PLAN

Title contrast

what perspective is she viewing Pakistan from. Polo is a sophisticated sport and a headless goat connotes violence, contrasting worlds the west

Wacky races

Comparison, from westener’s POV it’s a cartoon

Unorthodox actions

A sense of recklessness

Hyperbole

Create anticipation

Contrast

Technology in reflection of their worlds

Ambiguity & a wait

Builds suspense

Onomatopoeia

Creates a rising action and build up

Active verbs & onomatopoeia

reflects Chaos and excitement

Active verbs

Emphasise how chaotic it is

Paradox - hospital gate

Safety stands out against the danger

Irony, the trouble has been happening

Assumption

Western way of winning is by fairness, not by crowd

Personification

A looming threat

Perspective contrast

Again western vs local

Comparison to West

What is her tone ??

Listing

Builds anticipation and tension

Parenthetical

Lawlessness

Short sentence

Anticlimax, and juxtaposes the previously longer sentences

Rule of Three

Builds up tension

In hindsight

Their (predicament ??) could’ve been even more dangerous