CES Letter – Comprehensive Video Notes
Background of the CES Letter & Author’s Approach
- Letter length: 83 pages; designed so that “you can read it in a day.”
- Licensing: Released under Creative Commons Attribution to encourage free distribution.
- Author (Jeremy Runnells) cites his deafness: writing became his primary, precise language; aims at concise, direct style (“boom-boom-boom”).
- Acknowledges intellectual debt to earlier critics/researchers—especially Gerald & Sandra Tanner (“Mormonism: Shadow or Reality?”) and others who exposed issues in the 1960s.
- Purpose when written: address a CES (Church Educational System) director and Runnells’s family.
- Guiding quotation he chose (J. Reuben Clark): “If we have the truth, it cannot be harmed by investigation; if we have not the truth, it ought to be harmed.”
Book of Mormon Concerns (Top Three + More)
- 1769 King James Version (KJV) errors
- explicit wording errors unique to the 1769 edition are replicated in the Book of Mormon (BofM).
- Analogy: 1769 errors = shell casings proving a 19th-century source.
- Sermon on the Mount (SotM) duplication
- Whole SotM appears verbatim in 3 Nephi despite being Jesus’s speech in Palestine.
- Joseph Smith’s later JST “corrections” of SotM never appear in BofM, implying BofM reflects pre-correction KJV.
- Italicized KJV filler words
- 17th-century translators added italic words to smooth English; those same italic strings (e.g., 7-word sequences) appear in BofM—problematic for an allegedly ancient text.
Additional items briefly flagged:
- DNA evidence vs. Lamanite claim (referenced to Simon Southerton).
- Anachronisms: horses, steel, tapirs (Daniel Peterson’s suggestion), coins with unknown names.
- Inconsistent BofM geography (Werner Hauck model mapped onto upstate NY; names like Lehi, Rama, etc.).
- Comoros/Moroni parallel: Island of Comoros (Arabic “Komorrah”) with port Moroni—famous in Captain Kidd folklore; Kidd stories circulated in Joseph Smith’s treasure-digging milieu.
Translation Method Shift
- Historical record: primary translation of published BofM done with a seer stone in a hat, not by using physical plates.
- Stone originally found in 1822 well-digging on William Chase’s property; ordinary rock, not Nephite artifact.
- Words allegedly appeared on stone; tight dictation (word didn’t disappear until pronounced correctly).
- Plates used only during lost 116 pages incident (Martin Harris)—if at all.
Alternative 19th-Century Source Texts
- View of the Hebrews (Ethan Smith, ) – parallel migration narrative, lost records, Hebrew origins, etc.
- The Late War (Gilbert J. Hunt, ) – pseudo-biblical style: “Now it came to pass…”; chiasmus; themes of righteous vs. wicked, standard of liberty, etc.
- First Book of Napoleon (Modeste Gruau, ) – biblical cadences mirroring BofM rhetoric.
- Spaulding manuscript referenced but not emphasized.
- “Everything is a remix”: Runnells & Johnson brothers argue Joseph used multiple overlapping sources plus KJV.
Possible Collaboration Hypothesis
- Oliver Cowdery: scribe for both BofM (1829–30) and Book of Abraham (1835-36); promoted “Philosophy of a Future State.”
- Motive for Cowdery’s later silence: preserving legal reputation; admitting fraud would destroy livelihood.
First Vision & Priesthood Narratives – Timeline Tensions
- Revival year: official narrative says ; historical data place regional revival .
- Accounts:
• handwriting: Single “Lord” (Trinitarian view), purpose = forgiveness of sins, Joseph already concluded churches were wrong.
• narrative (published ): Two personages, purpose = which church to join, “never entered into my heart” they were all wrong. - Age discrepancy: vs. years.
- Attempt to join Methodist Sunday School (8 yr after vision) contradicts “all churches abomination.”
Priesthood restoration:
- David Whitmer: claimed he first heard of Aaronic/Melchizedek priesthood after .
- Book of Commandments lacked priesthood stories later back-dated into Doctrine & Covenants.
- Contradiction with Book of Mormon: Alma baptizes without laying-on-hands authority; BofM omits priesthood offices/names.
Doctrinal Evolution Snapshot
- Early BofM & documents: Trinitarian language (God = Christ).
- By late 1830s: separate corporeal Father & Son, reflected in altered scripture passages, lectures on Faith edits, etc.
- Temple marriage, endowment, celestial plural marriage absent from BofM—introduced only in Nauvoo era.
Translation Track Record Beyond BofM
- Book of Abraham: Egyptian papyri translations proven incorrect; facsimile restorations used random glyphs rotated/flipped.
- Kinderhook plates : Smith stated they contained Jaredite descendant history; plates later shown
100\% 19th-century hoax. - Summary graphic cited: of 3 claimed ancient translations — Abraham, Kinderhook, BofM — only BofM lacks original for verification.
Polygamy / Polyandry Issues
- >30 wives; age (Helen Mar Kimball, Nancy Winchester).
D&C\,132 justification = “multiply and replenish … raise up seed.” Therefore intent = sexual.- Violated 1835 D&C statement mandating monogamy.
- Coercion tactics: salvation promises to families; threats of angels with drawn sword; parents pressured daughters.
- Polyandry: sealed to women already civilly married (e.g., Zina Huntington, etc.).
Cultural & Treasure-Digging Context
- Early 19th-century New England rife with Captain Kidd treasure legends, divining rods, seer stones.
- Smith family ran treasure-digging business; Joseph employed peep-stone for locating silver/gold for neighbors (for pay).
- Understanding this milieu is key to evaluating witness testimony & restoration origins.
Witnesses – Reliability Questions
- Three Witnesses never described seeing plates with natural eyes; many accounts describe “spiritual eyes,” “vision,” or plate-handling covered with cloth.
- David Whitmer letter: no knowledge of priesthood restoration events until mid-1830s; revelation narratives evolved later.
Letter’s Intended Function & Impact
- Not exhaustive scholarship—acts as a launch pad directing readers to primary sources.
- Runnells has received thousands of emails; common themes: marital stress, personal angst, gratitude for concise issue map.
- Motivational core: “save marriages & families” by promoting transparent history; personal childhood trauma over parents’ divorce makes him sensitive.
FAIR’s (LDS Apologetics) Response & Runnells’s Counter-Response
- FAIR tactics identified:
• Straw-man arguments (e.g., map access re: Comoros instead of Kidd folklore).
• Obfuscation & excessive complexity to deter lay readers (“read books by scholars first…”).
• Personal characterization (attention-seeking, relying on anti-Mormon sources). - Runnells’s reply (“Debunking FAIR’s Debunking”): more time-intensive than original CES Letter; includes donut graphs:
• Large proportion of CES issues unaddressed or conceded by FAIR; minority directly disputed. - FAIR silently altered web pages after his critique, validating some corrections.
Emotional & Practical Aftermath for Author
- Personal stress: late-night work, emotional weight of correspondents’ crises.
- Public reaction largely positive; few hostile emails (some from fundamentalists or ultra-believers).
- No security fears; perceives himself as ordinary person unexpectedly thrust into spotlight.
- Continues community service (e.g., Father-son campouts, helping with moves) despite disaffection.
Philosophical / Ethical Themes
- Transparency vs. “faith-promoting history”: call for institutional honesty.
- Appeal-to-authority fallacy: presence of believing intellectuals ≠ evidence of truth (analogous intellectuals in Islam, Catholicism).
- Simplicity of Gospel contrasted with requirement for advanced apologetic complexity—raises question
Numerical & Chronological Reference Quick-List
- Letter length: pages.
- 1769 KJV unique errors: in BofM.
- BofM timeline ending yet includes 18th-century KJV forms.
- Lost pages: .
- Key publication years: (Napoleon), (Joseph Sr. dream), (Late War), (official First Vision), (stone found), (View of Hebrews), (Methodist class attempt), (handwritten vision), (BoC), (D&C with priesthood), (new vision draft), (Times and Seasons publication), (monogamy clause removed).