Grammer overview
Quiz Re-take Policy
- The quiz was initially restricted to one attempt.
- The system has now been adjusted to allow multiple attempts for students to achieve a perfect score.
- The intention behind this change is to provide students with an easy opportunity to succeed.
Introduction to the Narrative Unit
Overview
- Introduction to narrative writing components.
- Review of common grammatical errors: sentence fragments, comma splices, and run-on sentences.
Week Two Additions
- New resources added to the course platform:
- Slideshow on narrative writing.
- Slideshow on grammar issues (fragments, run-ons, and comma splices).
- Acknowledgment that grammar may not be an entertaining topic; however, it is essential for writing.
Grammar Focus
Structural Components
Sentence Fragments
- Definition: Incomplete sentences that lack a subject or verb.
- Example: "At the Valencia Cafe" - this phrase does not express a complete thought.
- Complete Sentence Example: "At the Valencia Cafe, Professor C bought a cup of coffee."
- Importance of identifying components: Subject, Predicate, phrases.
Run-On Sentences
- Definition: Combining two or more independent clauses without appropriate punctuation or conjunctions.
- Example: "I love spaghetti. It's my favorite food." -> could be combined or punctuated to create clarity.
- Correction: "I love spaghetti; it's my favorite food."
- Emphasize the use of FANBOYS (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so) for conjunction purposes.
Comma Splices
- Definition: Using a comma to improperly connect two independent clauses.
- Common Mistake: “I love my mom, she’s my favorite person.”
- Corrected: “I love my mom; she’s my favorite person.” or “I love my mom and she’s my favorite person."
Educational Activity
- Worksheet provided to practice identifying sentence errors, though it will not affect grades.
- Encouragement for students to be aware of intentional grammatical choices in creative writing.
Key Definitions
Complete Sentence
- Contains both a subject and a predicate (the complete thought).
- Subject: Who or what the sentence is about.
- Predicate: The action or state of being in the sentence.
Phrases
- Groups of words working together that lack a subject or verb.
- E.g., "Because of the hurricane" does not stand alone as a sentence.
Practice and Correction Examples
Identifying Errors
- Examples discussed in class to identify sentence types (fragments, run-ons, comma splices).
- Importance of reconstruction:
- Combine or separate sentences effectively using punctuation or conjunctions.
Intended Use of Grammar
- Recognizing the role of errors in creativity vs. formal writing.
- Examples provided for narrative scenarios illustrating how characters and styles affect storytelling.
Narrative Writing Components
Definition and Purpose
- A personal narrative is a true story about individual experiences communicated through storytelling.
- Lengthy narratives utilize stylistic elements that deepen meaning beyond mere reporting of events.
Storytelling Elements Explained
- Plot: Sequence of events in the narrative.
- Characters: Individuals involved in the story (the narrator and others).
- Point of View (POV): First-person perspective important in personal narratives.
- Theme: Central message conveyed through the narrative; examples include love, identity, justice.
- Conflict: The challenge or struggle within the narrative; examples include character vs. self, character vs. character, or character vs. society.
- Style: The unique voice of the writer; includes word choice, tone, and use of figurative language.
Detailed Examples of Narrative Elements
Personal Narrative Example
- Example narrative reflecting on childhood experiences with bullying and overcoming challenges.
- Experience shared in the narrative could convey themes like resilience or the importance of self-acceptance.
Conclusion and Next Steps
- Questions regarding narrative writing will be addressed.
- Emphasis on identification of grammatical concepts for successful writing in students' narratives.
- Encouragement to explore personal experiences for narrative richness.
Resources for Further Study
- Recommendations for external resources (e.g., Khan Academy, Purdue University) for additional grammatical practice before the quiz.
- Reinforcement that understanding and correcting errors will aid in improving writing skills for narratives.