Literary Devices and Narrative Techniques – Study Notes
Point of View and Narrative Perspectives
- Point of View (POV) comprises terms such as first person, third person limited, third person omniscient, and second person.
- The second person POV used to be rare because you are not typically the main character, but its usage is increasing.
- The speaker notes that students have helped him recognize that second-person stories can still have plot and relationships, not just a rhetorical device.
- Examples and instances:
- Children’s books and “Choose Your Own Adventure” titles as classic examples of second-person engagement with the reader.
- Fan fiction and other contemporary uses highlighted by students.
- Implications: POV shapes how readers relate to the narrator and characters; it can reframe agency, perspective, and intimacy within a story.
Sound Devices: Internal Rhyme, Alliteration, Rhythm, and Musicality
- Key sound devices discussed:
- Internal rhyme: rhymes within a single line.
- Alliteration: repetition of initial consonant sounds.
- Consonants and rhythm contribute to the musicality of a poem.
- Assessment reflections:
- Top performers identified examples of internal rhyme and alliteration in samples.
- There can be multiple valid analytic answers for how these devices function; the focus is on musicality and its relation to meaning.
- Relationship between sound and content:
- Several readers argue that musicality emerges as the speaker engages with the assignment, suggesting the speaker’s rising enjoyment or investment in the task.
- Sound devices can mark transitions between stanzas, indicating shifts in content or mood.
- Structural analysis perspective:
- Paying attention to how sound devices connect stanzas (e.g., first vs. second) falls under analyzing structure, including how form supports meaning.
Structure: Analyzing Stanzas and Narrative Flow
- Types of irony:
- Verbal irony: saying one thing while meaning another.
- Situational irony: outcomes defy expectations.
- Dramatic irony: the audience possesses knowledge that characters do not.
- Cosmic irony: a broader sense of incongruity between expectation and reality.
- Structural irony: the overall structure of a text creates gaps between appearance and reality; closely linked to how the narrative is framed and how readers know more than characters.
- Unreliable narrator:
- An inherently ironic device where the reader cannot fully trust the narrator; the text’s structure sustains this gap between what is presented and what is true.
- Example discussed: The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, where Huck’s limited morality and worldview reveal a gap between the reader’s knowledge and Huck’s understanding; the reader is asked to navigate this with the narrator.
- Structural irony in other works:
- Pulp Fiction is considered an example of structural experimentation with non-linear storytelling; whether it qualifies as structural irony depends on whether the narrative’s ordering produces a meaningful incongruity between appearance and reality.
- Analytical takeaway:
- In exams, you may be called to discuss how anaphora, caesura, and overall structure interact to create meaning; these devices often reinforce or intensify each other.
- Preparation note:
- Some terms (e.g., a few listed here) will not appear on Exam 1 but will reappear in later units (e.g., Anne Bradstreet’s The Author to Her Book) and in discussions of other poets (e.g., Langston Hughes).
Additional Terms Not on Exam 1 (for future units)
- Caesura (caesura): a pause within a line of poetry; can create a breath or break in rhythm; often marked by punctuation.
- Anaphora: exact repetition of a word or phrase at the beginning of successive lines or sentences; described metaphorically as "Beads of Brass" for emphasis.
- Apostrophe: addressing an abstract idea or a person who is not present (e.g., talking to the sun or death).
- End-stopped vs. enjambed lines:
- End-stopped: a line ends with punctuation that creates a natural pause.
- Enjambed: line continues to the next line without a natural pause, creating a sense of forward momentum.
- Prose vs. Drama:
- Drama: written for the stage, with dialogue and stage directions.
- Prose: broader category that includes narrative and non-narrative prose.
- Narrative vs. Non-narrative prose:
- Narrative prose tells a story.
- Non-narrative prose may present factual accounts or descriptive exposition without a plot.
- Creative nonfiction: a genre that blends factual life experience with literary storytelling; may involve composites or reordering time for narrative effect, which can raise questions about accuracy vs. artistry.
- Flash fiction: an extremely brief narrative with a defined length; standard range discussed is between 6 and 1000 words, though the boundaries are debated; the lower bound is often cited in relation to ultra-short forms like the “six-word story” tradition; the upper bound is a practical limit for a compact narrative.
- Contextual note: examples from poetry and prose (e.g., Anne Bradstreet, Langston Hughes) will be revisited in subsequent lessons to illustrate these terms in different periods.
Close Reading of a Short Story (Sample Text)
- Central characters:
- Narrator: educated, observant, and attentive to imagery; seeks acceptance and belonging within the group; exhibits self-conscious refinement and a sense of shame.
- Savitsky: commander; described as physically imposing and flamboyant (e.g., "breeches purple, crimson cap"), exuding both menace and stage-like presence; the narrator’s gaze projects his own vulnerability.
- Quartermaster: delivers the directive to house the new man among the group; frames the newcomer as having "suffered on the fields of learning"; this phrase is used ironically to critique pretensions of civility and education.
- Old woman: appears later in the text; part of the group dynamic introduced through the narrative.
- Cossack soldiers: present as a crowd; not individualized in the excerpt but crucial to the setting and tension.
- Central moments and rhetoric:
- The quartermaster’s line about the newcomer being someone who has "suffered on the fields of learning" uses sarcasm and verbal irony to critique education as a social credential rather than a real-leveling experience.
- The narrator’s description of the newcomer's first appearance uses heightened imagery and metaphor, signaling the narrator’s own literary ambitions and desire to interpret social situations with sophistication.
- The fart scene:
- Narrator notes that the new man chooses detailed, artistic phrasing to describe the crude act ("shameless sounds" and "dexterity"), which highlights the narrator’s conflicting feelings—both slight admiration and discomfort.
- The Cossack’s metaphor links the sound to a machine gun, transforming crude humor into a form of military imagery, reinforcing the story’s themes of adaptation, aggression, and social performance.
- The narrator’s attitude evolves from cautious optimism about fitting in to a more complex awareness of social hierarchies and personal limits.
- Narrative voice and self-presentation:
- The narrator’s self-portrait emphasizes literacy, sensitivity to language, and a desire to refine his own persona to gain acceptance.
- The lack of explicit biographical ties between the narrator and the author invites readers to infer whether the narrator is a stand-in for the author; external research is suggested as a way to confirm or challenge this assumption.
- Structural notes:
- The text’s pacing and the narrator’s close readings are used to reveal motivations and character development.
- The literal center placement (bottom of page 2,31 in a four-page story) is highlighted as a deliberate narrative structuring choice.
- Translation and language:
- The translator’s choices (e.g., rendering crude acts with euphemism) shape tone and audience reception; a Russian word problem is noted (the exact term for the crude act) and is acknowledged as a translation issue.
- Thematic connections:
- The story explores themes of belonging, social hierarchies, education as social currency, and the tension between self-identity and external expectations.
Exam and Future Readings: Strategy and Context
- Core exam focus:
- Irony (verbal, situational, dramatic, cosmic, structural) and their roles in shaping meaning.
- Structural analysis: how stanza-to-stanza variation, meter, and rhyme contribute to the overall interpretation.
- The concept of unreliable narrators and how structural irony can create gaps in knowledge.
- Broader thematic links:
- The relationship between form (structure, rhythm, and devices) and content (themes, character development, and mood).
- The interplay between literary devices (anaphora, caesura, end-stops) and narrative movement.
- Upcoming unit previews:
- Anne Bradstreet’s The Author to Her Book (early American Puritan poetry) will be studied for new uses of the devices discussed.
- Langston Hughes and other modernist poets will be examined for recurring devices across periods.
Flash Fiction and Narrative Boundaries
- Definition: extremely brief fiction with a concise arc and a complete narrative within a short word count.
- Length guidelines: between 6 and 1000 words; sometimes a single-line micro-story to a short piece; the upper limit is flexible depending on the course context and instructor.
- Purpose: to deliver a complete emotional or thematic impact within a tight frame; the boundaries can shift based on tradition and pedagogy.
- Close reading emphasis:
- Focus on how devices contribute to content, not merely on identifying terms.
- Consider why a device appears in a particular stanza or passage and why it changes (or remains constant) across sections.
- Idea of term proliferation:
- Some terms introduced in lectures (e.g., caesura, anaphora, apostrophe) will reappear in later texts and assignments; early focus is on core concepts, with expansion later.
- Contextual awareness:
- The instructor situates these devices within multiple texts across time, highlighting how historical context shapes form and function (e.g., Puritan poetry vs. modernist poetry).
- Practical note:
- Always consider translation choices when analyzing translated texts, as they can alter tone and nuance.
- Concluding reminder:
- The ultimate goal is to develop a robust, flexible toolkit for interpreting literature: how form informs meaning, how voice and perspective shape interpretation, and how context reframes our reading of narrative events.