Notes on Writing Body Paragraphs and Conclusions

Guide to Writing Body Paragraphs

• Topic Sentence:
  • Clear connection to the thesis.
  • Acts as a mini-thesis for the paragraph.
  • Example: "The characters' initial belief in the power of romantic love serves as a poignant, albeit ultimately futile, attempt to assert their humanity and autonomy."
• Explanation and Analysis:
  • Provide context and explain significance related to the thesis.
  • Analyze how the point supports the overall argument.
• Textual Evidence (Quotes):
  • Use two pieces of textual evidence per point.
  • Integrate smoothly and follow with explanation and analysis.
  • Example quotes:
  • "I was thinking about deferrals…"
  • "If she really is a possible…maybe we'll be able to prove we're a proper couple…"
• Linking Sentence/Transition:
  • Facilitates smooth flow between evidence or emphasizes points.
• Concluding Sentence:
  • Reinforces topic sentence and connects to thesis.
  • Example: "However, these hopes are ultimately dashed…"

Guide to Writing Conclusions

• Restate the Thesis:
  • Rephrase thesis in conclusion.
  • Example: "In conclusion, Never Let Me Go presents a complex portrayal of romantic love…"
• Summary of Main Points:
  • Brief reminder of key arguments from body paragraphs.
  • Example: "Ishiguro reveals how the characters’ belief in love is undermined…"
• Final Thought/Clincher:
  • Provides closure and leaves a lasting impression.
  • Example: "Never Let Me Go both challenges and perpetuates the idea of romantic love…"

Summary

• Body Paragraphs: Focus on clear topic sentences, strong evidence, and thorough analysis.
• Conclusions: Restate thesis, summarize main points, and end with a powerful thought.