AP Language and Composition: Synthesis and Argument Notes
Overview of the Synthesis Task
Definition: Jim Jordan defines synthesis as a position paper that functions as a miniature research argument requiring the blending of material from multiple sources.
Requirements: Students must use material from at least sources to support a well-considered perspective on an issue.
Prompt Types: - Direct Argument: Developing a position on a specific claim. - Factors-Based: Identifying and weighing considerations stakeholders must evaluate (e.g., factors for regulating food trucks/museum curating).
Perspective: Students should identify the stakeholder perspective requested (e.g., city manager, government official) to avoid a generic "rant" mode.
Advanced Synthesis Strategies
Synthetic Reading: Instead of summarizing sources individually, students should look for concepts and claims that emerge across multiple sources.
Conversations of Sources: This involves linking sources within the same paragraph to show how they interact, agree, or disagree regarding a specific point.
Meaningful Citation: Beth Hall emphasizes the importance of clear citations and using fragments or snippets of quotes (under words) rather than long blocks of text.
Pre-Reading: Students should examine the titles, author credentials, and the italicized context sentence to understand the source's position before reading the body text.
The Argument Task (Question 3)
Context: An essay where students assert a position on an abstract concept or quote without provided source material.
Evidence Frameworks: - CHORES: Current Events, History, Outside Knowledge, Sports/Pop Culture, Reading, Science. - : Subject (school subjects), Society (media/pop culture), and Self (personal experience).
Evidence Quality: The reasoning/commentary is more vital than the evidence category. Sophisticated arguments can be made using personal anecdotes (e.g., sports, family stories) if the analysis is deep.
Avoiding Hypotheticals: Real-world examples are preferred over purely speculative or hypothetical scenarios.
Developing High-Level Commentary
Practical Connectives: Expand commentary by using the words "because," "in order to," "typically," "thus," or "implies."
The "Why" Factor: Commentary should explain how the evidence supports both the sub-claim (topic sentence) and the overall thesis.
Inference Building: Commentary serves to articulate the inference made from the evidence, essentially combining known experience with new knowledge.
Stasis Theory and Sophistication
Varying Claims: To achieve sophistication, Jim Jordan recommends varying the stasis of claims throughout the essay: - Claims of Fact: Often related to cause and effect. - Claims of Value: Evaluating if something is good, bad, or dangerous. - Claims of Policy: Providing a call to action or a solution.
Structural Choices: Effective writers often open with a claim of value and conclude with a claim of policy (a call to action) rather than a summary conclusion.
Variance: Avoiding formulaic repetition and utilizing intentional transitions, colons, and dashes to strengthen the force of the argument.
Questions & Discussion
How to cite properly? Beth Hall notes that while readers try to match un-cited quotes to sources, explicit citation makes the process much more reliable for scoring.
Is it okay to use a quote from a source that generally disagrees with your point? Jim Jordan explains that you can use specific segments of a complex source as long as you do not misrepresent the source’s overall stance.
What about faking evidence? While readers do not fact-check under the timed pressure of the $40$ minute task, misrepresenting well-known historical facts or being overly dramatic can hurt student credibility (Ethos).
Time management? While $40$ minutes is recommended, students can take more time to plan and outline, as a $35$ minute draft with a plan is often superior to a $40$ minute draft without one.
Proper Nouns and Contacts mentioned: - Speakers: Tim Freaddis (Garden of English), Beth Hall (Coach Hall Writes), Jim Jordan (Sacred Heart San Francisco). - References: Dr. Brandon Abden, Dr. Mary Newton, Alexi Dart (Moderator). - Events: AP Exam on May , Reading in Cleveland.