideshow on narrative writing.
    • Slideshow on grammar issues (fragments, run-ons, and comma splices).
  • Acknowledgment that grammar may not be an entertaining topic; however, it is essential for writing.

Grammar Focus

Structural Components

Sentence Fragments
  • Definition: Incomplete sentences that lack a subject or verb.
  • Example: "At the Valencia Cafe" - this phrase does not express a complete thought.
    • Complete Sentence Example: "At the Valencia Cafe, Professor C bought a cup of coffee."
  • Importance of identifying components: Subject, Predicate, phrases.
Run-On Sentences
  • Definition: Combining two or more independent clauses without appropriate punctuation or conjunctions.
  • Example: "I love spaghetti. It's my favorite food." -> could be combined or punctuated to create clarity.
    • Correction: "I love spaghetti; it's my favorite food."
  • Emphasize the use of FANBOYS (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so) for conjunction purposes.
Comma Splices
  • Definition: Using a comma to improperly connect two independent clauses.
  • Common Mistake: “I love my mom, she’s my favorite person.”
  • Corrected: “I love my mom; she’s my favorite person.” or “I love my mom and she’s my favorite person."

Educational Activity

  • Worksheet provided to practice identifying sentence errors, though it will not affect grades.
  • Encouragement for students to be aware of intentional grammatical choices in creative writing.

Key Definitions

Complete Sentence

  • Contains both a subject and a predicate (the complete thought).
  • Subject: Who or what the sentence is about.
  • Predicate: The action or state of being in the sentence.

Phrases

  • Groups of words working together that lack a subject or verb.
  • E.g., "Because of the hurricane" does not stand alone as a sentence.

Practice and Correction Examples

Identifying Errors

  • Examples discussed in class to identify sentence types (fragments, run-ons, comma splices).
  • Importance of reconstruction:
    • Combine or separate sentences effectively using punctuation or conjunctions.

Intended Use of Grammar

  • Recognizing the role of errors in creativity vs. formal writing.
  • Examples provided for narrative scenarios illustrating how characters and styles affect storytelling.

Narrative Writing Components

Definition and Purpose

  • A personal narrative is a true story about individual experiences communicated through storytelling.
  • Lengthy narratives utilize stylistic elements that deepen meaning beyond mere reporting of events.

Storytelling Elements Explained

  • Plot: Sequence of events in the narrative.
  • Characters: Individuals involved in the story (the narrator and others).
  • Point of View (POV): First-person perspective important in personal narratives.
  • Theme: Central message conveyed through the narrative; examples include love, identity, justice.
  • Conflict: The challenge or struggle within the narrative; examples include character vs. self, character vs. character, or character vs. society.
  • Style: The unique voice of the writer; includes word choice, tone, and use of figurative language.

Detailed Examples of Narrative Elements

Personal Narrative Example

  • Example narrative reflecting on childhood experiences with bullying and overcoming challenges.
  • Experience shared in the narrative could convey themes like resilience or the importance of self-acceptance.

Conclusion and Next Steps

  • Questions regarding narrative writing will be addressed.
  • Emphasis on identification of grammatical concepts for successful writing in students' narratives.
  • Encouragement to explore personal experiences for narrative richness.

Resources for Further Study

  • Recommendations for external resources (e.g., Khan Academy, Purdue University) for additional grammatical practice before the quiz.
  • Reinforcement that understanding and correcting errors will aid in improving writing skills for narratives.