Rising Action Notes

Rising Action

  • The excerpt discusses rising action as a part of narrative structure, and emphasizes that rising action by itself is inadequate.
  • It asks: what causes the action to rise? what makes suspense build?
  • Answer provided: suspense is built by a number of complications or obstacles that the characters have to deal with.

Key idea: suspense is driven by obstacles and complications

  • Obstacle-based suspense: The presence of multiple hurdles creates tension and keeps the audience engaged.
  • Complications can accumulate, increasing the effort the characters must expend to achieve their goals.

Conflict as the engine of rising action

  • The easy formulation given: the goals of the characters come into conflict.
  • Conflict is not limited to internal goals; it also involves confrontation with outside forces.
  • This combination of internal and external conflict drives the action upward toward a crisis.

Internal vs external conflict

  • Internal conflict: differences between characters' goals, desires, or decisions.
  • External conflict: characters clashing with outside forces (societal pressures, antagonists, nature, institutions).
  • Both forms of conflict contribute to rising action and escalate tension.

Crisis point

  • The escalating conflict creates a crisis point.
  • The crisis point will have to give somewhere along the rise, implying a release or turning point in tension.

Structure of the middle of the story (the rising action)

  • The middle is described as rising action, whose rise is caused by the conflict the characters face.
  • This rise builds toward a crisis point.
  • There are two parts to the middle: discovery and climax.

Discovery

  • Discovery is one half of the middle; it involves new information, revelations, or realizations that affect the direction of the plot.
  • Significance: discoveries intensify the stakes and can alter characters' goals or the nature of the obstacles.
  • Examples (conceptual): a hidden motive, a new ally, or a crucial clue that changes what characters think they must do.

Climax

  • Climax is the second part of the middle after discovery, representing the peak of the action and the moment of highest tension.
  • It is the turning point where the established conflicts reach their highest intensity and a decisive outcome is on the horizon.

How this fits into broader narrative structure

  • The described sequence aligns with common narrative models where rising action leads to a crisis and then to a climax.
  • Related framework: Freytag’s Pyramid (Exposition, Rising Action, Crisis, Climax, Falling Action, Denouement).
  • The emphasis on both internal and external conflict mirrors how stories balance character development with plot propulsion.

Practical implications for writing

  • Ensure obstacles are meaningful and tied to character goals, not arbitrary.
  • Use both internal and external conflicts to deepen stakes.
  • Build towards a clear crisis that creates a turning point, followed by a climactic moment.
  • Plan where discoveries occur to shift the direction of the plot and escalate tension.

Illustrative example (hypothetical)

  • A character aims to finish a project on time, but a series of setbacks (supplier delays, miscommunications, and a competing rival) block progress.
  • The goals clash (character's desire for speed vs. need for accuracy) and external forces intervene (supplier, rival).
  • The accumulation of obstacles raises tension, leading to a crisis (deadline approaches with unresolved issues), followed by a discovery (new information about the rival’s plan) and a climactic resolution (the character makes a pivotal choice or reveals the truth).

Quick reference formulas (conceptual)

  • Let obstacles be a set O with each obstacle o having impact f(o). Then the total conflict can be represented as:
    F=<br/>oOf(o)F = <br /> \sum_{o \in O} f(o)
  • A crisis occurs when the total conflict reaches a threshold T:
    C=FTCrisisC = F \ge T \quad \Rightarrow \quad \text{Crisis}
  • Rising action continues to increase until the crisis; then the plot reaches the climax.

Summary

  • Rising action is generated by multiple obstacles and conflicts that escalate suspense.
  • Conflicts arise from both characters' goals and outside forces, yielding a crisis.
  • The middle of the story contains two stages: discovery and climax, which drive the action toward resolution.