Study Notes on Primary Sources and Slave Trade Narratives

A Brief Guide to Analyzing and Writing about Primary Sources

I. What Are Primary Sources?

  • Definition: Primary sources are documents and materials created by individuals who were eyewitnesses or participants in the events historians analyze to understand the past.

    • Types of Primary Sources:

    • Written Documents: journals, letters, newspapers, legal records, and government papers.

    • Visual Documents: photographs, films, and works of art.

    • Aural Documents: sound recordings and music.

    • Use in Historical Analysis: Historians rely on primary sources to reconstruct past events and provide evidence supporting their interpretations and arguments.

  • Secondary Sources: The essays, articles, and books historians write about historical events when they are not eyewitnesses or participants.

    • Example:

    • Primary Source: A journal from an English slave trader in 1693.

    • Secondary Source: A historian's book from 2001 interpreting aspects of the African slave trade using that journal.

II. How Do You Read and Interpret Primary Sources?

  • Understanding the Source:

    • Identify the topic or event.

    • Determine the involved individuals and their communications or actions.

    • Write a short summary of the source post-reading.

  • In-Depth Analysis:

    • Author:

    • Identify who created the source.

    • Study the author's identity and background.

    • Explore the purpose or motivation for creating the source and any influences of identity (place of origin, gender, race, social class, religion, etc.).

    • Audience:

    • Determine who the author intended to reach with the source.

    • Understand whether the author aims to persuade, describe, or inform the audience.

    • Analyze how the audience influences the author's interpretation.

    • Reliability:

    • Assess the source’s genuineness and reliability.

    • Examine what information is excluded and theorize why.

    • Evaluate if the author purposefully included or excluded certain details.

III. How Do You Write a History Essay Based on Primary Sources?

  • Step One – Formulate a Question and Argument:

    • Focus your topic and develop your thesis statement.

    • Identify the significant question your essay will address.

    • Outline what insights your essay provides regarding the topic and the significance of your sources.

  • Step Two – Provide Historical Context:

    • Situate sources within the relevant historical context.

    • Explain how significant events and forces influenced the source's creation.

  • Step Three – Analyze Your Sources:

    • Go beyond mere summarization and analyze the content and purpose of your source.

    • Reflect on the questions developed during the prewriting stage to support your thesis.

    • Begin each paragraph with a clear topic sentence summarizing the paragraph’s point of analysis.

  • Step Four – Provide Quotes to Support Your Points:

    • Use quotes judiciously to enliven and substantiate your discussion points.

    • Maintain a balance between quotes and your analysis; avoid quoting excessively.

  • Step Five – Make a Conclusion:

    • Conclude by revisiting and tying together your main points and reiterating the thesis.

  • Step Six – Cite Your Sources:

    • Follow the MLA format for citations, in-text references, and works cited pages. Consult relevant resources for guidance.

Attributions

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Excerpt from: Thomas Phillips, A Journal of a Voyage Made in the Hannibal of London, Ann. 1693, 1694 (published 1732).

Source Introduction and Summary:
  • Content: Captain Thomas Phillips describes interactions with an African king and his emissaries to acquire slaves.

  • Historical Context: Phillips’ ship was part of the Royal African Company, which dominated the West African slave trade.

  • Voyage Details:

    • Phillips’ ship sailed from England to present-day Benin to acquire 700 slaves.

    • Only 372 survived the trip to Barbados, a notably high mortality rate.

    • The average mortality rate for slave ships during this time was around 20%.

Excerpt: Phillips’ Journal
  • Interactions with the King:

    • King sent emissaries to welcome Phillips and his crew, reflecting negotiation customs and respect in trade.

    • Described as attending a customary evening meeting with the king on arrival:

    • King’s civility vs. actual dealings and deceit in negotiation.

    • The significance of respecting local customs to maintain favorable trading terms.

  • Trade Negotiations:

    • Goods and services exchanged with the king for slaves; prices contentious initially.

    • Negotiations included assurances against theft and fair pricing.

    • Included descriptions of a specific bell used to summon people for trading.

Social Dynamics and Health Concerns:
  • Phillips describes frequent illness among crew members and slaves, highlighting environmental conditions and diseases endured.

  • Accounts of psychological effects on Africans, including resistance such as suicide and mutiny, indicating the desperation felt among enslaved individuals.

Views on Race:
  • Phillips lamented regarding racial perceptions, highlighting a developing notion of color prejudice in his account, reflecting on humanity regardless of skin color.

Excerpt from: Olaudah Equiano, The Interesting Narrative of the Life of Olaudah Equiano

Overview of Chapter II:
  • Early Life: Description of Olaudah’s kidnapping with his sister, familial ties, and subsequent separation to depict the emotional trauma experienced during slave raiding.

  • Cultural Childhood: Raised in a family of significance, involved in cultural practices until disruption by captivity.

    • Narrative Elements:

    • Captivity experienced as horror, explored in detail regarding emotional and physical strains during transport.

    • Impressions of the slave ship highlight loss of autonomy and the transfer from one’s cultural identity to subjugation.

    • First Impressions of Slavery: Equiano's descriptions capture the stark contrast between African life and the horrors aboard slave ships, including dynamics among captives.