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Grading and Comments on Papers
- Instructor apologizes for the delay in grading papers due to personal illness.
- Offers brief comments on the papers instead of complete grades.
- Acknowledges gratitude for students' patience during this time.
- Purpose of comments: Help students understand the status of their papers and identify any issues or "red flags."
Grading Scale Explanation
- Thumbs Up:
- Indicates satisfactory to exceeds expectations (A and B range).
- No revision requests or suggestions for improvement.
- Detailed Comments:
- Suggests potential issues, likely reflecting a C grade or below.
- Comments may include explicit requests for resubmission or corrections.
- Invitation to Resubmit:
- If students received detailed comments, they are invited to revise their work based on feedback and resubmit for potentially improved grades.
Addressing Students' Concerns
- Expresses sympathy for academic anxieties regarding grading accuracy.
- Assures students that final paper grades will significantly influence overall course grades.
- Clarifies that it’s normal for students to feel concerned about grades, especially when they are heavily weighted in calculations.
Overview of Writing Skills Workshop
- Today's session serves as a writing skills workshop and overflow time.
- Reflects on previous class activities, highlighting the success of in-class "speedrun" papers as beneficial for practice and confidence.
Structured Activity: Creating a Hero's Journey
- Activity focus: Selecting the best examples from various texts to form a cohesive "Hero's Journey".
- Students required to gather texts covered in the course for this activity.
Hero's Journey Discussion
- Reintroduces the concept of the Hero's Journey as discussed in previous classes, specifically in reference to Odysseus in "The Odyssey."
- Characteristics of the Hero's Journey: Episodic nature reflecting Odysseus' adventures through various islands.
- Each episode represents a significant adventure or challenge in the journey.
- Episodic Literature:
- Describes how some literature, like works by Charles Dickens, was published in installments, similar to television series.
- Relates this publication style to oral storytelling traditions where stories were told in parts over time.
Examples Discussed in Class
- Various texts examined in class that relate to the Hero's Journey include:
- Odysseus & The Odyssey: Represents the classic Hero’s Journey.
- Cupid and Psyche: References the power of three tasks.
- Beauty and the Beast: Explored in the context of the Hero's Journey.
- Romeo and Juliet and Pyramus and Thisbe: Additional comparisons.
- Kissing the Witch Stories
Mosaic Hero's Journey Activity
- Students are split into two groups (odds and evens) to create their unique interpretation of a Hero's Journey using texts discussed.
- Each group will create a “mosaic” of the Hero's Journey using examples from various stories.
- Facilitates collaboration across both halves of the class, ensuring all aspects of the Hero's Journey are examined.
Selecting Evidence
- Emphasis on choosing the strongest evidence/quotes to support examples of different stages of the Hero's Journey.
- Encourages students to recall significant moments from the stories, illustrating various components such as the Ordinary World and Call to Adventure.
- Example provided:
- Ordinary World Examples:
- Cinderella cleaning the hearth.
- Belle’s life in the village before entering the castle in Beauty and the Beast.
- Ordinary World Examples:
- Students are reminded to discuss and collaborate effectively, enhancing their understanding of narrative stages.
Collaboration Encouraged
- Students are invited to work together during the activity to foster teamwork and peer learning.
- Encouragement from the instructor to actively consult each other and share insights about text selections and narrative stages.
Classroom Dynamics
- Open dialogue encouraged: The instructor invites questions during the session and allows for direct communication regarding paper feedback, ensuring clarity.
- Establishes a supportive environment for student interactions and discussion on narrative structures.