Writing Shop

no paragraph should be longer ½ a page double spaced

situate the reader at the beggining

you have to discuss the importance of the matter

there is a gap inn the literature (as) keyyyyy

it is your job to communicate and why it is important

you are saying heres the gap this is what im adressing

problem that occurs introduction

thesis

traditonal gang enforcement strategies fail to address the complexities of this social problem, as it disproportionately enphasises carceral means. This model of enforcement (re)produces structural inequalc and social harms that fail to address the underlying factors.

rhe end is what is called the roadmap expalin what each section is going to do

it leads your reader into knowing what it is you are going to read and gives a logical path

iterature review you are summerizing

you could quote other people definitions giving all info that could be needed. to address social signials, usecoded language history on the topic

academic articles were assigned have literature reviews

you are the expert it is your job to provide information that need to be knoen

literature review you are summerizing

big heading is centre

and left for for sub they have to be named

for every body youre writing a mini essay

little thesis for section and argument within

traditional models of gang enforcement that rely on state actors not only fail to address the complex structural and individual factors that shape gang involvement, but they reproduce in equalities that manifest hte conditions for future gang membership

add sub topics

familial disruption

give evidence

quantatative stats

qualitative research research

both

dont use govenment souces

summerize themes of the researched

use 2-4 souces multiple and talk about a couple studies

multiple sources in a singke citation

fatsis has and eg

never use the word prove

you are cumincating why the evidence shows the poin

you rinse and repeat

explain why this supports the work youve done

dont leave anythiing up to chance state it

red and blue is one paragraph

you have to be able to critically think

rosenclear discusses that the sytem is designed to fail

you always have cto com why your opnions matter

you have to show significance

social harms

ttrauma

alienation of main stream institutions

significance

you can keep or leave the orange

pizza eg

its just talking about how to make pizza lol

your heading are your toppings

you dot need the 3 bodies

quatity is not qualility

ALWAYS DO SIGNIFICANCE

you can right significance

if you do a theory section it goes in your literature review

or before

write things single space first double at the end

highlight heading and highlight see if theres remove space get rid of the extra space between paragraph

youre allowed to sparingly use pictures has to be sourced

applicable for anything that applies an argument

intro

lit review

theoretical framing