Edited Paragraph on Career Choices

Choosing a career is difficult. I am torn between two fields. My best grades have been in math classes, and my father wants me to be an accountant. Accountants make a good salary; in addition, they are always in demand. My uncle is an accountant and has found good jobs in four exciting cities. I would like the security and opportunity of such employment. On the other hand, I dream of a different career. I have been working at a restaurant for four years. As a result, I have learned about the inner workings of the restaurant business. The job is tough; nevertheless, I would love to have my own restaurant. Everyone warns me about the huge financial risks and long hours, yet these challenges can be exciting. Someday, I will have to choose between a risky venture in the restaurant business and a more stable career path.