The Unfinished Line - Notes

Scene 1

Introduces Kameryn Kingsbury, an actress, who almost hits Dillon Sinclair while driving, shortly after receiving a life-changing phone call from her agent, Aaron, announcing she landed a major role in a film called Sand Seekers.

Kameryn is driving back from her best friend Dani's wedding on Honokalani Beach.
She reflects on the call from Aaron, her agent, who excitedly informs her that she got the part in "Sand Seekers," a project expected to be as big as Harry Potter or Star Wars.
Aaron emphasizes the need for secrecy until the studio makes an official announcement.
Lost in thought, Kameryn accidentally clips a cyclist, Dillon Sinclair, with her rented Jeep Wrangler.
Dillon and her male companion, Kyle, are furious, unleashing a barrage of insults.
Kameryn is apologetic and overwhelmed, not knowing how to handle the situation.
Kyle reveals that Kameryn hit Dillon Sinclair, expecting her to be fearful; her name meant nothing to her.
Dillon offers to buy her a new bike.
Dillon Sinclair dismisses Kam as being a 'daft tourist'.

Scene 2

This scene explores the aftermath of Dillon Sinclair's accident and her mindset as a competitive triathlete.

Dillon, a highly ranked triathlete, reflects on finishing thirteenth in a race, which she deems unacceptable. The race occurred after getting hit by a car, but she refuses to use it as an excuse.
Despite physical injuries (road rash, bruising), Dillon remains focused on her career and winning a gold medal at the Los Angeles Olympics.
Her coach, Alistair, is back in London.
Kyle encourages her to relax.
Conversation with her teammate Kyle Wood; they discuss DNF (did not finish). Kyle jokes about the Los Angeles Olympics podium.
Flashbacks to her first coach, Henrik.
They make some bets on who'll win in LA.
Kyle reveals he saw the girl who hit her by the pool, and scared her into believing Dillon was going to make a complaint.
Dillon is mad at Kyle for meddling where he doesn't belong.

Scene 3

Kameryn and Dillon connect over the phone and eventually meet up for a pint after their initial encounter.

Kameryn considers pulling her phone chord from the wall so Dillon doesn't call her to yell at her again.
Dillon calls Kameryn to apologize for Kyle's behavior at the pool and offers to shake hands and call it a day over a pint.
They negotiate meeting for a drink.
They meet by the fountain, as per instruction to meet by, and Kam notes Dillon's physical appearance, including the severity of her roadside bruising and black eye.
After asking, Kam learns that Dhillon made that black eye while swimming with another race competitor.
Dillon drives Kam to a secluded shack where they have their meal and also discuss the bike collision.
The cyclist is revealed to be Dillon Sinclair.
During their conversation, Kam and Dillon determine that Dillon is gay, and determine that Kyle is an arsehole.
She asks Kameryn to have dinner with her again.

Scene 4

Dillon and Kameryn's connection deepens as they venture on a hike, sharing laughter and candid moments.

Dillon makes an excuse of "recovery swim" with Kyle to sneak off and go see Kam.
Dillon and Kameryn meet again and go for a hike.
On the hike up Ka'uiki Head, Kam face plants into a sourbush, and Dillon warns her about running into one of them again.
They discuss the bird sanctuary, how Dillon defied the gods.
Dillon shares a vulnerable moment.
Dillon asks Kameryn to go swimming with her.

Scene 5

Kameryn grapples with her unexpected attraction to Dillon, battling internal conflict and societal expectations.

The focus switches to Kameryn reflecting on the fact that Dillon had taken an interest in her.
Kameryn considers questioning her sexuality.
All is forgotten when Kameryn and Dillon meet and spend some more time, and end up eating Pineapple Kalua pork.
Kameryn googles Dillon Sinclair, and is impressed by her athletic achievements.
She asks Dillon, "what do you do?"
The conversation shifts to finding you attractive without all the added superficial extras.
Dillon seeks to kiss Kameryn.
Kameryn and Dillon have their first kiss.

Scene 6

Dillon abruptly returns to London, prompting internal struggles and external prodding from her best friend, Sam.

Dillon changes her Maui flight to London.
Kam cancelled, because there was an emergency. On her way in Los Angeles.
She is met at the bar. Sam reminds her this happened only two nights before, she calls Kam straight.
Sam is still straight, and doesn't understand the appeal of Dillon.
She called asking if Kam wanted to buy a pint.
Sam says to text Kam and make it known they are back in London.
Dillon is resistant to text Kam; she wants to wait it out.

Scene 7

Kameryn's Hollywood reality clashes with expectation as she faces scrutiny and objectification in her new role.

Kam attends a meeting with LR and Waylon MacArthur.
There is a conversation about casting Kam, they discuss Pugh being too tall.
The assessment was based on a glance.
Was this a jump test?
Kam wonders about sexism in Hollywood.
She starts to look for casting leads for old friends like marine biology.
Sophie reads a text from Dillon.
Sophie convinces Kam to pursue it with Dillon if there is a spark.

Scene 8

Dillon achieves victory in a race but finds her mind preoccupied with thoughts of Kameryn.

Dillon is driven to win, even without sponsor pressure or ranking consequence.
She is only annoyed with herself.
Dillon meets up with Alecia Finch by the beach; they discuss her winning in the Los Angeles olympics.
Alecia tells Dillon she is thought to be a Stuck Up Bitch.
She decides to come to the afterparty to appease them.
Comes down to thinking of the phone.
Dillon sends a text to Kam and gets a text back immediately; they set up plans to meet.

Scene 9

Kameryn, fueled by a mixture of fear and infatuation, embarks on an unexpected journey to Key West in search of connection.

Kam needs to go to Los Angeles, it turns out; it is important for her career.
She is actually deathly afraid of flying on water. She had to go on a small 4 engine plane.
There was one seat; she felt like Amelia Erhart.
Sophie tells Kam that they are already being thought of as psychos.
She runs into Dillon.
The two end up discussing her recent history; it is very nonchalant.
Kam reflects on how she enjoys having her and their time together away from social media.
There is a flirtatious tone as they drive together.
The pair agree to meet up for dinner; Kam admits that they have only texted as of recent.
- Dillon reveals an intense focus on balance - they like them a lot.
- She asks for and manages to get Kams phone calls.

Scene 10

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